Great! I think this is a wonderful place
for you to be serious and for learning poems where you experiment and try new things! And I am so happy and very glad that it is also where you let the inner you in you come out!
New things are always good to try and you know what they say? You will always stay young and sharp if you are always learning!
Love the folder and look forward to reading more and getting to know you better!
I was really curious by the title and by the description and as I came on in I found a very honest, open, truthful, clever, unique, a one of a kind and very creative piece. I would have to agree, count FEMA to be out of town. It is sad really sad that things did not go well at this time. Thank you for your honesty and openness for truth cannot be hidden!
I was drawn into your poem by your title and I like the information that you give in your description and then I step inside and found this wonderful Quotation: "Snow provokes responses that reach right back to childhood." Andy Goldsworthy.
I have to say I love that!
Wow! I love this poem! I love the way that it just warms my heart and the way that it makes me feel as you are really good with weaving your web of words that spins a picture so clear and it really touches my soul in ways I can never tell as it seems to come alive as I read this poem aloud. Thank you!
As I got to the end I love that you wrote this for your Mom, the most beautiful woman you have ever known! Very heartfelt.
I love the title and the description and I had to come on in and I am so glad that I did. What a lovely poem and I was really captivated by the spinning cleverly well thought out words as you really do have a way with words and you know just how to make your readers feel and see as you paint a very clear picture. Keep sharing your lovely soul and keep writing from that heart of yours. I give a five-star rating for this heartfelt wonderful perfect poem.
I like your title: Distant Moon Baby and I like the dedication to your parents and their new grandchild to be. That is really very nice.
I was very moved by your very heartfelt poem and it is full of emotion and I really do love it. I also like the note that you put at the bottom of this poem and my heart goes out to you!
I was curious about the title and your description and so I really had to come and have a look inside and I am glad that I did. I love the very being of this piece and I like that it stands out in bold too and of course I got a chuckle out of it too.
You are funny and I mean a good sense of humor ~ you are like a comedian in a lot of ways and you are certainly a really good storyteller for sure. I like this as it is a way to like at politics in a humorous way! Stamps... Gotta love'em.
Keep writing from your soul and your heart as you can really draw any reader into your story and keep them entertained and some of us always seem to want more! Great job storyteller.
I would have given this story a five star rating had you allowed ratings.
I am laughing so hard right now! This was very funny and I can just here the two of you as y'all have this funny and yet insight information conversation! LOL
Good evening! I thought I would come in for a little visit. I was drawn to your wonderful folder and I have to say that I really love this folder. It is very creative, well thought out and I love, love, love all the images that you have and they make the place feel more welcome and inviting. You are very creative and very organized. I like that you have a place for your blog challenges or other activities they may come your way! Keep writing and keep sharing! I really would have given your folder here a five-star rating had you allowed ratings!
I was curious by the title and by the description and so I just had to come on in and I love the way this poem unfolds it is like a little story in poetry forum how sweet. You really do have a way with words as you really do leave me wanting more. You are very talented and very creative. Keep writing and sharing your talent with all of us. Thank you so much for sharing your heart.
I really had a wonderful time visiting with you.
I was curious by the title and the description so I had to come on in and I do like the note that you put at the top of your piece here. What a wonderful piece you have written here. You make some really good points and you are so right, It boils down to this: Be kind.
You have a lot of wisdom and good understanding. Keep giving your wise wisdom and understanding for I am sure it does help others rather they admit it or not.
Your dog, Boo is so clever! Wonder where she put that I mean was she teaching you lesson did it fall on the floor and she was like hmmm must put this away for a while! Boo is very smart! I am sure you love her very much. What a funny story and I for one am really glad you shared it and I have to say thank you so much for the laugh! In fact, I am still laughing writing this review!
Good evening! Just coming by for a little visit. I was curious by your title and your description and so I had to come on in as I found a really interesting little story. I like that certain words are in red and bold so that they stood out just a little more making your story pop even more. You weave your web of words as your readers can see what it is you are saying and really understand. I love how you draw me into your story as you show me more than just telling a story. You also really did leave me wanting more too. You are really a very good storyteller!
I liked the whole story from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one line as a favorite. There were no errors in your story that I could see.
Keep writing, my friend keep on writing and keep sharing. I am giving this story a five-star rating.
Wow! What a charming little story full of imagination fitting for children for sure and I will have to read this to some children I know for sure! I really enjoyed this story and I was into by the first paragraph too you really do just have a way with words as you lure your readers in and show them what you are saying so that they can clearly see and understand. You really are very creative!
First I love your title and your description and I couldn't wait to read your clever and very creative story here. I know this is about death but it is also uplifting in an odd way! I like the way you think and how you unfold this story and I am we all have given this a thought a time or two. I like your little note at the bottom too.
You left me wanting more, I dunno know how you do that but I like that you are very good with words and really can draw your readers in and I like that you show more than just tell your story.
I like the title and it reminds me of the song: September by Earth Wind And Fire! Sorry it really just made me think of that
I like that you put that this story is for a contest and you put the link in at the top and I love the dedication to the memory of all the victims of 9/11 and it's aftermath. A special touch at least that is what I think.
