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Review of Autumnal Spirits  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dave,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Autumnal Spirits.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about pixies dancing will enjoy this wee tale.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: When the writer adds the prompt image to the poem so I can see what the inspiration was.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Fairy’s Favor  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Joy,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Fairy’s Favor.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about fairies will love this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The images the words created.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*OTHER THINGS OUT OF PLACE: I told her, “You give me blues.” -- I think the blues might make this sound better. What do you think?

My friend I need her be.” -- to be may sound better -- What do you think?

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Nikola,

I just took a peek at your contest page, I'll Give You a Sentence Contest. I love the whimsical professor at the top of the page. He makes one stop and think.

*GlassesB*APPEAL: Those who like a challenge of using a starter sentence for a story will enjoy this contest.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s simple and straight to the point.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Word count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*The prompt is displayed and easy to find.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I DIDN’T LIKE: nothing

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HunterMoon,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Eye of the Goddess. Love the picture of the eye that‘s all sparkly with magic.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about mysterious gems and travels will love this poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: Your way with words. The entire poem is quite inviting.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full wonder and awe.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi turtlemoon,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

Like your user name.

I just read your wee poem, Return My River of Tears".

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about lost love will like this poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The emotions evoked by the words.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad and lonely even a wee bit depressed.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Heart Of Darkness  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Heart Of Darkness.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the Devil will like this poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The images your words invoke and the rhythm.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad for those who fall prey to the Devil’s temptations.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, The Ornaments on a Christmas Tree.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about Christmas and it’s magical memories will love this poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The way it made me feel.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: AA bit sad, yet happy at the wonderful memories the ornaments had to share. I even shed a few tears being the old softie I am..

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS: This a beautiful poem written from the heart. I wish there was more.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Kåre,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Of mice, owls and moonflowers.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about moonlight and night predators will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The emotions the words provoked.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: a bit of panic and fear.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Lady Of The Pond  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi kaleesta,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Lady Of The Pond.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about finding love will enjoy this poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The unique images that come to mind from the words.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of curiosity.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of End of a Life  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Shawn,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, End of a Life.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who are fascinated with death and dying will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: All the valid points this poem makes.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Curious about my own death.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Gracie--Ready for NaNo09,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, The Captain and the White Lady.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about unfound love will like this poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The way the two parts seem to go hand in hand.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad at what these two felt and had to endure.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi DragonWrites~The Fire Faerie~ ,

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at ShadowWorks Sig by Outlaw Poet.

*TieDye1*WHAT I LIKED: It’s a castle and they go so well in fantasy tales. It’s dark and mysterious and makes me wonder what sort of folks, or creature live there.

*TieDye1*APPEAL: Those who like castles, medieval things, and fantasy will love this signature.

*TieDye1*The image matches the title quite well.
*TieDye1*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*TieDye1*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*TieDye1*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*TieDye1*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Wriath-Childe  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Amarok,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Wriath-Childe.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read poems or wee tales that makes one shiver will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The images your words created.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Gave me the shivers.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Angels in my ear~reviewing,

I just took a peek at your contest page, Shadows and Light Poetry Contest.

*GlassesB*APPEAL: Those who like contests that challenge the poet in them will like this one.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love the picture at the top of the page. It‘s quite inspiring.

*UmbrellaP*The rules are easy to read and understand.
*UmbrellaP*Due date is clearly posted.
*UmbrellaP*Poetry, the line count is stated.
*UmbrellaP*Contest states whether or not entry can or can not be edited once posted.
*UmbrellaP*The contest tells the reader how to post her entry.
*UmbrellaP*The use of color on this page gave it some flare. The colors caught the reader’s eye and make things easier to find.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I DIDN’T LIKE: Nothing.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ArtCrusade,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, The Devil Within.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the Devil, Hell and Demons will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The images your words created.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit afraid.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Christina,

I just reread your wee tale, The House on Black Brook Road. I love the picture of the house used to inspire this tale.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about ghosts and haunted houses will like this tale.


