Good show.
This "was" my favorite guideline that you presented:
Douse all forms of the verb "to be." That includes is, am, are, was, were, be, being and been. These are dead verbs that say nothing. According to Wikipedia, allowed forms are: become, has, have, had, I've, you've, do, does, doing, did, can, could, will, would, shall, should, ought, may, might and must. The fact that they are allowed, however, does not make them desirable. Get rid of as many as possible because they weaken sentence structure. Likewise, using "could" or "would" will drop you into a trap that you'll find hard to escape.
I would only add, "Write what you know about. If you don't know about something, research it until you know more about it than the reader could possible imagine" .
Retired Intelligence Officer, Captain Wayne Thornton |
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