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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10. A lot of interesting ideas. Haven't seen the Diamond and Pearl, was it, series with Dawn in it in years, no clue if it's streaming somewhere or not. Still, an interesting comcept you've got here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Excellent idea for your first interactive, though, I often tend to get a bit stuck on what to add to for these. Curious. Why have Jeff the only one to shrink, why not Becky or Emily, if I got the names right? If so, would you consider those as options for later in this story, or for some new story in future? If so, I'd like to add to those, as I prefer girls shrinking and such over guys.
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Review of 2 am  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10, even if I don't have that kind of problem. I tend to be a pretty heavy sleeper, accept for loud sounds, either outside or inside.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10. The only downside, for me at least, many of the games and anime mentioned are ones I've never heard of. Still, not a bad idea here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, even if I tend to get stuck on what to add to giantess stories, and I'm not that familiar with many Animes, or video games. Still, fine effort here.
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Review of Urge  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Short, but, well done. Well-written, with fine attention to detail.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though the show is one I know little about, though I've read about it, and know some of the characters. Not a bad idea, not bad at all.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10. One interesting concept, and one I haven't ran into on here before. Have added some ideas for likely sections to use, certain girls from books I'm familiar with, and some other ideas that could work. I'll see about adding more to it if I can think of anything.
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Review of Baby Kady  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10. First, thought this was about a girl, until I noticed the spelling. Great effort, though I prefer girls being diapered, rather than guys, but, that's just me. Still, excellent original idea here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Sad, but, well done. First heard of this condition in a mystery novel, where a killer's victim had that condtion, but wanted a leg removed. 10/10.
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Review of My will  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10, though I'm not a huge poetry fan. Nothing personal, afraid it doesn't catch the same appeal as a novel.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though I don't remember the show much. Still, great start here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though Shorta and Loli, is it, is a genre I know nothing about. Hope you don't mind explaining it to me. Great effort, however.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10. Not bad for your first interactive, though I tend to get stuck on these types of stories. Still, great effort here. 10/10.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10, though I'm not sure what to add, having not seen the show in question for several years. Still, hilarious idea, here, great idea for your first interactive. Maybe do one focused on other characters from other shows when you can. Other shows you're interested in besides Arthur?
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10. The idea is one I haven't come across before. can other family members for erin, is it, be mentioned, at least? Wouldn't mind trying this out, see where I can take it.
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Review of Avatar tf  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
10/10, though the show is one I've only heard of, and, no clue if it's on a streaming service or not, though I've heard it's on Netflix. Still, an interesting concept here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. Hope it won't be like some other body swap stories I've come across, where some authors add strange ideas, like certain parts being swapped in odd ways. Afraid the Manga/Anime sections aren't my strong suit, not being that familiar with them at all. Still, a fine effort.
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Review of The Day Begins  
Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. Hilarious start here.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10, though object transformations is something I don't think I've added to before. Still, not a bad idea. WRote the starting chapter for it.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10. Rules are perfect. The only downside is, I'm not familiar with the Sonic characters, so, wouldn't know what to add myself.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though there are many fetishes and cartoons I can't add to, if I haven't heard of them before, obviously. Diapering would count if a character is age regressed, I'm sure. If I'm wrong, let me know.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: E | (5.0)
10/10. For your first interactive, not a bad idea. Lots of room to make things more interesting for anyone we go with.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, even if wedgies, if I have the spelling right, aren't my thing. Just not sure where the appeal is. Nothing personal.
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Review by Cardinal Priest
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
10/10, though D&D is a series I've never played before, and Critical Role is a series I hadn't heard of until finding this interactive. Still, great effort.
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