I found this noted in the Romance Workshop and I found it to be very interesting and helpful. I am bookmarking it for future reference. I loved reading it and I thought you did a wonderful job on it. I like the examples you pointed out and hope to put this to use in my own writing.
I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. I couldn't find a thing wrong to make note of or any suggestions to make. I think this is a beautiful and heartfelt piece. People don't think about the children that suffer in times such as these. Excellent job.
I came across this piece and out of curiosity decided to read it. I thought you did a great job expressing your feelings. I found one mistake poor should be pour. Other than that, I thought you did a great job. I understand the feelings and the lack of help from anyone including family and friends.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a great job on this. I truly enjoyed reading it. Sometimes I think I have to live in a dream world to deal with reality. Just makes it easier and takes away some of the anxiety and stress.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a great job on this. I would suggest putting spacing between your paragraphs, to me this is neater and easier to read. Also, Mr should have a period after it and 2 cent should be 2 cents. Other than that I thought you did a great job.
I read this piece and I had to laugh. I thought you did a wonderful job and I didn't find a thing to make note of. You have some great advice about spelling/grammar & punctuation.
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Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. It's heartfelt and honest. A note...I should always be capitalized when used pertaining to one's self.
I'm scared,confused,and helpless (spaces after commas)
Remember this is your work and you are under no obligation to make changes to your work. This is just my opinion.
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Now for your review....I thought this is very well written and very touching. This piece is heartfelt and honest. I thought you did a wonderful job.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought this piece to be well written and interesting to read. You brought a smile to my face thinking about the dreams I have. I thought you did a great job. But I would recommend putting this in a more of poem style...each line...seperated? Not sure. It's up to you. This is your piece.
I thought you did a great job describing. You made me think of a few different things. I couldn't find a thing to make note of. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
I Welcome you again to WDC and if you should have any questions or need a hand give me a shout, I'm always around.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. I enjoyed reading it and I have only one note of an error below.
Its up to me! (It's)
(c:blue}I've noticed each line exactly like this one is spelled the same. My notation goes for all of them.
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Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. It is short and to the point. I thought it had a nice rhythm to it and I enjoyed reading it. I couldn't find a thing wrong and I liked the bolding and underlining. Gave more emphasis on that part.
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Now for your review....I enjoyed reading this. I thought this was great and I suggest taking the caps off. However, if this was intentional please leave it. By no means are you under any obligation to take my suggestion. I thought you did a great job and I couldn't find anything else to make note of.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this. I couldn't find a thing to make note of. You did a great job describing the fear of a child during a fire. Excellent work!
You did a wonderful job on this and I thank you for sharing. I couldn't find a thing wrong to make note of. You filled this with your heart and pain. A nice tribute to your mother and I've enjoyed reading it. I could feel your pain and your tears.
I had to smile when reading this and I truly enjoyed the names you've included and their locations. It's interesting for sure and you're right when friends have to go. I'm in Ny, so I'm WDC time. Just in case you'd like to know.
Again, I couldn't find a thing to make note of and I thought you did another wonderful job.
I thought this was adorable and wonderful. You did a wonderful job on this piece and I love the idea. I think it's interesting to know where all the people here come from. I've talked to so many from differently places all over the world.
I couldn't find a thing wrong and I can't wait to read more of your work in the future.
I thought this was great. I enjoyed reading it and thought it was beautiful and touching. I did make note of one little tiny thing and that was a simple space after a comma in your third paragraph, 2nd line.
I enjoyed the image and always think they add something more to the piece I'm reading.
I thought this was well written and I enjoyed reading it. However, I would make note of the double punctuation. Unless of course this is something you intended. Remember any suggestions or notations are simply opinions and nothing more. You are under no obligation to make changes you don't want to to your work.
I thought this was great! I loved it. Though I could think of numerous more that could be added. Those are the ones I find annoying though. I couldn't find a thing wrong and I thought it was excellently written.
I hope to read more of your work and Welcome to WDC!
I thought you did an absolutely perfect job on this piece. I thought of the man I love and truly enjoyed reading this. I thought it was heartfelt and loving. I couldn't find a thing wrong and I hope to read more of your work in the future.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you've done a wonderful job on this piece and I've truly enjoyed reading it. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this and I couldn't find a thing to make note of. Although this was short and simply. I would say you could add more to it. However, this is up to you completely.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I think you've done a wonderful job on this. However, I would recommend separating this out into paragraphs and even adding to it. Now, mind you, you are under no obligation to make changes to your work. This is simply my opinion, nothing more.
Wow! I thought this was truthful and honest. I have one such friend that I can truly count on. I am thankful for her and know she will always be there no matter what as I am for her.
I couldn't find a thing to make note of and I truly thought this is perfect.
Keep up the great writing!
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Those are the ones I find annoying though. I couldn't find a thing wrong and I thought it was excellently written.