This is well written. I like the way you were able to give the reader the feelings of Zena. We felt her pride, her longing, her strength, and her defeat. I am glad that we got to know her.
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I feel the female scorned in this item. I have felt this feeling myself at times. I felt the emotions in this story. The roller coaster of emotions could drive anyone to revenge.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I like this page. I think that you should start an open ended item so that others could add their wisdom to this list. Maybe you could start a contest, and use the best in the list. I would like to see this list grow.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I might come back to take the time to actually read the entries here. I moved from Kentucky to Sarasota Florida. I have been told that my speech pattern is much different than what is spoken here. Where I come from, we are known to have MT DEW teeth, tabbacco spitting, coal diggen, horse racing, and red knecken. So I can not see the same things here. For me this is big city.
Kentucky is actually a place worth visiting. You wont get shot.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I agree. I heard that there was a person dying of cancer. The story goes that the patient would not allow anyone to enter his room with any sign of stress on their face. He continued to watch videos of things such as the Three Stugges. They say that he had a total recovery.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a cute story in poem form. I think that it flowed smooth, and the characters were introduced better in this poem than most items of rhyme. I think that the interaction between them is what makes the reader smile.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is so cute. I think that you did a great job telling a story all in dialog. It had a great flow, humor, and the ending was a surprise. I guess that there was a reason that the two of them separate.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I love this poem. The flow was equal to Zues. I loved how smooth it read. I have felt the passion that this poem is showing us. I know that there are times that I do not have a sheet paper, but I try to remember those words until I can write them down.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
This is a great poem. I see the passion of the writer for the last song. The format was easy on the eyes,a nd the fluency created an entertaining read.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
I love that there are three different stories. I had to smile. I remember those stories that we told me. My teachers, mother, and grandmother would gather the children and tell a story and hope that we would learn a lesson from them.
I didn't get around to writing my letter, but I still think that I will. I am impressed with the one that you wrote. Have you thought of writing it out or printing it. Then giving it to some one to send to you at six months. I did that wia class once, and I just received it back a couple weeks ago for last year. I was surprised that I had accomplished somethings.
I need to read chapter one shortly before really giving you a complete review. I think the character is growing well though this chapter. The format of the structure is soothing to my acheing eyes. The dialog is soomth and moves the story along effortless.
Please tell me that I am seeing this correctly. I do see two eggs for my hunt. I was getting so discouraged until Yellow Witch and cindy helped me understand. I think that I have a bad lag behind.
I love this story. I love how the rhymes with int itself. The words are inspiring to us. I really think that it is one that is encouraging to those of us that write poetry. I feel a little of zuess in the format.
I am reviewing this for the contest of the easter egg hunt. I know that I have read this before, but I found this story as wonderful this time as it was the first. I love the picture that you painted with your discriptions. I am more than happy to read it again.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and helping me out with this egg. I feel as though I can not get enough.
I am going to try to find just a list of our members so that I can check out the ports for eggs. I missed out on how to see my egg basket. I want to collect the eggs. Oh how do I know when some one has found one of my eggs so that I can remove that egg from my item?
This was a cool story with a twist on the tooth feary story. I like that the feary isn't the beautiful looking woman that most make her out to be. This was so interesting. I like how she had to save her own child by collecting teeth or bones. This was a fun story.
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.
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