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Really enjoyed your essay about the second coming of Christ.
Christians know that nothing is impossible for God, if it is in His will, and the second coming of Christ is in that category of being in God's will, so ... no matter where everyone is on that glorious day, they will be made aware that Christ is coming back.
As we know, life goes on, even on that day, and people will be doing all kinds of things, as they are doing now, both good things pleasing to God and evil things NOT pleasing to God ... There will be people helping people, like teachers, rescue workers, doctors and nurses ... and there will be people out to commit crimes of various kinds against people ... but no matter what activities everyone is engaged in, when Christ comes back, they will be made aware that He is coming, like Revelation 1:7 informs us.
WOW! Love your poem ... it perfectly describes the feelings in my heart, the type of situation I've been living through in my life, like the male subject of your poem has been experiencing.
I pray to one day know such love too!
Searose, you've really captured the emotions involved in the gal and the guy's hearts, and expressed them in a unique, dreamy scenario that is easy to relate to.
Really enjoyed your poem titled "The Flight of a Thought"
So glad you finally found the idea you sought;
What a joy it is to think and create,
To not be inhibited by a thought that hesitates.
I loved the way your poem flowed to its conclusion,
Naturally and certain, without any confusion.
Steve McLean
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