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Review of sEek  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I love the story line. The characters worked with the story. The only thing that I had a problem with is my eyes. I would have liked the font to be a little larger.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am not sure how to review this story. I loved it. It had a great beginning. By using the verses at the very top of the work, it made me want to read more. The characters were introduced in a manner that reading this story was much like watching an episode on the television. The action was wonderful. You even added the Bible. This is a great work.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

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Ida

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Review of The Thunder Rolls  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. The character was well introduced. The paragraphs were formatted in such a way that they link together with no stumbling. This is a story that I would like to see in a longer form.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

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Ida

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Nice badges. I love learning to blog.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Tax Day  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I can see the world getting there. I know that this is a good work of fiction, but there may be more like that at that time unless we change our world now.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Slice of Life  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see that you love Dr Zeus in your writing. The rhyme is great. The flow is wonderful. And the story puts a smile on my face.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

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Ida

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Review of A Rehersal Of...  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is cute. The sceene in interesting and well formed. The flow is smooth. Most of all to me the type and spacing makes it easier on my eyes.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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Review of Intermezzo  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a cute story. I like the break down in the middle of the peice. The spacing was easy on my eyes. I really think that this is a fluent read.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story is cute. I could find myself watching Mom in her clamity. WE are never dress the way that we need to be when something happens. This makes me think of the words that have uttered from every mother's lips. "Do you have on clean underwear? You never know if you have an accident." This is one on us, mothers.

I when my daughter was little she frightened me by having her eyes stuck together with super glue. That mechine can not get me to the answers fast enough.

The only things that I would work differently is the title and spacing. Spacing between the paragraphs would help me read it easier with my bad sight. The title don't need the "e".


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (April 17, 2013)" 

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

http://writinglife.wix.com/ida_matilda_wright_port...!


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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cute story that I would like to see in a book oc children's short stories. I love the descriptions in this story. And by giving the moose emotion, the reader became the animal for the rest of the story. I think that this should have an illustration of when the moose had the dog in his mouth.

This was a fun and wonderful read.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Forever in Time  
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. It has come from the place that is hopeful. I like the AA BB rhyming format that you have chosen. This is well written, and it gets the message through with expertly chosen words.

The title caught my attention. Everyone is looking for a foreve in time so I wanted to see what the author's take on it was.

The read was smooth and enjoyable.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
for entry "Summons" 
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful chapter. I love the description of the fear in the message carring guard. I really am enjoying this book. I love that flow of each, and that there are no wasted words. Every word seems to be well chosen to create an entertaining read.

Thank you for another great read.
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
for entry "Terah am Shem" 
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh my God, I looked at you port to try to get some answers. I was so surprised to see the depth of this chapter. I was wondering how much have you studied the Bible. I loved how you created the houses of two our of three of the ark brothers.
I really enjoyed the read. The chapters are suprising short, but excellentally written.

This is an amazing to me.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
for entry "The Mask" 
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I did not love this as much as the prolog, but this is very interesting beging to the book. I find that the dialog is well fitted to the work. I love the sibbling ribbing that was going on even in such a serious situation. The descriptions in this item kept my attent and brought me into the story. I would like to see this as a movie.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The Sword of Elam  
for entry "Prologue" 
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow, I love reading this. I was surprised to see that these verses were chosen to introfuce a book. I have always loved this story, and thought about the effect of teh angles and the human off spring. I spend time wondering who are some of the people that we see today that may have decended from those marriabes.

This is one storyline that I am excited to read more.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of A Heavenly Throne  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well written, and the flow was smooth. I find that you were able to capture the beat of the item. The Symbols matched from line to line. This is a skill that I may never be able to accomplished. I have written poems since I was at leaste six, and I would love to have the ablility to keep the tone as well as you have.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am using the cases that I find in the writing 101 group to review due to writer's block. I have done about ten or so tonight, but this one made me litterally tear up. I am so tuched that you created this item, and I am going to push the fan button. I am so happy to see a place where our words truly do live after. I feeel as though what comes out of the heart still lives, so does the soul that those words came from.

Thank you so much for this wonderful place for our loved ones the members of writing.com family.

Ida
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In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am having problems with writer's block so I decided to review from the list of author's ports listed on the writing 101 group page.

I love your story line. I hope that you do have it published. I have read som many of the books that are out today that are so full of cruption. It will be nice to read about how God works in a literary read instead of how sex and drugs do.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I decided to take a break on the lesson. I have a bit of writer's block. I visited the writing 101 page. The thought hit me. I began at the top of the page and reviewing everyone that I can hit.

I read you recipes, and I am excited to try them. The chicken dish is the one that I am most excited about. I think that I will use the sause dribbled over a salad also. Maybe cut the chicken into cubes and add it all to a salad. I loved this folder.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Megan's Ballroom  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am reviewing names that I find on the writing 101 forum page. I found you there.

This is a beautiful page to visit. I followed the instructions from you bio, and here I am. It is so beautiful. Each picture seems to have a story of its own. The sentiment behind the thyme of the page is heart warming and goes well with the rest of the Writing.com family.

One day I may revisit this page to use those names in the posts to visit them.

Thank you for shaing this with us. I have become a fan.

Ida
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Review of Life (1st poem!)  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I was sent a members anniversary list from WDC Reviewers group.

Happy Anniversary!

I found this item and thought that I would give it a review as a gift.

I love the way you have formated with the colours. The flow is smooth and the lines were well connected.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I was sent a members anniversary list from WDC Reviewers group.

Happy Anniversary!

I found this item and thought that I would give it a review as a gift.

I love how easy you made this page to move from one item to another. I know you have been by my side since I joined November 2007. You deffinatly deserve that big numbers by your name.

Thank you from those who you have always made a difference.
Ida


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Review of A Jealous Muse  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I was sent a members anniversary list from WDC Reviewers group.

Happy Anniversary!

I found this item and thought that I would give it a review as a gift.

The title caught my attention. I have a jealous bone that runs from my hair to the souls of my feet. I had to read more.

I loved this dialog with the muse. It was a fun and exciting read. I would like to read a longer piece between the author and the muse.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Wind Toys  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (April 10, 2013)" 
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida

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