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29 Public Reviews Given
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Review of Aradia's Broom  
Review by Ash
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Its like a story in poem form. I really liked it.
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Review by Ash
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW! That was so weird i loved it. I think it mght be one of my favorite storys i have read so far. It was just wow. I don't even know what to say.
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Review of Cards  
Review by Ash
Rated: E | (4.5)
It was weird but interesting. You are very talented and make the storie come alive as the reader reads it. You need to add some more to though you left me hanging at the end. I know you said its the beging of a short story but can you kill my suspence and tell me what happens to her. Why did they for get who Lily was?
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Review by Ash
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, i liked it but why did the guy have a tree in his ear?
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Review of Sanctuary  
Review by Ash
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it. It was really cool and wow. I just love it.
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Review by Ash
Rated: E | (4.0)
Its its quite good. for me it needs to be sung differently or the background music needs to be different. I can't really tell witch.the ending need some work to. But all and all qutie good.
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Review by Ash
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love the beat this is the Fifth time i listened to and i stil love it. The gatair rocks. Who ever singing is pretty good and over all i liked the song. Wait scratch that the sixth time i liistened to it. You just need to do something to the singing he dosen't very much when he sings. i think it works well for this song but you might want to watch that if you do any more songs.
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Review of The Stranger  
Review by Ash
Rated: E | (4.5)
That was cool i mean not the part about him trying to hurt the guy but the rest was cool. Not very much help i know. I had to read it a couple times before it really sunk in if that helps any.
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Review of Stupid Things  
Review by Ash
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was amazing. It really is true though if you think about it.
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Review of Next-door's Cat  
Review by Ash
Rated: E | (4.5)
it was funny
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Review of Grocery Shopping  
Review by Ash
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I thought it was funny. I really don't like poepms so yeah but yours was one of the better ones I've read
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Review by Ash
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
It was really good. Ilight say that to everyones storys or what ever i read but i could see or well feel what you meam in your wordsbut umm When i go there i just lie down on the floor or on my bed an slip away. isn't that an suppost to be an and.
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Review by Ash
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That was amazing. I really liked it. It was suppenseful but not boringknid of suspence.
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