|This piece is very relevant right now. You have developed your point thoroughly and I agree with you.
Unfortunately, not everyone adopts the filthy speech pattern shown here. Instead, they model quiet, calm, and respectful disagreement and uphold collaborative discussions. Worse yet, this kind of behavior leads to a consensus, forging a society where progress and inclusion become rampant.<<< This quote pretty much sums up what we should be aiming for and pretty much both sides are failing at.
That said I write satire that exaggerates what I see as absurd, so I'm not much help in this area and a bit of a hypocrite here.
My only suggestion would be to break it up into paragraphs. I find it easier on the eye.
Anyway, good piece.