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Review of Daemons  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi HuntersMoon,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Daemons.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about troublemakers getting what’s coming to them will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: That the troublemaker bite off more than he could chew.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Justified.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OH DRATS!
but to me your (you‘re) just plaster secured by three nails!”

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Last Sunset  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Kaylee,

I just read your wee tale, The Last Sunset.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about dying will like this tiny tale.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: How peaceful her dying was.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: at peace

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:

*Cat*WHAT I DIDN’T LIKE:

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Lady Of Mortality  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hi Summer Wind is Healing,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Lady Of Mortality.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about dying will find this interesting.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The bravery of this soul.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*OTHER THINGS OUT OF PLACE:

*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi LAM,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, TREASURES IN A LOCKED DRAWER.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about hidden secrets revealed will love this heart warming poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The love I can feel in the words.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Sad and it made me cry.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS: What a beautiful and heart warming poem.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Lianarias Marie,

I just read your wee tale, Haunts of the Past.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about murder will find this prologue very intriguing.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The mystery set up in such few words. Who is the dead guy. What are the café owner and Tristan going to do? Why did the dead man enter this café?

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: Wanting to know more.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue tags.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Heart Shaped Box  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Ida,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Heart Shaped Box.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about love and Valentines will like this tiny poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The comparison of emotions to candy.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Night Beings  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Senseless Poet,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Night Beings.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about death will like this.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit uneasy.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OH DRATS!
I am darkness , -- remove space
I am night,
I am all,
I am fright.

Upon the last of late hour,
i wait upon the fate of our kind. -- capitalize I

Crawling among trees, dwindling in the deep seas,
a part of all and none we are creatures of beyond. -- capitalize A

Dance in the flickering lights, reminiscent beings of ancient time.
Those eyes, yellow to most of our own; black, blue, brown rest are shown.

Inside the unreachable distance of the grove we hide,
only the willing sees us change side, subside and flicker, outside the sight -- capitalize O

In dreams we speak; Long unspoken speech to teach.
For those with eyes of brown in belief, goes black in true heresy.
Now Nightmongers of life, listen to words to repeat.
These among beings undefined just see, our yellow eyes, or shape to be.

I am those,
I am wonder,
I strike in the darkness,
I am not alone,

For as you read you see, we hunger, we must eat;
we must take in the soul of those already starved in blue waters -- Capitalize W

It is the tears we take before the deathbed and in the head - still we hunger for more

Eyes of blue because sea has been them true
We take it all and make it grey,
we take it so they are with the skies and fade. -- Capitalize W
For each blind man come,
our hunger is satisfied. -- Capitalize O

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Greg,

I just read your wee tale, The legend of the What Cat.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about creating a universe will find this an interesting tale to read.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: How the Fourth Dreaming was created

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: Curious

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*Characters: These character would seem more real if they had a gender. He/she for both is a bit confusing.

*Cat*NAMES: nice unusual names for your characters -- I like that.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OH DRATS!

The legend of the What Cat -- The Legend of the What Cat

*Cat*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue tags.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS: However, within this Divine Room, Khaliq had a number of things that he/she found comforting and fun. -- Which gender is Khaliq?

Among these were six pets: a cat, a wolf, a hen, a fly, a cow and a school of fish. So, with a sly look on his/her face, Iblis said, "How about in the next universe that you create, you base the principles that govern all of existence on your six pets?" -- Which gender is Iblis?

*Cat*WHAT I DIDN’T LIKE: That you didn‘t give Khaliq and Iblis a gender.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi invisible_girl,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, The Letter of the Sea.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the sea will love this wee poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The words make the sea seem alive as if she was a person, not just water.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of wonder.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Shannon,

I just read your wee tale, Willow, the Green Witch of Gloucester.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about witches, magic and best friends will love this wee tale.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: How comfortable Penney was with Willow being a witch.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile, especially at the end.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*Characters: Both Willow and Penney are believable.

*Cat*NAMES: The names you chose suit both characters nicely.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue tags.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Ian Sea,

I’ve always have a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Barefoot and Wandering.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about sleeping walking and waking to find oneself in strange places will like this tiny poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: That the sleepwalker remained calm upon waking in a strange place.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Relief that the sleepwalker was unharmed.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS: This begs to be longer and turned into a story. What happened to the sleepwalker’s car? How often does this person sleepwalk? Does something set it off, like eating the wrong thing?

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Two Shadows  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi bob,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, The Two Shadows.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about shadows in our dreams will find this interesting.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The images the words created.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: I‘m not sure.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OH DRATS!
In a dream their (there) is no reflection on where our body sleeps.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of White Horses  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Don Two,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, White Horses.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about growing wings and flying will enjoy this tiny poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The freedom that wings brought to him.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Like soaring through the air.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Incurable Romantic,

I just read your wee tale, The Meaning of a Snowfall.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about tributes to loved ones will find this heartbreaking and full of emotion.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: This beautiful tribute to your wife.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: Heartbroken and sad. It made me cry because I can hear your pain in the words.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS: Please think about putting spacing between your paragraphs to make it easier on the eyes to read on a computer screen.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Evil wind  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi L. A.,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, Evil Wind.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about knights and dragon will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The words made the wind seem alive.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Inspired.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of ASLEEP  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Onyx: a PURPLE MANIAC!,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, ASLEEP.

