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The second of my collections of poems written for "Express It In Eight."

#1106048 added January 15, 2026 at 9:56am
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Diner Debate
Diner Debate


Bring me a coffee while I wake up
I was planning to finish my make up

time enough while I eat my bacon
my guy left me and I’m forsaken

It’s hardly breakfast that you offer
but I matter too - don’t be a scoffer

I’m very sorry but hungry too
it boils down to who serves who.



Line count: 8
Rhymed aabb
For Express It In Eight, 01.15.26
Prompt: Write a conversation between a waitress and a customer in the diner for breakfast.


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