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Review of My Haunting  
Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice work Welcome


Write On
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Review of A Vampire Bride  
Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is truly beautiful in a dark morbid way.
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Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good poem, you speak of meter and things that I am ignorant of. I did enjoy this poem and you have a real passion for it.

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Review of Wisdom  
Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very profound again... for the die hard Christian You could be backed up too.

"Verily I say unto you, Whosoever shall not receive the kingdom of God as a little child shall in no wise enter therein."

Children know more about God then a so called wise adult. The world is magical to a child it becomes what is to the adult. I nver want to grow up and this poem reminds me of that.
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Review of Retribution  
Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: E | (5.0)
By him all things consist

Looking for and hasting unto the coming of the day of God, wherein the heavens being on fire shall be dissolved, and the elements shall melt with fervent heat?
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Review of Angel Grave  
Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I'm not sure if this is a typo but it threw me "Once I have calm down a little I get up from the stone flooring and walk over to the opposite wall where there are words writting."

If one has to think to hard they lose the message the writter wants to convey. I will now point my criticism at myself too.

Peace
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Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I don't rate structure and grammar I rate the heart of what you write. This is due to the fact I don't understand grammar structure etc. I do think you could let loose a little more and be a bit more raw here but "I dig what your sayin"

"The Prince of Foods"
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Review of Winds of Change  
Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: E | (4.5)
Three minutes... I love it and you are the first to make me look back and change what i wrote so NOW i have to say 5 minutes...Not the eND ;)
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Review by The Muffin Man
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
A clean slate to our name is all we have to pass on...
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