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Review of Urge  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Short, but, well done. Well-written, with fine attention to detail.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10. Rules make sense, and work perfectly. Haven't seen Pokemon in years though, so, may not be able to add to this myself. Still, a fine effort, A+ on your part, and those who've added to it.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though the show is one I know little about, though I've read about it, and know some of the characters. Not a bad idea, not bad at all.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10. I myself have reached my limit on the interactives in my portfolio, as have some others I've gotten to know, so, I'll let them know about this. A great way to help people with interactives they can't post yet.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. Very well done. If this is based on personal experiences, sorry you had to go through these things, but, glad you're still here.
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Review of Best Friends  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poor girl and guy. Surprised they can be friends with their different interests. 10/10. Great oneshot thingy here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10. One interesting concept, and one I haven't ran into on here before. Have added some ideas for likely sections to use, certain girls from books I'm familiar with, and some other ideas that could work. I'll see about adding more to it if I can think of anything.
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Review of Baby Kady  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10. First, thought this was about a girl, until I noticed the spelling. Great effort, though I prefer girls being diapered, rather than guys, but, that's just me. Still, excellent original idea here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Sad, but, well done. First heard of this condition in a mystery novel, where a killer's victim had that condtion, but wanted a leg removed. 10/10.
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Review of My will  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10, though I'm not a huge poetry fan. Nothing personal, afraid it doesn't catch the same appeal as a novel.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though I don't remember the show much. Still, great start here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though I'm not a fan of wedgies or things of that sort. Still, not a bad idea for those interested in it.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though Shorta and Loli, is it, is a genre I know nothing about. Hope you don't mind explaining it to me. Great effort, however.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. I'll need to find the intro to this fan series to refresh my memory on who's who, but, great effort.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10. Not bad for your first interactive, though I tend to get stuck on these types of stories. Still, great effort here. 10/10.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10, though I'm not sure what to add, having not seen the show in question for several years. Still, hilarious idea, here, great idea for your first interactive. Maybe do one focused on other characters from other shows when you can. Other shows you're interested in besides Arthur?
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10. The idea is one I haven't come across before. can other family members for erin, is it, be mentioned, at least? Wouldn't mind trying this out, see where I can take it.
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Review of Avatar tf  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10, though the show is one I've only heard of, and, no clue if it's on a streaming service or not, though I've heard it's on Netflix. Still, an interesting concept here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. Hope it won't be like some other body swap stories I've come across, where some authors add strange ideas, like certain parts being swapped in odd ways. Afraid the Manga/Anime sections aren't my strong suit, not being that familiar with them at all. Still, a fine effort.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. An interesting take on a first published book, that's for sure. Something with a Halloween feel to it, no doubt.
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Review of The Day Begins  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. Hilarious start here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10, though object transformations is something I don't think I've added to before. Still, not a bad idea. WRote the starting chapter for it.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10. Rules are perfect. The only downside is, I'm not familiar with the Sonic characters, so, wouldn't know what to add myself.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though the show is one I'm not familiar with, and, I've tried shrinking stories on here, find myself stuck on what to add to them. Still, best of luck to the moderator, and others adding to this one.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though there are many fetishes and cartoons I can't add to, if I haven't heard of them before, obviously. Diapering would count if a character is age regressed, I'm sure. If I'm wrong, let me know.
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