THis is a wonderfull and relatable story in a poem form mat. I really enjoyed the read. I am so happy that I have found it. July I will will be forty five in July, so I can really can relate.
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This is the second item that I have reviewed today. It is so funny that both were a new author, new item, and both about aging. The only difference is the story line and that it is written from a male and female point of view. I loved how this worked out. This is a very funy and interesting story.
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This is excellantly written. I love the humor in the well developed paragraphs. I am becoming forty five in July. I think that it is words that I have fought for the last few years.
I loved this story.
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Happy writing.com birthday. This is a very nicely written poem. When I read the title, I had to read the rest. This is a fluent poem that creates a picture of a relationship falling a part.
I could see the relationshipa falling as we do not know what to do to help. I been on both ends of the story.
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I love the story line here. Your characters were introduced well, and the flow of the story was smooth. I only find one thing that would make it easier for me to read. That is to place a space between each of the paragraphs.
Here is a gift of encouragement. I know how hard it is to build your points when you are new.
It amazes me when authors live in today, but yet do not stray from the story of the past. Not using today's language holding fast to the descriptions of the day of his/her character. I admire this trait.
I would like to know what the secret is to being able to sepetrate the two times.
I love the family element in this chapter. It was well constructed, and a nice rest after the action
The only suggestion that I can bring to any thing that I have read so far is to hace a glossary or some way of describing the uncommon words used in the time of the story. I think that if you have no knowledge of the time and it lingo, it would be a little hard to read.
I think that this chapter begins to really show the character's development. The dialog is smoth, and the important changes in the conversation is seperated to draw attention.
The action is more intense in this chapter than I noticed in the others. I am becoming more inspired to take another look at the bible for inspiration for my National Novel Writing More project.
I can see the story growing. I can see the research that has been done. In my past reviews, I was a little nervous about suggestion that you intenionally used the Bible in it due to perhaps being wrong. I m interested in how you came up with the names. I do notice that some are from the Bible, but I wish that I am able to research.
Thank you for another good chapter. Hey, question when you publish this, could you send me a copy. I have a hard time buying books that encourage and inspires me due to my encome.
This short poem holding the long and emotion story of the memory thief. My own Dad suffers with this illness, and I can relate to the words of this work.
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First thank you for explaining this form of poetry to me. I loved the message behind your words. I can relate to the memories that seem to hide sometimes.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I have added this to my favorites so that I can come back to this so that I can refer to it when I need to. I really love the information, and it is really something that can help me while writing my novel.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
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You have a real talent for dialog. Your conversation was one that helped the story along fluently.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I really enjoyed this story. I found that you have a great skill for dialog. The emotion was exceptional. I can see the event unfold right in front of my eyes.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I really think that this gives even more emotion to the stituation. I am so worried about my children's future due to all the terrible things that are going on. Now we have the West Texas situation.
I had the news on all last night.
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I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
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