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Review of One Way  
Review by Triv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely written!


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Review by Triv
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great story and loved the light humor it portrayed despite the adversity faced. The use of the prompt was deftly done and I enjoyed the whole story and the two characters in it. Also liked the way the father truly knew what is important but said it in a non melodramatic way. Cool stuff!


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Review by Triv
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Loved the story. Very well written. The untold pain and suffering were brought out so beautifully! All the best.
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Review of Angelic Kisses  
Review by Triv
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this piece. It was evocative and brought up large visualizations in my mind. Very well written!
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Review by Triv
Rated: E | (5.0)
A poignant and well written poem. I liked the simplicity of the words and the fact that it is also quite powerful emotionally


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Review by Triv
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fun story!
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Review by Triv
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cool idea!
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Review by Triv
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Loved the poem. As someone who's been struggling with dieting and eating healthy all my life, I could relate to this. I especially loved the ending with the stupid fruit. The writing is really good and the way the poem evolves was a lot of fun to read. Keep writing!


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Review by Triv
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I liked the simple way of narrating the story and the ending. One tiny niggle...
“I know your there, dear. I can hear you.”

Change that to 'you're'.

Keep writing!


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