What a loving and inspiring piece this is, and you know I really could see the immerging underneath the water and a healing taking place as the bright golden light enwrapped itself around the person submerged! It was truly lovely to see...thank you so much for sharing and it was written beautifully and with uncompromising love.
Sincerely
Marlena
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I hear what you’re saying very clear! That someone has stopped listening to your screams and wailing...now maybe it's time to put that all behind and start talking in a calm and soothing frame of mind....Now they can hear you....And if that doesn't work maybe it's time to move on to another chapter in your life...this is what I'm hearing and that may not be your intention at all....But then I'm listening.... Thanks for the great read and welcome to Writing.Com.
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Mduci
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'Your Mirror,' is another one of my favorites and I enjoyed reading and getting a glance into the life of a seventeen year old. I love the gentle way in which it was written and told and the love that mirror has for her young mistress...Good luck with your writing very exceptional....
Sincerely
Marlena
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Seems I discover more on the public pages than I do in you port...how did I miss this when I came looking? Is there some little cupboard that is hidden from my eyes when I look? LOL....but I came rushing like the dickens when I read the review on this piece I assumed must be xx sensual....'Oh! Says I, let me run right on by, and pay my best to this kitten.' What I found was a lovely, tender, gentle piece written by a wonderful, dear friend and sister..........Totally beautiful, thank you for sharing....
Love always
Marlena
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Thought I'd keep up the great laughter you gave me this morning...so I continued on and guess what I found on this diamond on the mound? And a real fancy day to impress, thank you for the Kudos’ from yours truly and for the rhyme about my Circle of Sisters, they must come over and read. I will leave them a little note in the kitchen....Great work and keep it coming friend Meg....
This is absolutely wonderful...can't tell you how much it made me laugh...and what a laugh I got when it came to our friend BKC...keep up the great writing my dear friend and hope all is going well in the Outback these days. Great read and wonderfully written.....
Hugs
Marlena
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This story is charming and a real hook-up for anyone visiting Cost Rica. I for one am thrilled with the knowledge of the low cost medical care that most other countries afford to not only their own citizen’s but to those newly arrived or just visiting....When will we have this kind of privilege in our lovely country? Thank you so much for sharing...
Love
Marlena
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I'm assuming that you are from the UK, not because I'm a physic but because the way you spell color or colour as is special to the UK....Okay; now back to your story! Oh, I think it is darling and I love the flow and the way she makes him wait...this couldn't get much better....keep up the good work Ellie....One tiny suggestion if you don't mind....maybe double space the words so they appear a little neater on the page.
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Marlena Duci
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Welcome to this months Rising Stars Shining Brighter contest.
What a delightful story and so very descriptive and thank you for the new word from the outback 'chook' I really enjoyed it very much....I could see the visuals so clear....frogs in the bath tub...ugh....thank you for sharing your experience and good luck in the contest....
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Marlena
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Welcome to this months Rising Stars Shining Brighter contest...
Thank you for this heart warming story of what it means to have a higher hope in your life and know that there is more to life then what we are learning in school. Glad you were able to over come... And thank you for sharing with our Circle of Sisters and good luck in the contest.
Sincerely
Marlena
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Thank you for entering this months Rising Stars Shining Brighter contest.
My deepest sympathy to you and yours dear Meg, and what a lovely tribute to your dear sister in-law for her wonderful contribution to you and her brother....She is as you say with you always and this piece proves just how much....Beautiful Meg and thank you for sharing with our Circle of Sisters and good luck in the contest....
Sincerely
Marlena
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Absolutely beautiful...every line flowed so wonderful from the lips...very easy to decipher and I truly loved these lines:
'If thy heart and mine will transform from friend to lover
For I know there is none other in this world for me
And on the morrow to e’er after -
I will be here, awaiting you.'
Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com
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Mduci
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Well I think you've already started that path that will put you in the drivers seat...you see yourself as there and that is a good thing. When you let your light shine people will take notice from just the way you walk, with that upright I know who's in charge of me content. From your smile that comes from within and not just without...yes I think the world is ready and waiting to meet the new you....Go for it put your best foot forward and don't look back it straight ahead from here on in...........Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com....
Sincerely
Mduci
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What wonders do we see when we at times venture over to a past of another day and time. I could see your vision as if I myself were visible there.
