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Rated: 13+ · Book · Personal · #982524

Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.

*Delight*          *Smirk*          *Yawn*

L'aura del campo

'é a lua, é a lua, na quintana dos mortos'
♣ Federico García Lorca ♣


Higgins Street Bridge, April 25th 2009, Missoula, Montana


L'aura del campo. A breeze in the meadow. So it began the last day of Spring, 2005; on the 16th day of the month of Light of the year 162. This is a supplement to my daily journal written to a friend, my muse; notes I do not share. Here I will share what the breeze has whispered to me.

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On a practical note, in answer to your questions:

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IN MEMORIUM

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passed away November 12, 2005

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 Kåre *Leaf5* Enga
~ until everything was rainbow, rainbow, rainbow! And I let the fish go.
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April 6, 2022 at 8:12pm
April 6, 2022 at 8:12pm
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I responded to runningwolf04 but cut and post here instead.

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refers to prose. Poets want something else.

1. Did you like it?

2. Can you offer any advice to strengthen it poetically.

DO NOT:

3. Correct my grammar/spelling when I'm speaking in dialect.

4. Treat it as if it's a college or grade school essay or report.

ADVICE:

5. If you have never written poetry or are tone-deaf and refuse to read it out-loud, do me a favor... don't review it. Send a comment instead. Comments are welcome.

6. If your only experience is English-only-speaking MidAmerica and my writing isn't... and that offends you or confuses you, don't review. But please leave a comment so I know.

I appreciate comments/reviews by tight-form experts (oriental, short forms) like Tinker or free-flowing (beatnik) verse experts like Brian K Compton. There are others who are experts in their chosen field. My poetic offerings lose to them all the time. *Laugh* But... if you're a novel-writer don't bother lecturing me on haiku... because I know you don't have a clue.

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