As I came on in to have a look around I found a very emotional story. Very clever, well thought out and very creative.
You really do have a way with words as you can really make your readers feel, see and even understand what you are saying as show more than tell. Love that.
Keep writing and keep sharing all your wonderful talent.
Wow! What a full of emotions story that you have written here. It really just comes to life and full of drama, pride and real feelings indeed. I think that the title fits the story too. You can really draw in your readers with your cleverly written words as you put them together in such a way that your readers can feel and see. I love how you are able to show more than just tell a story. Very interesting indeed. Keep writing and keep sharing. My rating is a five star rating.
Good evening! I found this story and I just had to come on in as I was curious about the title and the description.
I love all the details you put in here as you weave your words ever so cleverly drawing this reader in as you paint the scenes so vividly and clearly and it is completely understandable. The story is easy to follow even with all the detail and I found myself wanting more.
Some parts racy, some parts sad. A range of full emotions for sure. And I really have enjoyed this story that you have created so effortlessly as it feels like the lines just clicked together and I like how you are such a storyteller and you make it come alive with feeling and sincerity. I enjoyed the whole story from the beginning to the end and I could not possibly pick just one line as a favorite as the whole thing is really good.
Do keep writing and keep sharing. I am giving this story a rating of five stars.
First, I like how you give all the information at the top of your poem and even give a link to the contest in which this poem is written for.
I like the title and as I came on in to have a look I liked how this rhyming poem unfolds. A very clever piece indeed. I really like this poem. It is very catchy for real.
You just have a knack for words as you place them so cleverly for your readers to see. You paint a good picture for anyone to see. I like every line. The time is also really good too. I even like the pace of the poem.
Keep writiing and keep sharing. I give this poem a five star rating.
Good evening! I thought I would come by for a little visit and I came across this poem and thought I would come on in and have a look around.
I found this to be interesting and I like the way it makes me feel. Very creative and uplifting. Singing is always uplifting!
You sure do have a wonderful way with words as you paint a really good picture for your readers to see and to clearly understand. I was left wanting more
Awe no one noticed the rain...
There are no errors in this wonderful poem. I really liked the whole poem and I could not possibly pick just one line as a favorite.
Keep being creative as you weave your webs of words telling a story and keep sharing your clever lines too.
I like that you put at the bottom of your poem that this poem is for a contest. I really think that is a good idea.
I am giving a five star rating to your piece here.
I was drawn in by the title and the description and I like that you put what the prompt is right at the top and I really like the prompt: Blessings in Disguise. Great prompt!
As I step on in to read this poem I was really into it and read again I really like it is captivating, luring if I may say. The Ghostly rain. I just like the way this poem really goes together with each line in place. It is really good and I like the way it made me feel too.
There were no errors in this creation of poetry.
Thank you so much for sharing. I give this poem a rating of five stars.
This is wonderful, creative, has plenty of heart, it's honest, open, graceful, cleverly, witty, charming, delightful and very creative and did I mention that it is funny? Well, some parts are funny and even made me laugh!
You really do have a way with words. You know just how to draw your readers in you weave your web of words and really paint a very clear picture for every reader to see and clearly understand. You can write my friend! This "Dear Me" Letter left me wanting more. I feel like the more I come and visit you the more I get to know you!
You keep right on writing and sharing no matter what and don't worry about those who may not like what you write for you don't write for them!
I am giving this Dear Me Letter a rating of five stars.
What a funny poem indeed very enjoyable to say the least I am sure your Boo loves you so! I really like the title and it sure does fit the poem too. In your description you said her nails not mind I found myself laughing right out loud!
What a wonderful poem very unique, a one of kind, and very creative, I bet you and boo are very close indeed.
I did not see any errors in this poem. You sure do have a way with words, so gifted my friend. Thank you for sharing.
Good evening! I was coming by for a little visit. I was drawn to your little story here as I like the title and I see in the description that it is for a contest and you have the word count in there too really nice.
As I can on in I found this dark, interesting, intriguing, clever and very creative story. I could even picture everything going on which to me is a real talent for only a gifted writer can really make their readers feel and see and that really does draw me in more. I was left wanting more!
I did not see any errors at all. Everything really does go together and I could not possibly pick just one line as my favorite.
Keep being cleverly creative as you continue to write and keep on sharing. I give this story a rating of five stars.
Good evening! I thought I would come by for a little visit and I stumbled upon this poem and thought I would have look and when I came inside I found a wonderful, charming, delightful and very creative poem/story that you have captured in my mind so well as you paint a vivid picture that I can clearly see and I like the way this piece makes me feel. I love true stories! You once again have left me wanting more. Keep sharing, keep writing. I enjoyed my visit with you. I am rating this wonderful, delightful piece with a five-star rating.
Winner! Whohoo great job!! That is not what drew me in here though. I was drawn in by the title and a little curious by the description...
Wow! I love this poem. I love the way it makes me feel. You really do have a way with words as you just paint a picture so effortlessly as you make this reader feel while leaving me wanting more for real! A very touching poem, full of emotion and caring indeed.
Keep writing, my friend, keep writing and keep sharing...
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