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I felt the intensity of your words in this delightful poem, which gave everything that it promised in the title, an abundance of romance. It is warm and imaginative, with a sense of yearning. It has great depth and was indeed a very romantic poem, one that made me feel cuddled and close to a loving partner.
I was taken on quite an emotional ride with this poem. I really felt your words. There is great love here, along with devotion, tenderness, and kindness. It’s a beautiful piece that was a pleasure read from start to finish. I got a lump in my throat reading it. It’s just wonderful.
Here is yet another sweet and romantic poem. It is quite obvious that you love this lady. She must be very special to earn such devotion. Your words are descriptive and there is a nice flow to this poem. Thank you for sharing your feelings here. It is a refreshing read.
Every time I visit your portfolio for new works I am always pleasantly surprised and delighted. The wonderful thing about this poem is that it felt like a breeze when I read it. It flowed with ease, almost like a butterfly. It’s a lovely tribute to this special lady of yours, a very nice poem indeed.
Your poem about this woman goes deeper than romance or flights of fancy. It’s a testament to your deep love for her, your respect and honor for her integrity and vision. It’s a very moving and heartfelt poem, with just the right amount of mysticism and touch from the divine. It’s lovely how much you care about her, and your protective nature in regards to her is quite admirable. Your poems always touch my heart and this one doesn’t disappoint. Thank you for sharing your work here.
It’s another fine chapter in a story that has twists and turns you don’t see coming, like the meeting of Gideon and Mary Loo. A sight for sore eyes she must be, because she’s the spitting image of Gideon’s beloved deceased wife. I wonder what will happen next, even as now the two orphans will need tending after the carnage that took their parents’ lives. This story continues to peak my interest and I will read on to discover more.
This is a lovely tribute to a lady love. I felt the admiration and warmth in your words. The subject’s beauty and humility are very evident. The poem is light and joyful, yet very heartfelt. The flow and rhyme are great in this piece and I very much enjoyed reading it. Mystical and romantic, the expression in this poem is just wonderful.
These chapters were emotionally charged as two children lost their parents to the viciousness of Kane’s accomplices. How these two children will go on is anyone’s guess, but right now there is more concern for Gideon and the others who are trying desperately to stop the carnage. At this point I don’t know how they will make out, but I look forward to the next chapters of this story.
Here is one more great chapter in the story that has had me captivated since the very first line. The stakes are high as Gideon continues to try to bring down Kane and his men. Now the lives of a woman and her children are in danger, and I fear it may be too late. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
This is a lovely poem of love and support for someone who means a lot to you. You remind her here of the good times shared and your devotion to her. Through life’s ups and downs it is apparent that you will be there for her no matter what comes along. She is one lucky lady to have you in her corner. It’s a very nice poem with true heartfelt expression.
Here is a poem that pulls at the heart. Anyone who has pets or has lost them can relate to the content here. It honors our dear animals who are no longer with us and does so with great feeling and depth. It’s heartbreaking, it’s sweet, and it’s spiritual. This poem is a memorial to one horse in particular, but it’s also a lovely tribute to all of our animal friends who had to leave us before we were ready to say goodbye.
This poem was an absolute delight to read. The rhymes were perfect and the rhythm was on point. I came away with a great feeling of romance and love. There’s historic flavor, mysticism, and rich description as you set the tone for a wedding day in the hills of Scotland. It’s a wonderful piece that touches the heart.
This poem took me away to another time and place. It is quite evident how much you adore this lady who is very precious to you. There is a sense of mysticism and wonder here, with a beautiful setting among nature in all its glory. Your poem has great flow and rhyme, and it was an absolute pleasure to read.
In a much cooler tone than some of your other writings, I find in this poem a clear message of regret and loss. The emptiness inside a broken heart can be quite cold, and it’s well expressed here, like a cold winter’s day. From start to finish this poem moved me. Thank you for sharing.
This is a very special poem for your very special lady. She is lucky to have such devotion on her side. It is rare to find a love like this, one that’s magical, mystical, and spiritual. The descriptions are beautiful and the emotions are heartfelt. There is an overall brightness and exquisiteness to your words. It’s a great poem, one that pulls on my heart.
This poem was a pleasure to read from start to finish. It struck a chord with me because I think everyone has questions about our existence, our purpose in life, and what comes after we leave this earth. There are things we will never know, but it doesn’t stop our quest to try finding out. Most of us have at least some curiosity. This thought provoking poem has nice rhyme and good flow. Great work.
This poem is literally a breath of fresh air. Reading it I was transported to a balmy summer night, similar to others I have enjoyed. I pictured a warm breeze as the sun goes down, cooling a bit as the stars come out, walking among houses that have their windows and doors open to catch the air as it moves through the rooms. Voices can be heard as people enjoy the night with soft music playing off in the distance. Friends are celebrating with glasses of cheer. Lovers steal kisses in the cover of darkness. Looking up, stars can be seen twinkling in the night. This is a very good poem, one that inspires the imagination and resurrects memories of well spent summer nights.
The story continues as bullets start to fly in the center of town. I knew it was coming. It’s apparent that Gideon doesn’t want a big fight, but he will do what he has to in order to keep control of the situation. He’s locked up Kane and some of Kane’s men, but there’s still more to be done. This story has had great flow since the beginning. It’s a very enjoyable read.
Here’s another two chapters of a story that hasn’t disappointed me yet. Now that Kane is in town the destruction has begun, as he sends his men on to do his dirty work. A family will lose a part of their homestead, and there’s no telling who else will be affected when all hell breaks loose in the center of town. I am looking forward to the next chapters.
This poem brought to memory times in my own life when I had struggles, and there have been many. Life challenges can get you down and bring on such despair if you let them get the best of you. A troubled mind can be very difficult to deal with, but a little positivity can make a big difference, even helping one to see the good things in a day, the hope in our hearts, and the dreams in our soul. The mind should be nurtured and respected. Nice work.
This story is really starting to heat up. Tom Kane wants revenge and he’s determined to head into town to get it. Anyone who double crosses him will pay a high price, as is evident in chapter 11. As usual this story is easy to read and captures your attention. I can’t wait to read more.
This little poem has a very significant message. When you care for another person it is natural to want to support them, and being there through both the good times and the bad times is very admirable. Steadfast and true, your devotion is easily seen in this poem from the heart. Very nice work.
This poem was lovely and very romantic, as I notice your last several poems have been. In this poem it seems that the love between you and this lady spans more than one lifetime, even other realms. It's mystical and emotional, a very heartfelt piece that was a joy to read, as well as very touching.
This is a lovely poem I very much enjoyed reading. It is obvious that you care immensely for this woman. She is very lucky to have you. True love is a very beautiful thing, and your caring really shines through. I like the picture you included at the top of the poem. It's very romantic. This is a beautiful piece.
I too have lost a spouse I cared for very much. The reasons why they leave sometimes make no sense. So I related to this poem very well. I sensed the sadness and the disappointment, emotions all too common in times like these. This piece has good flow and rhyme. Nice work.
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