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Review of Nine One One  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Angus, thank you for your entry in the
FORUM
The Comedy Club Contest  (18+)
A Contest For The Funny Side Of Life. OPEN FOR NOVEMBER ROUND
#1965952 by GeminiGem
.

Ha ha I was not expecting that ending! Poor Humpty.

Thank you.

Sanita

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Review of The Valentines  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello chickpea a.k.a. Patricia Syner , how are you? I have just read your poem," The Valentines," which I found on the random reviews, and thought I would leave some comments.

What a lovely poem. At first I thought it was going to be about a secret admirer, but the fact it is your husband made it even nicer.

A lovely read, thank you.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello SandraLynn, how are you? Thank you for your entry in the, "The Comedy Club Contest

This remind me of the trip I take to take my son to University and back. I hate long journeys, especially on the motorways.

Thank you for a fun read.

Good luck.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Jess. how are you? Welcome to WDC.

Thank you for your entry, " A Tale Of Growing Up," in the "Invalid Item


Poor Charlie! I think he should have taken his imaginary friend with him.

A good little story and you managed exactly 100 words.

Well done and good luck.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello JustPeachy , thank you for your entry, " Image Of Perfection," in the "Invalid Item

I enjoyed this little poem. We all think we have to have these perfect bodies and perfect faces, when really none of that matters.

Great poem and a good rhythm and rhyme.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of Drinking  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Chris, thank you for your entry, " Drinking," in the "The Comedy Club Contest

Gosh, my head hurts just reading this. I try to limit my drinking, but you are right, we carry on doing it knowing we shall feel ill the next day!

Funny little poem.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of Alive?  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello michaelk2, thank you for your entry. "Alive," in the "Invalid Item .

I rather enjoyed this. Usually I am not keen on long poems, but I found this one quite a fascinating read.

Quite a frightening prospect, to be buried while still alive.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of The Grind  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello michaelk2, how are you? Thank you for your entry, "The Grind," in the "Invalid Item .

Well he has a pretty good job, although I am not sure I would like the hang overs either!

A fun little read and well written.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of Ashes and Ashes  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello JustPeachy , how are you? Thank you for your entry, "Ashes And Ashes," in the "Invalid Item .

A sad little story. Nice description and imagery in this one.

A good use of the limited 100 words.

Well written.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of War Drum  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kerri J. Miller , how are you? Thank you for your entry, "War Drum," In the "Invalid Item

Nice imagery in this little war story. I think after the contest you could add to this , it would make a very good read.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello Sans Peur, thank you for your entry, "Carrots And Sticks," in the "Invalid Item .

An unusual description of schizophrenia. However, not having any experience of it I would not know how to describe it.

I wonder by your description, " The all-to-true story of many people with schizophrenia in America." Do people who have it in other countries differ then?


A few grammatical mistakes. for example: " I couldn’t eat no more," should be, "I
couldn't eat any more."

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of A-mused  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sabaka, thank you for your entry, " A-mused," in the "Invalid Item

I must say I enjoyed this little story, a very good read. It was almost poetic. A nice little twist at the end.

Very well written.

Thank you and good luck.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Winter's Touch  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kerri J. Miller, thank you for your entry, " Winter's Touch," in the "Invalid Item .

I like short poems, I think a lot can be said in a few words. You certainly said a lot here. A short. sharp, crisp description of winter.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of A MANLY THING?  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello DRSmith, thank you for your entry, A Manly Thing," in the "The Comedy Club Contest.

This is so funny, I really enjoyed reading it.

The rhythm rhyme is perfect.


Crafty lady, leaving him dangling.

I am not sure I would have been so brave as to compete!

Thank you and good luck.

Great poem.

Sanita
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Review of Acceptance  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Beykirah Dessie, how are you? A belated welcome to WDC. I hope you are enjoying your time here so far. I have just read your monologue, which I found on the random reviews, and thought I would leave some comments.

This is very true, we cannot change anyone except ourselves. We are all unique.

The only suggestion is the word its , for example in this line:" Its not up to me to try to change her, its up to me to love and support her. The only person I can change is me." Its should have an apostrophe, "it's".

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of What am I?  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello T.L.Perkins, how are you? WElcome to WDC. I hope you enjoy your time here. I have just read your poem, "What Am I?" which I found on the random reviews, and thought I would leave some comments.


I thought this a lovely little poem and how very true. A simple thing like love can cause all of this.

I loved the rhyme.

An enjoyable read.

Sanita
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Review of not sure.....  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello dragon pixie, how are you? Welcome to wdc, I hope you enjoy your time here. I have just read your prologue, which I found on the random reviews and thought I would leave some comments.

This sounds like it would be an interesting story. Super powers, secrets and lies, what better ingredients for a story. So in answer to you question, yes I would like to read more.

Keep writing.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello SandraLynn, how are you? Thank you for your entry," My Own Timely Death," in the "The Comedy Club Contest

This is a funny poem but also quite sad really. Unfortunately it happens to us all in the end.

Thank you for a great read and good luck.

Sanita
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Review of Witchdraft  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Silent_tears, how are you? Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item .


There many poems written about writers block and given the title writers block. So I am glad to see you have been more imaginative.

An enjoyable poem with rhyme.

Thank you.

Sanita
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Review of No Cure  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Jen, how are you? Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item .

I enjoyed this poem. How true, doctors think medication will fix everything, but of course that is not always the case.

An enjoyable read.

Thank you.

Sanita
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Review of Crushed Lemon  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello KS66, how are you? Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item .

I enjoyed this little story with a bit of comedy thrown in at the end. Actually we have howling winds here at the moment, but I do not have a car to worry about.

A great use of the 100 words.

Thank you.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello AsmaHosna, how are you? Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item .

A lovely little spiritual story. I like to think there really are angels about us.

You did a good job of making it an exact 100 words.

Thank you.

Sanita
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Review of Splayed Fingers  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello JD Obermeier, how are you? Thank you for your entry the the "Invalid Item .

A nice romantic little story. I love the use of the word pinkies! I did not think many people understood pinkies, Ha ha.

A great use of the 100 words.

Thank you.

Sanita
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Review of The Climb  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello AJJamieson, how are you? Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item .

I found this quite a cute little story. Suspense at first wondering what it was all about, but then realised a child wanting her mummy to watch.

Thank you, a good use of the 100 words.

Sanita
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Review of November  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sabaka, thank you for your entry,"November," in the "Invalid Item

Your poem describes the month of November perfectly.

I love the rhythm and rhyme. it is good to read a rhyming poem as it seems to be going out of style. Personally I think a poem is not a poem unless it rhymes.

A great read.

Thank you and good luck.

Sanita
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