It was at once terrifying and surreal, but just as suddenly I became still and calm and the adventure went on....I do believe that we can move into other times with ease when we so wish to view the person we used to be......The rhythm and the flow of this piece was absolutely marvelous. It kept me on the edge of my seat from beginning to end…………
Thank you for sharing this well descriptive and beautifully written piece....And welcome to Writing.Com....
Welcome to this months Rising Stars Shining Brighter contest.
Funny you should write about this particular doctor as I just finished a book about her this past week.
' Fasting For The Cure Of Disease' she was truly the demon doctor, or was she really trying to find a cure her patients and became overwhelmed? Your sonnet might have told a little more, but over all very good. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest....
Sincerely
Marlena
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Welcome to this months Rising Stars Shining Brighter contest.
The light through trees hopefully will come when our government’s stop waging war on one another....when little children can walk down a street anywhere in the world and not be blown apart by angry bombs exploding around their feet. When the need for oil is not all we can see....Thank you for sharing with our Circle of Sister and good luck in the contest.
Sincerely
Marlena
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Welcome to this months Rising Stars Shining Brighter contest.
I truly love the stories you tell from home and this little sweetie is no exception. I always look forward to reading your entry each month it always makes my day....I'd love to see this cane and the Burdekin snow, thank you so much for sharing with our Circle of Sisters....and good luck in the contest.
Loved this cute little story and was reminded that peace is truly something that comes from within. Those old tennis shoes a good reminder also of being able to travel as fast and as far as the mind can take us....In this piece I found a lot of sound wisdom and principles we could use in our everyday life....Thank you for sharing your story it was a joy to read......And welcome to Writing.Com.
Welcome to this months Rising Stars Shining Brighter contest.
Thank you for this timely piece on the subject of child abuse. These little ones who need love and affection are so starved for the right life with the right parents, who will know and understand what they have been through....The world is filled with them and their stories are all different and so sad....I agree we need to ban together on their behalf....Thank you for sharing this story and good luck in this months contest.
Sorry to hear of your loss and for being a victim of fraud....I have seen these same letters come into my in box so often and I don't even open them....I delete as fast as I can hit that delete button....I've seen others who think they have found the golden goose, to find they have lost their life savings and everything including the goose....I hope that this article you've written will find it's way to others who could fall into these same scams and learn something before it's much to late.......Good luck to you and your wife, and my prayers are with you.
Sincerely
Mduci
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This is quite endearing and poetic....my heart weeps for the pain caused by another...but the lessons learned far out weigh the bad....you have come to grips with this hurt and it can never touch you or yours ever again...very well told and nothing wasted...thank you for sharing and I'll be back again.
I think just about everyone who joins this site becomes so addicted it's sometimes very overwhelming...overwhelming in the fact that something’s get left undone, people who thought they were so important in your life outside of here find out they aren't so important anymore....house notes and car payments fall quietly to the floor…not to mention household duties etc….So, saying, this is a cutie and well worth the read...I know how you feel....Because it's so me...........Thanks for sharing and it was well worth the time....
What a lonely life this person must live hidden inside with all this gloom...what a sadden heart does the one who gives the time to help clean the space. I've known so many who live in this state animated suspension of depression some never come out and others just seem to awake one day and begin to live in what we call the norm....My heart goes out to you and to your heart and I wish you the best....I look forward to reading more from your port very soon and welcome to Writing.Com. Great piece and beautifully written.
I just want you to know that I love your writing, and I hope to complete this book one day soon...I love the reasoning you have for a little story and I loved the one about the spider also...and this was just a joy....I'm so glad to come by and spend time in your port and I'll visit your husband and sisters ports too...Thank you so much for sharing....
I love trees too, and I hate to see them destroyed by fire, storm or by the saw...I live in the Calif. rain forest and I see this destruction going on before my very eyes...as the canyon becomes over run with new homes and still making room for more...not only does the forest hurt but the lost animals that depended on the forest for food and protection are now running wild with nowhere to go....A lovely piece and very nice writing...thank you so much for the story....And welcome to Writing.Com...
Sincerely
Mduci
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Thanks for the great read and welcome to Writing.Com.
What I found was a lovely, tender, gentle piece written by a wonderful, dear friend and sister..........Totally beautiful, thank you for sharing....