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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Excellent! It would seem as if you entered an animal's mind. Yes! I do believe they laugh at us especially when we act stupid...drunk and crash.
Wow! on a more serious note, I think your poem is extraordinary. Happy holidays!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An excellent piece of work. The message is strong and powerful.....
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Review of MY ROCK  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Such a beautiful piece. I loved it. Simply amazing! God is awesome. He is our EVERYTHING!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A beautiful poem. I do believe that the Kids and parents will love this poem. It flowed well. The rhyme scheme was fair, not all the rhyming words made the mark but on a whole it was a fairly good job.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I do agree with your title "The sky's the limit...for now and always" The poem flowed well, I loved it.... the fact statements were well stated. I loved the rhyme scheme. Excellent work.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Marvellous! Such a wonderful poem with a beautiful message. Absolutely fantastic! Love is kind and pure, you spoke to the Lord and he blessed you. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
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Review of A Warm Christmas  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Fantastic! a poem which reflects the reality of life. This was so nicely put together. It gives a positive as well as powerful message to the readers. Your poetry is exceptional. Keep up the good work.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome! I loved this poem. I could form a mental picture of the setting. The imagery was good and so was the rhyme scheme. This certainly was an excellent poem, one which was very descriptive and rather interesting. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
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Review of My Miracle  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! You have nailed this one. I can see that you have put a lot of thought into this poem probably because the subject is so personal. This was well put together. The words just flowed beautifully and the content was truly remarkable. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.
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Review of Beginnings  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem. I must confess that the reflective types of poems are my favorite to read though I am not good at writing such... I loved this one. Especially where you said, " Embracing the thought you'll be around..Fly over me once more". I recalled a loved one who has passed on. I saw myself in your poem as if I were the character experiencing it all. Good writing I enjoyed it!!
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Review of Mind Workers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good poetry, the content was strong and powerful. Reflecting on the educators of old. Lovely! I enjoyed reading this. Keep going with the excellent writings.
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Review of Far Away Love  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Fantastic poem which reflects the reality of life... at times distance will separate loved ones. The poem has a very good rhyme scheme. The first two stanzas are exceptional but if I were given the chance I would change the last stanza to read....

My soul hopes..........because our togetherness is long overdue.
With your hair.....................................................................loving you.

So as you see I would delete: ...'one plus one always equals two'. Only a suggestion!
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