An innocent childhood chruns in a child labor instead of enjoying the good days of festivities.
The child is strong and motivated and at the same time she is helpless.
A small happiness of earning bread for daily meal keeps her going.
Author brings out this issue which can still be seen in India. Young children are deprived of schooling just because they dont have enough to survive for a day.
A very touching auto-bio.
A state of mind and being of a poet just before he drafts the first informal draft of his poem is explained here with ease.
The muse can be anything, the inspiration can come from anything, anyone.. All it needs is a curious mind to pen them down into a language. A language well understood by all, conceived through the heart.
A juggle with words, pen , paper, feelings, editing, reviewing is all mixed and served as a poem.
Keeping our eyes open to diguised people and ears open for opportunities in disguise is essential for a good living.
Deception has become like a daily ritual in today's world. Without it, there seems to be no progress. Hence we all succumb to it and adopt it even if it is not in our blood.
The writer makes an effort to erase this negative trait in humans by opening their eyes with the help of good examples.
Childhood is like a blank page. A baby learns whatever is written on it.
The phenomena of trying to walk, and falling, getting up, and walking again with more courage than every before happens only when we don't label our fallings as disheartening failures. It is this demarcation that makes us successful but not Happily Successful.
The child's mindset , if adopted, will take us soaring high on the cloud nine. They are not judjemental of anything or anybody.
Rightly said - A child is the Father of Man. If followed, will prove vital for our growth.
A wonderful piece of read stating that existence is eternal. Our souls make get into various moulds - human, animals, birds, etc., but the journey will never stop.
The transition of thoughts from a famous statement into the existence of God is remarkable. Faith in God once established, whether we take any form of existence, cures all the evil and the cycle gets purified.
One of the ideas one can have for writing exercise is to open that old photo-album and randomly select a picture. Recollect the event when the snap was taken, and write down every minute details about it.
This is again creative and interesting.
Overcoming wrtier's block is a task, but its not impossible.
Performing our duties towards our family and professions, we rarely are left with some time which we would spend only with us. In solitude, finding answers to our questions, getting inspirations from the silence of existence. Author places importance on living life happily, going with the flow no matter if its bumpy at times.
Some quick edit points I noitced
But it touched me so much so I used to sing this poem whenever I am was happy or sad.
When I look back at my own life, & the lives of the people that surround me, I realize the deep essence of this poem.
Then again in your career life, you may be an engineer, sometimes a lecturer and sometimes a consultant.
Fire, water, earth, wind, sky ` 5 elements of nature were used to make us. WE have been born by these, from these and one day we will elope into these. Some may get burried, Some may get to ashes. In anyways, we will go back to mother earth. The soil, the womb from where we originated.
Thus, we are nothing but His children, sent by his command to this earth to live life as defined by Him.
Staying in Coherence with HIM will see us through of our journey called LIFE.
This is inspirational article. I liked reading this.
Charity begins at home. The way we want others to change, we must change ourselves to adapt to those.
Change means flexibility. A trait which is very useful in daily life. Being flexible means ready to adapt to any situation and enviroment. Thus, change.
Change is the nature of the Universe. As the day changes to night, as summer changes to winter, we must change to add beauty to time.
A great article to read and get knowledge from.
Story writing can be a big fear to many of us. An attempt alone cannot erase the apprehension of it.
Steps suggested by the author will help in laying a basic foundation to the flair of individual writers.
The question answer style becomes easy and as if the author is literally talking to the readers.
Persistence pays off well, only if it is backed with a handfull of homework done before meeting the Editor.
Practising the words to say, keeping faith in our ownself, being confident and if not faking it very well can help.
I take this piece of advice and will remember it till the time comes to show it.
Living life one day at a time, at one go, not expecting anything is the key to remain calm and happy.
Expectations ruin everything. From relationships to even life.
If fulfilled, the level of expectation increases. If not, hurt is developed. Both damages.
