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Review of Once, I Thought  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. It is inspiring and well written. Being a snob after achieving awards and recognition is quite understandable. The prestige earned was well worth it. His learning of tricks to do his job well is how he does his work now. He keeps too busy with his job with this tricks. His snobbish behavior has changed as a result. The poetry makes us think how we change with times. How new tricks make us change in our jobs. As we get more real our pride vanishes and reality takes over. The poetry is an eye opener how the world works.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story about Leena's ability to see ghosts at hospitals and cemeteries. The story makes us take a look at paranormal phenomena. Her wanting to write a history of the lake adds to her experiences. The text should be checked again for English and Grammar. Leena knows Mitchell but denies having seen her after she sees his ghost. The story is interesting. Her interactions with her family makes it more interesting. The author has a good touch of fiction. The story reminds us of other paranormal and ghost stories we have read.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice article about being a christian. The questions about god, his existence, his presence in our lives has been there for centuries. Jesus was believed to be the son of god. His teachings are relevant even today. If Jesus was god we believe in him through faith. Faith drives us. Being a christian and having christian beliefs is important. Jesus' interlude with his disciples are recorded in history. The article is nice to read as it makes us aware about our inner self, faith in the creator and the purpose of our lives

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Review of Melia  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story about a princess and a dragon. The small cave in the hill has a corridor with passageways. The princess's discovery of the dragon is slow but frightening. A dragon in love with a princess is rare. The dragon is a thinking dragon. The story has a twist of fantasy to it. The story has been told artfully. The dragon is huge. Dragons are said to be vicious and fearful. The dragon in the story is timid. The final end of both of them is not chronicled. The story comes to an end with their meeting. The idea of the story is good. It has been chosen well.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)

This is a nice story. It makes reading interesting. As the title suggests about demons, those demons are not to be seen. There is fantasy and action in the story. The number of characters are many. The final death of Babenlo is shocking. The reason for the rivalry between the characters is not obvious. There is some confusion at the end of the story. This has to be cleared. The story is amusing. The idea of the story should match what is inside. The demons have to be shown in the story. How demonry happens should come out in the story.

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Review of Bitter Goodbyes  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Bitter goodbye's is a good topic to write about. The pain of parting is in us. It can be bitter if we take it seriously. Change is the only constant. Change can bring pain and happiness. Changing an apartment can be painful and disastrous. Saying bye to a flatmate can also be difficult. Friendship is important and breaking it can be painful. The last words of stupid change makes us think how a change can alter things for us. It can make things worse for the author. Goodbye's are hence not cherished by her.

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Review of Less Than a Week  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice account of running to file the tax returns. The deadline of the tax returns are close and there is only a day left. The suspense and the climax is built in the story. He has'nt received his w-2's from one of the IRS job. He finally gets his W-2's from the IRS. With both the W-2's, he goes ahead to file his taxes. The officer stopping him for a ticket makes him wonder how he would meet his deadline. Readers with similar troubles of filing taxes will identify with the story. They would be worried about their own tax filings.

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Review of LOVELY OFFENCE  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poem. It is a tribute to one's beloved. The poetry is a nice example of writing love poems. The beloved is first offended and then placated. The love of the person offends his lady love. It is not always possible to understand the other person's emotions and feelings in love. Offence is hence a form of defense by the other sex to keep away the other person. The eventual losing of love is due to the offence and the disinterest is generated. All might not be successful in love. The poetry is well written and brings out the romance in love.

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Review of Lines  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice article about utopia. Utopia is a state where everything is perfect. The author's choosing of this topic and his lookout on life makes him philosophical. The lines written are emphatic and describe what the author feels about things. The idea of utopia is unique and is brought out well. Free thought is represented as liberating. The article is nice to read and stimulates our thinking. The ideas in the article are various and they make us think about the different things that make utopia.

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Review of Motives  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice article about smoking and the risk it poses to us. Nicotine is harmful to us and it can cause cancer. The need and the lust of money makes people blind. They are not able to see and feel others. The tobacco industry is huge and the evil it poses to the masses are huge. The governments around the world have to take the effects into account. The article is simple and clear. It brings out the key points of the effects of smoking on human beings. It creates awareness of the dangers of smoking.

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Review of Rough Justice  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a good story written with a lot of thought and interest. Different thoughts have been put together. Rough justice is meted out and this is a bottleneck. The dead body on the pavement is another mystery. The questioning surprises the author and he is taken back by the situation. The state attorneys and the lawyer's questions amuses the author. The death of the person on the pavement is mysterious and is not known. Mr.Brooks is the author and he makes interesting conversations with the lawyers he meets.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)


The poetry is humble and makes us think about the things that fill us with joy. The God given humble thing is precious and gracious. The width, breadth and height is described well and makes us think about it. The things we might not know come to our minds. The Almighty God and heaven are described in a very good light. The blessed piety and being are god given. The god given, gracious and humble thing are features of the lord. This is the loving, eternal and passionate soul. The poetry is inspiring and makes us think about the good god has done for us.