I love purple, too.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about dreams and dreaming will find this charming and a delight to read.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: That wonderful things can happen in dreams.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It brightened my day.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Warrior Princess  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Madison,

I just read your wee tale, Warrior Princess.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about winning a war will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: That the princess is questioning whether is worth it.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: Encourage that the princess realizes what war cost her.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of nevermore  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi witchhunter34,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, nevermore.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read dark poetry will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The vivid scene the words painted.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A wee bit sad.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Sleepwalker  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Connieann,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, The Sleepwalker.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about sleepwalking will like this tiny poem.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: That she felt bad when she discovered what she was doing in her sleep.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Wanting th help. I battle the bulge so I know how frustrating it can get when no matter what you do the scale refuses to budge.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.


*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Edgar,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem, A Night for a Walk.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read poems about unusual murders will like.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm of the words.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit numb

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Silverwindrose Guiding Dragons,

Welcome to The Coffee Shop for the Fantasy. I love your user name. I am extremely fond of dragons and wolves, too.

I just read your wee tale, Natarra - garden dragon - in progress.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about dragons will find this a great beginning to a novel it seems.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The courage the tiny garden dragon showed.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: Excited, I want to read more about this wee dragon.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OH DRATS!

If one was look close enough, one might see the smallest kind of dragons, (the) garden dragon.

I cannot help but be proud of my colors, the deep red of my wing tips that faded through the oranges and in to (into) my body that was a golden rod (goldenrod) yellow in color that shifted to an emerald green on my underbelly and my head was a deep blue color.

No (one) was out of the wooden cave looking for her but (comma) I could hear loud noises coming from the wooden cave that made me want to run and hide.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS: I cannot help but be proud of my colors the deep red of my wing tips that faded through the oranges and in to my body that was a golden rod yellow in color that shifted to an emerald green on my underbelly and my head was a deep blue color. -- nice vivid description of the garden dragon

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Jill's Jigsaw  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hi Remy,

I just read your wee tale, Jill's Jigsaw.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to creepy tales will like this one.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: How thoughtful Jill’s husband was.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: A bit grossed out.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

OH DRATS!

The picture was of her in bed, and in the corner, she could see a strange mans (man’s) reflection in the mirror as he took the picture.

As she held the phone to her ear, she heard her husbands (husband’s) phone ring in the house.

Beginning to panic, she looked around, and saw him standing in the door to her bed room. (bedroom)

*Cat*OTHER THINGS OUT OF PLACE: To make it easier on the eyes to read on a computer screen, you should put spaces between all paragraphs.

Jill smiled as she found the box on the counter.
“Steve, did you get me another puzzle?” she called, tossing her keys on the counter.
“Hmm, he must have gone out for something. I'll go ahead and start the puzzle, so that I can thank him when he gets back.”
Talking to herself could be considered a bad habit, but she didn't care, as she went to the hall closet and pulled out her puzzle board. Taking the board to the kitchen table, she opened the box of pieces, which was blank.
“He must have had a custom puzzle made for me, he's so sweet,” she thought.
Sitting at the table, she started putting the puzzle together, turning all of the pieces upside down, to make it more of a challenge, and then separating the edge pieces from the interior ones.

This sounds like one whole paragraph. And could be written this way.
Jill smiled as she found the box on the counter. “Steve, did you get me another puzzle?” she called, tossing her keys on the counter. “Hmm, he must have gone out for something. I'll go ahead and start the puzzle, so that I can thank him when he gets back.” Talking to herself could be considered a bad habit, but she didn't care, as she went to the hall closet and pulled out her puzzle board. Taking the board to the kitchen table, she opened the box of pieces, which was blank. “He must have had a custom puzzle made for me, he's so sweet,” she thought. Sitting at the table, she started putting the puzzle together, turning all of the pieces upside down, to make it more of a challenge, and then separating the edge pieces from the interior ones.



*Cat*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue tags.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Fingerprints 2  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Moarzjasac,

I’ve always had a hard time reviewing poetry. The patterns Example: "a,a,b,b,b,a", have always confused me.

I just read your wee poem,Fingerprints 2.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to sentimental poems will like this.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: It makes me feel good.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*FLOW: This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Black Roses  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Amay,

I just read your wee tale, Black Roses.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about losing a loved one will find this heartbreaking and sad.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: The brave front Angie put on.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: Sad, instead of getting married Angie had to bury her love.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Everything seems okay.

*Cat*OTHER THINGS OUT OF PLACE: You need to put spaces between the paragraphs to make it easier to read.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Carousel  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Jellyfish,

I just read your wee tale, Carousel.

*Cat*APPEAL: Those who like to read about haunted carousels will like this tiny tale.

*Cat*WHAT I LIKED: You painted a vivid scene with so few words.

*Cat*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile.

*Cat*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.

*Cat*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*Cat*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*Cat*GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.

Seems to be alright.

*Cat*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view the story is being told from.

*Cat*FLOW: This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*My review is only my humble opinion, and is only meant to be helpful to you, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone. If you don't agree with something I said or suggested, that is your right as the author. No matter what though: Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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