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Now for your review....I loved it. I thought you did a wonderful job with this piece. I would recommend removing all the spacing between each line...maybe breaking it down into small paragraphs. (Just a suggestion and you are under no obligation to make the change). I enjoyed reading the memories, I thought they were sweet and beautiful. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no other suggestions to make.
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Now for your review....You brought a smile to my face when I read this piece. I thought it was absolutely precious. Beautifully written. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent work!
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Now for your review....I thought this was perfect. I found it beautiful and heartfelt and loving. You did a wonderful job showing your kindness and understanding to another whose pain was unmistaskable. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. Excellent work!
I truly enjoyed reading this. I thought it was heartfelt and well written. To me it flowed nicely. I thought of my fiance before we found each other and how I used to look at him. I found not mistakes to make note of. I have no suggestions.
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Now for your review....I read the description of why you wrote this. I thought you did a wonderful job. I thought it was very interesting and heartfelt. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent work.
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Now for your review....I thought you wrote this perfectly. I had to smile at some of the statements you've made. I know what you mean and I feel it with the man I'm about to marry. Excellent work! I couldn't find a thing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make.
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Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this. I enjoyed reading it and had to smile. I loved your opening comments. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent work!
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Now for your review....I thought you did an excellent job on this piece. I enjoyed reading it and thought of what it would like to be alone and I know I would feel the same. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.
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Now for your review....I think this is an awesome tribute and I hope you shared this with the person. I know I would be honored. I found one thing which I made note of below and I have no suggestions. Great Job!
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Now for your review....Excellent work. I think you put your heart into this one. I enjoyed reading it and thought of the time when that might have been my children. Thank God things have changed and they are happy now. I hope the girl has found happiness and the past buried where it belongs. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.
Beautiful! I have children of my own and I just can't imagine and it breaks my heart to read or hear of another child being hurt. You did a wonderful job. I did make a note of a couple of things below.
Shes was the prettiest little girl, Shes should be She
But now shes gone. shes should be she's
And he didnt love her that much. didnt should be didn't
And hit her until she couldnt clutch. couldnt should be couldn't
Until her dad got drunk and would begin to unwound. unwound should be unwind
And now her soul begins to raise. raise should be rise
And she walks in heaven with god by her side, god should be God
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Now for your review....I thought you did a wonderful job on this piece. I've enjoyed reading this and I thought you filled this with heart and pain. Excellent. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make.
I love it. You said it perfectly. This is what I am trying to teach my children and sometimes it seems like a never ending battle. Yet, I know this is not always true, but there are those that appreciate the kindness of others and the well meaning words. Maybe the world would be a much better place if everyone followed: Do unto others as you want done unto you.
I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have absolutely no suggestions to make. Excellent work!
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Now for your review....I thought you did a great job on this piece. You painted a beautiful picture and I found nothing wrong to make note of. I also have no suggestions to make. Excellent work.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I am a single mother of three and I had to smile. I think this is a beautiful tribute to your mother and she should be proud. I know I would be. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. I hope you shared this with your mother.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I came across this piece and thought you did a wonderful job on it. I read it through and remembered how my life once was. I feel for all who live a life such as this. Everyone deserves to have their love returned and treated well. I do have one suggestion...We were to ge ther then and deep in love.to ge ther should be one word Unless this was intentional. Otherwise this is just a suggestion and you are by no means under any obligation to change anything.
I thought this was great. I have to agree with you and if you ever find Elsewhere be sure to let me know. I think most people are looking for the same thing, always somewhere other than where they are living. Excellent work. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make.
Wow! I absolutely love this piece. I thought it was perfect. I had to smile as I've been on the bad side of a relationship. Thankfully, I'm on the good side now. I couldn't find a thing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make.
I dropped in and found this piece. I thought it was perfect. I had to laugh knowing I'm the same way. I absolutely love this site and have since day one. I thought you did an awesome job on this and I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I thought you did a great job on this piece. I could picture this girl and felt for her. I had a similar life and I somehow found a way out of it. I wish her the best and pray for the children. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I found this and I thought you did a great job. I enjoyed reading this and know that some decisions are impossible to make no matter what there is hurt. I found one thing to make note of...I lied awake and cried, lied should be lie. Other than that, you did a great job.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....Interesting. I enjoyed reading this and thought you did a good job on it. It's nice to know the inner thinking of a writer. I would suggest that you put spacing between your paragraphs, makes it easier to read. I also noticed you used the word "that" a lot. I find myself doing it a lot as well. However, a suggestion. Write it as you want at first. But then go back and read it over. If "that" can be changed to something else or even eliminated then do so. I've found that I can eliminate more than half of "that" I use. Remember this is just a suggestion and nothing more.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I came across this piece and I enjoyed reading it. I thought you did a great job and I couldn't find a thing wrong to make note of. I have no suggestions to make.
I hope you enjoy your stay here. WDC is packed full with lots of wonderful people, advice and friendships. If you ever need a hand please don't hesitate to ask. Someone is always available to lend a hand or point you in the right direction. My emails always available and I'm always here.
Now for your review....I came across this piece and thought you did an excellent job. You made me think and you held my attention. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.
Wow! I thought you did an excellent job on this piece. I had no problem with your descriptions or grammar. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions to make. You caught my attention and held it straight through. I would love to find out the outcome but I think it's best left to my imagination. Thank you for a great read.
Keep up the great writing!
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I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions. Excellent work!
Thank God things have changed and they are happy now. I hope the girl has found happiness and the past buried where it belongs. I found nothing wrong to make note of and I have no suggestions.