I do believe a woman possesses a profound intuitive ability to sense an innate presence, which some call a voice or reason, to guide them in times of uncertainty.
Your poem, for me, speaks of your ability to see and hear your own small voice.
Your gift of articulation is appreciated by this reader.
Oh wow, I felt a sense of your loss after reading your poem.
You are indeed a special talent, able to tell about your innermost emotions with grace and dignity.
Bravo!
Wow! You are a special talent; someone who knows exactly how to articulate their innermost feelings beautifully. I'd say that you and your true love have found paradise here on earth.
I loved it!
Your poem is filled with raw emotions that speak the truth.
Anyone whose heart is filled with bigotry and hatred will never so much as smell God's fragrance.
All of God's children are unique and special, but those who turn away with closed-minds, I believe, will never experience true love.
Bravo!
Wow! You are indeed a talented writer and may I add, a very courageous woman.
I believe everyone has the right to be themselves, and although I do not understand your love for another woman, I certainly respect your birth-right.
People fear what they do not understand, and I believe their fear manifests ignorance and hate. You are helping people to understand that love is healing and freeing.
God bless you!
The message wrapped inside your poem is one of honesty and truth. There can never be true growth without pain.
Learning to live life in the moment is one of the greatest lessons we can ever learn, and to live our lives without always complaining draws to us that which seems elusive, but it really at the tips of our fingers.
I love this poem because it speaks directly to me.
Thank you for adding so much insight, honesty and integrity to this site.
I love it!
We are what we decide to be, and I'm so inspired that the beggar chose to be grateful, and displayed
actions of kindness and dignity despite the rhetoric of others. You were indeed blessed to have been able to observe humankind's best.
Bravo!
Oh, your poem is so romantic!
You articulate beautifully your innermost feelings of love and sadness.
Sometimes, letting go is the hardest thing we ever do.
Bravo!
Your story was quite a wake-up call.
I became so engrossed with your tale about son, that it never dawned on me that you could be anything less than a wonderful parent.
You've done a sensational job of cracking the secret about the marijuana, and hope your story becomes wide-spread and read by many.
By the way, what are 'bearly dressed girls?
I'm a fan of Quentin Tarantino and to just dismiss his genius with alleging that his films depict his
violent upbringing is quite a low blow. I understand that you were trying to incorporate humor, but, for me, it missed the mark.
Don't misunderstand, I think you have a great idea, and probably are a fascinating writer, but an interview with someone of Tarantino's prominence should be well thought out and executed.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
You are a genius at articulating your innermost emotions; emotions that I dare say most of us have experienced at one time or another.
It's a time, I've discovered not to resist, but to lie in the silence, feel and learn.
Bravo!
I love it!
You've articulated from your heart the social problems we face today with brilliant metaphors.
I hope to read more of your work because I find it to be absolutely intriguing.
Bravo!
We all want to be loved, don't we?
Your forgiving nature is to be admired because it shows your strength and your ability to forgive. I also saw in you determination to navigate your own future.
Fascinating read.
I love it!
Questions always provide the answer, particularly those that are personal and can only be answered from within.
You are obviously very intuitive and quite brilliant.
You've articulated that familiar pain so very well.
Defeat is so real to many of us, but as you so beautifully articulate, it will fade into the background, and hopefully for some, they will become wiser and stronger.
Wow! You are truly gifted!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work, particularly seeing the truth in bold print. Not too many people are as insightful as you, and the Heart Key, as I've discovered, needs to be treated with the utmost respect at all time.
Bravo!
The message wrapped inside your poem is one everyone should find.
You have the gift!
I truly hope your poem finds it way throughout the world and touches souls that are lonely and sad because it truly is a healing balm.
Bravo!
I love it!
I think most everyone can relate to your poem because time has a way of slipping by so quickly especially when we're I love. You've done an excellent job of articulating your innermost feelings, which took my breath away.
Bravo!
Your poem is so poignant and beautiful.
Your expressions are soulful and depict someone who is truly in tune with human nature, which
is not perfection, but imperfection, and you are among the very rare to be able to see the truth.
It was a pleasure to read your work. Needless to say, I'm very inspired.
One thing I noticed: 'no wheres'
Wow! Your tribute to those angles now in Heaven is positively a tearjerker.
You are obviously a very intuitive and gentle spirit; someone who understands and cherishes
every breath of life.
Thank you for this elocution of profound wisdom.
Oh, you are indeed a talent to behold.
It was a pleasure to read your work, and I must say, it felt as though it was meant just for me today since
I was pondering the thoughts of finding myself.
Bravo!
Bravo! Your poem is delightfully funny and refreshing.
You've done an excellent job with your rhyming scheme, and at the same time made your
thoughts very entertaining.
Write on ...
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/lola999/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/4
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.24 seconds at 2:23pm on May 02, 2024 via server web2.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
