Good Afternoon
WOW..
A poem for that the young ones as well as the young once love and enjoy to read.
Very Nice work of art.
The story behind the poetry is Awesome.
I am so glad to have read this.
This sounds like a very happy song to me.
Thank You for sharing and for the
Great read.
Good Afternoon,
I feel like I am watching a horror movie and the main character was being terrorized thst every scene is full of Suspense.
A nightmare.
What makes it more sad because the villain are his brothers.
Terrible and horrible story.
Thank You for the read
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very nice Essay.
It speaks of the truth and it shares great wisdom to one and all.
Great mind.
Brilliant thinking.
Wonderful words and lines that completed this
The Great Unknown
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Yes..when Brown is all around
It means there's a glaring sun
I hope that it will rain
So I will see green again.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented
Poetry.
Yes for green
The color of life.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
A Love poetry with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
Great title
Forever in Time
The poem sounds like a beautiful love song with a happy tune
Wonderful as it is.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning.
A sad title of a free verse poetry
Broken
The poem also differentiate the feelings between a young and an older woman.
An encounter with someone familiar and here usbthe sad emotion that's being expressed
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Morning,
I wonder what the young man did that the officers arrived .
Interesting and intriguing story.
Mabel the lead character may suffer memory loss
Yes.. this is one of life's realities when someone reaches old age.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Thank You for this useful and helpful
Information.
Great Essay to share to the whole world.
This proves your caring and loving heart.
This is well written all the way.
Highly Admirable piece.
Thank You for sharing
A Natural Elixir For Your Body
Write on
Good Morning,
This gives an interesting information.
The poem has a good flow.
It is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Truly a great poem and is highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing
The Four Elements
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
You are sharing here your honest to goodness opinion on
Valentines Day and on how to celebrate it.
Very practical and very true and I respect your opinion.
Yes. Valentines Day is a day for celebration in our very own way to show we love and we care.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for a Prompt.
The title is meaningful as it is not easy to wait..but those who are willing to wait are also rightfully rewarded .
The four lines poetry that sounds like a Haiku to me.
The title fits for the chosen words and lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
The Wait
Write on.
Good Evening,
A sad tale behind the poetry.
Intriguing title
Bones In The Field
A possible unusual cause of death.
An unsolved crime..or any reason at all.
Sad to note.
When this is happening one can ask
Why ? And More be Why ?
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
I find this poem fascinating, interesting and entertaining.
A joyful read.
Great title
Since We're Here
So let us enjoy the moments
The lines fit for the given title.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry is full of pain. Yes.. Soldiers experience all kinds of pain
Being away from their loved ones to protect the Motherland is not an ordinary task .
The poem is no truthful and great.
A sad reality.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A nice song that sounds like a very meaningful ballad to me
The lyrics speaks of the truth and very touching.
It is about living a life that is not easy but with a Courageous heart and mind with positivity and that matters a lot.
Great song.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Wow..
The magical gift for only five dollars.
Awesome story.
I wish this pink guitar is mine.
Hahaha
I love this wonderful story all the way.
A gift of love and in
Pink
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
The missing dog with the missing duck.
The combination to run away is not
reasonable so probably both drowned and died in the process.
Sad to note that this happened to
Max.
A sad story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A love story behind the poetry.
So full of happy moments and sweet togetherness.
A very meaningful life and the good by reason is the love thst colors the world.
Yes..
Love Is The Next Step
Thank You for sharing this and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A funny way to differentiate fatigue from tired.
Tired for ne is the absence of energy to follow the necessary things to be done while fatigue is getting tired afterna lot of activities.
And we all experience this whiie we are still alive.
Good Morning,
A nicely written free verse poetry that speaks of the facts of life as in yesterday and today.
The poem has a good flow.
The chosen lines fit for the given title
JUST LOOK
Yes..just look and see.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Wtite on.
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece.
The story behind the poetry pierces deeply through my heart.
Sad and frustrating to know that such sad happenings jn life occurs.
Reading the given title I was thinking of a song with the same title.
Reading between the lines makes want to stand and shout to the person who caused you pain to stop ir now not later but now.
Very touching.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
A true to heart situation and it seems the world is tumbling down you and there is no one to turn to .
Then...the lines at the last stanza said it all...as Prayer is all powerful.
The poem is well written.
It is nicely presented too.
Yes .our faith is an affirmation of our human worth and continuity.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Best Regards
God Bless
Good Morning,
A poetry about faith...
A deep belief of the Most High.
With God in our lives and the faith we ive by is peaceful, hopeful faith in the goodness of our spirit.
Thank You for sharing
God's Pure Grace: A Positive Force
Thank You for the read too
Good Evening,
You are sharing a very important topic that is the number one issue also in our community as well as in our whole country and the. Whole world in General.
Yes, this is well written and nicely presented.
I hope and pray that my this can be given a solution soonest.
Write on
Good Evening,
A very meaningful free verse poetry with a good flow.
Very true ..we are blessed to have thoughts that keep flowing as we continue the journey called life.
The chosen lines fit for the given title
Tingling Thoughts
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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