|The story itself has a good plot and there is something to write about, if you know what I mean.
The introduction itself wasn't very impressing. You could have started with describing Tom and Christina. The story has lack of dialouge and very few details. Also you have a basic spelling mistakes: 'Several months had PAST but he couldn't find a way to tell her how he felt about her.' i think that must have been 'passed'
You might think I am rude at criticizing like this. I have been criticized too, here on Writing.com. I think being shown where you have went wrong helps you learn from your own mistakes.
If I were you, I would revise the story and see how I would make it sound better.