So, taking life as it comes is the best way one can win against this Expectation Disease.
This is a very wonderful piece of advice I have come across.
Everytime we review, our words will not support our feelings.
The author's segregation in reviewing part by part helps majorly.
Breaking each section into genres, types, feels, moods.. does the job easy.
Finally, I believe that its the words that touch a reader's heart, grammar follows later. So if the writing has touched the reader in a way or other, it is worth giving a good review.
A woman's multi-facet personality has everything inbuilt, but these virtues of being a woman, somehow are washed away due to peer pressures, pressures for performing better than the rest of the same speicies.
The author shows that if we have strong conviction in God and keeping faith in his boundless abilities to cure us emotionally and physically, we can win any situation in life. We can face any harsh weather of life.
Surrendering to the Lord Almighty is the humblest thing we could do. And thats when we establish a longing faith in Him. He will see us through.
Language is powerful in any form. Written or Vocal. Each form has its own pros and cons which the author has delicately measured and explained.
"Think before you say", is the crux of the article.
There are apprehensions whether what we have said is properly understood by the others in the right context. This will always stay at the back of our mind and hence it is best to choose the words carefully before using them.
Physical appearances delude, traits like love in the heart for all sails our lives effortlessly, is what the poet wants to say.
Having got every trait from each of her relative, which marks her different from others, the poet thinks that the best gift given to her was Love. A pure and selfless feeling planted in her heart by her dear friend.
There is a sad tone to the voice towards the end of the poem where she moans loosing such a gem who gave her the invaluable gift called LOVE.
The rhyme and rhythm is good. It flows well.
A rose found on one of the pages of a book as a bookmark makes the poet remember the journey of it from the garden when plucked to the book on the shelf.
Fond remembrances come rushing through time. The poet wants to pump in life to the rose to bloom once again with life with a tender kiss on the petals, but this cannot happen.
Gone are the days when the rose could spread its fragrance, now it is a small bookmark on a shelf.
Poet nicely exemplifies the rose to life. In whichever form it may be (blooming or crumbled) it should be for a noble purpose.
Conviction in Almighty clears all problems, gives enough strength to withstand the waves of emotions.
A very great thing brought out by the poet is that, a hurdle may seem as big as a rock to us. But for Him it is a small pebble. He will require far less amount of effort to take away this pebble from our path than our endless strength.
Surrendering to the Lord, going along his enlightened path, having faith in him and considering Him as our supremo heals all our scars. Such that, there is no mark left on us. He is the supreme forgiver, He is the supreme lord.
Poet vividly compares the ocean waves to the lush green land swaying with wind.
The swishing of tree branches when wind blows, resembles like the crash of the waves on the shore.
Imagery is great. Nature's aspects intertwined in each other shows resemblance in oneness.
The form is followed properly and the poem flows well.
A simple and sweet poem confessing the poet's love for a loved one.
Love envelops her life in smallest of activities to the largest of decisions; the poet thinks about him. She wants to be with him.
A butterfly love, wanting to taste the honey-love but hesistant at the sight of the loved one. A natural aspect of love shown here when the poet says she freezes at the very sight of him.
Thats sweet.
Poet touches the sensitive part of life " Time".
The imagery is good as the poet captures the dark aspect of death.
The poet brings out the fact that before time and more than luck nothing can be achieved. That time is healer and its the only thing perpetual in life, is brought out nicely.
The form of the poetry is followed and the rhyme is good.
The title stands out well.
It flows well.
Keep Writing
Facets of life, its surprising elements and its way to deal people is mystically thought about by the author.
Rational inclination logically backed by spiritual teachings makes the writer ponder of why there is good and bad? How is the differentiation made between the good and evil?
A thought provoking essay leaves the reader mystified with what life is exactly about. Whether it is programmed like it is or we code it the way we come across circumstances.
A very good read for this day!!
Keep Writing !!
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It is cutely described just like someone has had a puppy love, innocent love at a tender age.