A poem that describes nature's transition .from daylight to darkness
|Review. Of: Moonshadow Sky
By: Julia Milano
Review by :express
I enjoyed your poem very much. Moonshadow respects the natural beauty of nature. Please keep writing about nature.
Connecting with nature rejuvenates our spirit. Your tribute to nature is well written.
I did not notice any grammatical errors. Moonshadow is misspelled. The spell check indicated Moon Shadow. Of course your title is your creative license.
My emotions were awakened to nature's many shadows and shades of color. The wide range of colors in natures rainbow.The colorful aspects of nature mirror human emotions. Your poem has a deep emotional impact for me. It is a reminder to set aside time to appreciate nature's gifts to humanity.
Rhythm and Flow:
I noticed a connection between the color palette and the depth of human emotions. Your. artistic. weaving. the different. aspects. intrigued me. I appreciated the crafting of both aspects of your poem. The techniques applied represented rhythm to me.
Moonshadow Sky is very expressive! I savored your colorful use of words. Your technique is similar to an artist painting a watercolor. I feel your skillful use of words made a beautiful. poem.
Time and Place:
The soft transition from daylight to dusk to night's darkness.
Your description is unique. Life is full of transitions. Your poem is a gentle reminder of life's high and lows.
My imagination took me to a small harbor. on a rural lake. You were. sitting. in a comfortable. deck chair. God was painting. your poem in your mind.