|Hello Beykirah Dessie, how are you? A belated welcome to WDC. I hope you are enjoying your time here so far. I have just read your monologue, which I found on the random reviews, and thought I would leave some comments.
This is very true, we cannot change anyone except ourselves. We are all unique.
The only suggestion is the word its , for example in this line:" Its not up to me to try to change her, its up to me to love and support her. The only person I can change is me." Its should have an apostrophe, "it's".