|I read this a few days ago, but then the phone rang or some nonsense and I didn't have time to leave a review. But the story kept coming back to me, so here I am!
Honestly, when I started this, I was a doubter. I thought he's good, but I don't think he's going to be able to be consistent with this lingo to the point of drawing the reader (me) in. But damn! You are a thinker and creative.
I laughed out loud at Grandpa listening to Snoop Dog. It's hard to realize that will soon be retro and soooooo old skool.
The ending was endearing and left me with a helpful feeling.
I was kind of glad you didn't write it where they all finally appreciated each other, because that's not life. We have favorites; we have those that irate us.
Job well done again.
P.S. Keep your gps, Mr. Stubborn.