*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The tale reads smoother this time through.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit scared.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*OTHER THINGS OUT OF PLACE: The house had dry, and big white windows but most of the windows were broken. -- I’m not sure what you mean by The house had dry -- dry what? And this is just a suggestion: you used windows twice, maybe you could replace the second windows with the glass was broken out on most of them or something like this.

I looked to see anything out of the ordinary. -- this would read better like this: I looked to see if anything was out of the ordinary.

When I turned around there was no one there. -- this sentence is okay as is, yet it could be made tighter like this: When I turned around no one was there.

Eve would help me finish the clean up the house and paint the rooms. -- the house isn’t needed in this sentence. It reads better this way: Eve would help me finish the clean up and paint the rooms.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS: This is a wonderful beginning for a longer tale if you want to make it longer. You could answer who the ghost lady is and what happened to her. I get that Abigail met the same fate as the ghost, yet some of the readers may not realize this.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of And She Must Play  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi The Quilldragon,

I just read your wee tale, Here Comes Halloween.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about Halloween and witches will like this tiny story.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The boldness of Shera.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit disappointed. I wish there was more to this tale, yet I realize it was written for a contest and words are limited.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*Characters: Shera, a nice and unusual name for a witch. I like it.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue tags.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Angus,

I just read your wee tale, The Treat...And The Trick.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about Halloween and vampires will like this tiny tale.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The surprise Fritz got.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit disappointed. I wish there was more to this taele.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*Characters: Fritz comes across as a lonely old gentleman wanting someone to pay attention to him.

*Cat*NAMES: Fritz fits this character nicely.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Sparkle Fairy  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Amethyst&EmeraldFlame,

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Sparkle Fairy.

*TieDye1*WHAT I LIKED: The wee message at the top. Where beauty lies, you will also find purple desire.

*TieDye1*APPEAL: Those who like fairies will love this great signature.

*TieDye1*The image matches the title quite well.
*TieDye1*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*TieDye1*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*TieDye1*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Star Fairies  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi InkWellspring66,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Star Fairies.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about fairies and stars will love this tiny poem.


*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The images the words created.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy and alive.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hi Christina,

I just read your wee tale, The House on Black Brook Road.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read ghost stories or about hauntings will love this story.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: That the lady was determined to stay even though her new house was haunted.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: Full of encouragement.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*Characters: The main character came across as being far braver than I would ever be in the same situation.

*Cat*NAMES: I wish you would have given the lady a name. I realize that’s a bit harder when writing in the first person.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OH DRATS!

I got on my vehicle and went to the motel. -- is on suppose to be in? earlier in the tale I got the impression she drove up in a car.

She opened the door and saw a shadow walk past the hall. -- I think you accidentally omitted in between past and the.

The monster's eyes were like two burning charcoals; her smile like of a raccoons. -- her smile like that of a raccoon’s.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of A Dragon's Sorrow  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Wist,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, A Dragon's Sorrow.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about lost love will find this heart breaking, yet beautiful.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: That a powerful dragon could hurt by losing his true love.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad, it brought a few tears to my eyes.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Amelie,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Dark Purple Sparks.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry will find this interesting.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: All the comparisons made.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit unsure of myself.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Shaara,

I just read your wee tale, An Old Book of Poetry.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about angels will find this tale interesting with it’s twist.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The twist that the angel looked more like a homeless person instead of the typical normal person with wings.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: It made me feel all warm and fuzzy, and me smile.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*Characters: The homeless guy seems genuine and full of awe. The angel more supernatural.

*Cat*NAMES: Names would have been nice, yet they didn‘t seem necessary with this tale.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue tags.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of "The Mind's Cafe"  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Haunted Scribbler,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, "The Mind's Cafe".

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read poetry will enjoy this wee one.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: It simple and straight forward.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile and brightened a dark spot today.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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