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Review of Veron  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice story with a book character that is engrossing and amazing. Veron Dumehjian is an interesting character. She is taken to a refugee camp where she survives cholera. There should be more details about Veron and what she is capable of doing. This will enhance her character and make it more interesting. The Armenian genocide could be described well too. The book Road From Home is also shown and can be taken into account by readers. Readers might want to read the book and enjoy it. The concept of family is shown with Veron and her family members.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

This is a nice poem about a dictator. The dictator has his faults and fallacies. He has his whims which he imposes on the people. This is brought out well in the poem. His wrongs are many. He over rides the constitution, has no respect for congress, makes Halliburton rich. No other dictator has done so many violations. He takes advantage of his executive privileges. All this points are brought out well in the poetry. It makes it stand out. To select a good topic for poetry is also an art as much as the poetry itself.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

This is a good story about Santa Claus. We come across many Santa stories especially when winter is nearing on wdc. This story is also written artfully and with craft. It has a lot of sensitivity to the topic and makes reading fun. Santa Claus is amusing to children and the interaction he has with children is brought well. The good and the bad traits of children he handles is brought out. The story is well written. The ending is also good as it ends with a phrase that indicates him coming to town.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

This is a nice review about Jane Austen. It shows the author's interest in Jane Austen. Jane Austen was a prolific author and has many popular books in her collection. The photographs add to the article's writing's. Jane Austen is popular in the public imagination and people are very keen to follow her writing's. The Jane Austen Meeting Place and the Jane Austen Discussion Forum are two places readers would want to go to to know more about her. The Jane Austen mug may interest readers and they might want to own it.

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Review of What if..  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This poem is nice to read. It makes us wonder what if we did things we did not do otherwise. The wonder can make us think in different ways. The poetry brings out this wonder and makes reading interesting. The fear of settling down, the fear of love and being a mess are on the poet's mind. All this things makes her feel and think about them. The poetry is inspiring and could be a good entry for a poetry contest. Even love is puzzling and confuse us. The fight for dreams the poet does not want to live is another concern.

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Review of Premature  
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about a premature child. The child is precocious and delicate. The need to take care and provide for the newborn comes out in the poetry. The poetry is good to read and also makes us think about premature children. The child is in the hospital and is being taken care of. The child is expected to become big and strong. The expectations of a mother from her child is brought forth in the poem. The child is tiny. The poetry is lucid and simple. It makes us think about premature children.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)

This is a nice poem about sports and the enthusiasm we have about sports. Sports can be frustrating if we don't reach our goals. The poetry tells us about the Pizzazz in sports. Sports can be rewarding and the clicks might not work. A heart of gold is what we retain. The poetry can inspire sports enthusiasts and can make them struggle harder to reach their goals. A prize is also sought in sports. The way every place reacts can be different. Roll is lacked by each player. The poetry is imaginative.

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Review of Gate 11A  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

The story is interesting to read. Paul was at Gate11A. The story makes the reader take interest. The Einstein's bagels are an interesting reference to our likes and dislikes. The story makes us think in a very real light. Bagels are also something to look forward to. The idea of the story is to make us understand how things can work out well. It also makes us think how to go about things at the airport. The story is well written and engrosses us. It also makes us think how we can make a good story.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a nice essay. It is written with research and thought. The idea of the essay captures a lot of thoughts about various things. The topics have been chosen well and the writings are good to read. The thoughts on Lindsay Lohan are also written down. The thoughts have been put down well and are well evolved. This also makes it good to read and understand. The thoughts should have been more serial. The essay is well crafted. The thoughts are also penned down well. The essay could be replicated with other thoughts.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice poetry that is good to read. Freedom is eulogized and appreciated. The poetry is cryptic and it would have been good if it were simpler. The present school system is a good topic to be chosen. The challenges in the system are present and they have to be seen. The poetry tries to show how these challenges are and makes us aware of it. The poet begs to wake up and see the faults in the system. In the end he asks to fix it. The poem is a good way of trying to reform the system and could be read by people who feel the same way.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This poetry is nice to read. It offers obeisance to the lord and seeks his blessings. The scriptures are glorified that have mended the wounds. This is a nice way to revitalize the soul and create new understanding in oneself. The terrors in the person are amended. The lord is stated as the beloved and friend. The doubts are stolen by the lord's love. This prayer is imaginative and articulate. It evokes a sense of respect and cheer in us. Readers would like to collect the poem for their purposes and for their needs.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.5)

This is a nice fiction account of life by the sea. The life of the people in the boat is exciting and promising. The broth made by them with Tarragon added to it makes it tasty and good to eat. Crabs, roots and berries are all added to the pot. The Tarragon adds to the taste of the pot and makes it tasteful. The loud groans in the end floats across the water. It satisfies the hunger of the shipwrecked people. It also makes them happy being by the sea. The sea satisfies them and delights them. The story is interesting to read and engaging.

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Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This is a nice fantasy fiction story about princes, princesses and gnomes. The fantasy and magical quality of the story makes the reading interesting and riveting. The story transforms us to another world and also makes us feel good about the characters. The characters of the story are very impressionable and makes us want for more. The story itself winds through magical places. The text should be checked for English, Grammar and proper paragraphs. Grymmy is also a character that registers among readers.

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