Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
Shrunken head kept in a jar
a story that my mind doth mar
the image will not let me go
such gruesome things within us grow
and if I read such darkened tales
I feel my soul doth shrink and fail
perhaps I should horror eschew
and ne’er again the like review.
Line count: 8
Rhymed aabb
For Express It In Eight, 05.18.25
Prompt: Write a poem about something in a jar.
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