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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this poem, and you will find a couple poems on this favorite season in my port. The flow is smooth, and the emotion of the season is captured in such a few words. I like the format. It is easy on the eyes. I think that the beat is well done in the lines.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story. I love the flow. It really carries the readers throughout the story in a gentleness. The dialog is well written. And I have a bias for the storyline. I love this type of writing. The ending was a surprise for me but it was profound.

Thank you for joining our family and for sharing such a well written story.
Ida


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Review of REMEMBER  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First I wonder what "djembe" is. I love the emotion, and it brought vivid images of my own memories to my thoughts. In my opinion this is one of the deepest items that I have read. The flow was smooth, and the format is one that was easy to read.

Welcome to the writing.com family, and thank you for sharing this nicely written item with the readers.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this little story. It is well developed in such a few words. The image is so greatly described, and I felt that down home feeling from fishing in Kentucky. I know that I would not smell salt water, but the dirt road in you story took me back home.

Thank you for sharing such an excellent story.
Ida


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Review of New Beginnings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a well written story. The descriptive imagery is wonderful. I can relate to the emotional and physical abuse. After a sixteen year old emotionally abusive marriage, I had a physical abuse. I made the trip in a Uhaul from KY to FL with two children. It is so beautiful changing atmospheres like that. Thank you for a very vivid trip.

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Ida


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Review of My Mother  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I love this story, and I am a single mother. I hope that my children think me in much the same way as the mother in the poem. I can feel the emotion in this story, and I am so happy to have found this poem. The flow was good, the rhythm was smooth, but the message and the emotion was more than excellent.

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Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like this story. I love the character Noah. Of course I would, my youngest son is Noah. That aside, The flow of this story is smooth. The events are well described. The dialog is really flowing through the storyline well. This story could grow a little more, but it is a very nice read.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. It has a smooth read. It is hard for me to explain, but it gives me an emotion of longing for freedom. I love the A,B,A,B rhyme. I use this format a lot in my work. This is a wonderful poem and it is well written. I am truly glad that I have found it.

Welcome to the writing.com family, and thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a serious problem brought with a smile. I have been there done that after my divorce from a marriage of sixteen years. Then I just went from one "in-love" moment to another for about six years. I am now with my soul mate that I met while I was married.

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Ida


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Review of Early Bird Entery  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is well written, and the family relationships are strong in the story line. I found the flow nice, and would love to see this cute little story was written well and kept my attention. This is worth the read for its ability to put a smile on my face.

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Ida


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Review of My perfect day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this form of poetry. This is how a lot of my poems are written. I like the A,A,B,B rhyming pattern. This is a smooth and entertaining read. The emotion and we all have been there. I think that this brings back memories from when I had this kind of feelings.

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Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I had to laugh. The flow was excellent, the word choice was amazing, and the message was one that everyone can relate with. I loved the way it made me laugh. I also think it deserves to be highlighted in the "Comic" newsletter. I am so happy to have found this poem

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Ida


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Review of My Four Seasons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is beautifully written. I love the form and the beat of the fluent lines. I really found this a smooth read. The emotions were strong, and the ending was unexpected and welcomed. I had to laugh and think about the many days that I have gone to the park and just filled up soul up with the nature around me.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really appreciate the information in this item. I am going back to visit the sites that are highlighted on this page. I am always looking for a way to get noticed, and I really find this a wonderful place to find the help all in one place.

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Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First welcome to the writing.com family. I hope that you find that this is a place of encouragement.

I love the vocabulary in this item. The flow is smooth, and I really liked the skills that you show with you dialog. Dialog is a skill that I need a lot of practice with.

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have not read many of these, and this one creates an interest for creating a post for this page. Each post seems to flow together easily. I find that so many people working on the story line and doing so well is amazing. I love the way that the story is going, and I may be back to try my hand at a post.

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Ida
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I really tried to read this, but either there was a language barrier or a barrier of me not understanding gaming lingo. The letters were scattered much like pig latin, or maybe the translator from another language didn't do a good job. What I did understand, I loved.

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Ida
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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful picture and handsome face. I really think that this is a cute picture. I remember loosing my first tooth, and the story that my mom told me about growing a gold tooth in its place if I didn't put my tongue in the empty spot. Of course I could not stop that tongue from playing in the hole.

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Ida
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Review of The Temple  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The flow is smooth and the story rhyme creates a great read. I think that this story is vivid. I really love the descriptive work in the events and the character's behavior. The sounds, the scenery, and the actions were so real that the reader felt that as though he/she is there.

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Ida


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Review of The Bathhouse  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is well written. The flow is smooth and the description is such that the reader feels as though they are watching the story line unfold. I like the characters and the emotion that you were able to give them. I think that it would make reading a little easier on my eyes if there were extra line between the paragraphs.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is poem that is well written. I can see a young man searching for his lover. I feel him getting closer nearly touching her. Then he begins to realize that it is only a dream. I can relate to this. After years of waiting and dreaming, I am with my soul mate.

Thank you for another sweet poem.
Ida


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Review of An Inhuman Place  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a very fast and exciting story-line. I love the emotion. The fear could be felt as the reader read the details in this story. The usage of questions to get the feeling of desperation. You covered the events and atmosphere well with descriptive word choices.

One suggestion; I have read three items of your, each has a nice reward for the review, my suggestions is for you to enter as many contests, review as many auto-reward items, and do as many activities to collect gps as you can. Giving gps takes a lot out of your bank.

Thank you for another great read.
Ida


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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Welcome to the Writing.com family. I hope that you find this as supportive and caring place as I have.

I would offer a couple suggestions. 1. It is easier on the reader's eyes if you leave a blank space between the last line of one and the first of the first. 2. Also I would suggest that you can change the font and color of the letters as you want to at the top of the text box when you create the item.

I really admire the dialog. I have problems with this skill. You used conversation that kept the story-line flowing smoothly throughout until the end.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting story. This story could be stretched and continued. I would like to read more about how the spell was done. What items did she use, what words did she say, was she torn between knowing how he felt about witchcraft and wanting him healed?

This has a making for a great story.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the idea. I can see the story develop in these few words. I can also see this story go in so many directions. A couple with one pretending for years to be a happily married person. Other dramas that can be happening within the main story. Some couples could be silently killing their mate. Other couples could be fighting all the time.

This is a great story beginning.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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