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Review of Plainclothes  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A beautiful Christmas Story.
About the kindness of heart, forgiveness and most of all, Love.
A wonderful way of spending Christmas and the story shares a great lesson to one and all.
Precious Plainclothes
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Merry Christmas...
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Review of A Daughter  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A lovely and very meaningful poetry.
I admire each line that completed this beautiful poetry.
It expresses your very loving and caring heart.
The presentation is great.
Yes
.You are truly blessed and You are a blessing to yourself and a blessing to others.
Thank You for sharing
A Daughter
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
An interesting title
Why Do I Write Miserable Stories ?

In life, we have a choice as wel as in writing. Also , life is a compilation of varied experiences and it is so nice and wise of you to write not only the good times but the bad times as well.
You explain clearly and with clarity as well as brilliantly the reason of your choice topic to write and I admire your candidness and truthfulness.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read

Write On.
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Review of A World of My Own  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I admire the positiveness in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The lines at the fourth stanza are my favorite lines.
Highly impressive lines that makes life worthliving.
Thank You for sharing
A World Of My Own
And it is a wonderful world.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that expresses a political message in a philosophical way.
It is well written and nicely presented.
Each line fits for the given title.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
A Trickle Of Feathers: Well Desired.
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Review of Wala Ko Nagmahay  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Nindota aning kantaha.
A composer. A writer.
Igsoon mo ni Gervic ?
I enjoy reading the lyrics of this song especially this line..
Bahalag pobre Basta kusgan
Hahahs
Kon ako ang mokanta ani ako ning ilisan ang kusgan
Bahalag pobre Basta dato
Hahaha
Lingawa as in Nalingaw man ko diri sa
Writing.com.
Taga Cebu ko
Ganahan pud ko mokanta
Bitaw...
Thank You for sharing your Music.
Write on.
God Bless.
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Review of Many Goodbyes  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,

The poem about the unkind old man
A cannibal on the loose
And now looking for victims
You better run for your life so
There is no goodbye.
The story is in sad and horrible
Better stay as far away at sll.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The given title shares a story behind the poetry
Mirrors, Portraits, Pictures
These three can serve as best evidence about what is going on in a particular situation and location.
Reading between the lines makes me wonder if there was a crime committed.
Whatever it was. I believe it is worth Writing a poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A horrible and terrible story behind the poetry.
Better put a sign of No Entry in this place to avoid losing lives.
Sad to note that this happened.
Possibly this place needs an exorcist expert to stop this killing.
This is like a horror movie to me.
Very convincing writer.
Write on
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Review of I Believe  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
I love the given title. It expresses great expectations.
Believing the truth, believing in love, believing in values and believing oneself surely matters and make life most meaningful and fulfilling.
Thank You for sharing I BELIEVE.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A legal case.
Fiction or non fiction this is well written and nicely presented.
Very convincing.
Mr. Coyote lost this highly publicized case.
Can he appeal ?
That remains to be seen.
I admire this writing all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read

Write On.

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Review of Dear Delilah  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A letter from Delilah to Delilah.
Written in the depthness of thoughts releasing what is in the heart soul as expressing all that has been going on with clearness and clarity to let go and let live.
Yes..Writing it all is a special form of healing to move on with life releasing all the baggages to live life with meaning and fulfillment.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
An unforgettable experience more than two decades ago and is now being documented through this writing..
Yes high technology is improving year after year snd honestly I am not very good at it.
My 12 year old grandson is more updated with this modern technology than myself.
Every day is a learning process by too.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
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Review of The mind's eye  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Dreaming or hallucinating and wondering.
This is how I understand the story behind this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Something unusual is happening as in a product of an imagination.
I admire the creativeness.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A First Place Winner
Congratulations..
A poem about seeking forgiven
ess for a grave mistake being committed to a person who truly loves you.
The realization at the end
A deeply emotional piece that shares a great lesson too.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of A Boy and his Dog  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
What a great surprise.. ollie the dog can talk.
Interesting story behind the poetry.

Good question... for a conclusion.
The poem has a good flow and i
s well written and nicely presented.
Ollie can be very famous.
Thank You for sharing
A Boy and His Dog.
Write On.
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Review of Unfinished  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Captivating title
Unfinished
This is a nicely written free verse poetry with a good flow.
There is much action here as the given picture offers such.
Yes.. the picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Nice title
Beneath The Summer Stars
Wonderful experience with nature.
Wonderful poem too.I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
The poem has a very nice rhythm and rhyme.
The last stanza makes me smile and wish to say you need a nice pillow to ease the pain at your back..hahaha

Yet ..I believe the experience is all worth it.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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Review of Sunset Memories  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The title is captivating.
I have my own share of wonderful childhood memories with the mesmerizing sunset
This shares great memories and surely
Unforgettable.
Written for a prompt.
I admire this beautiful poem all the way.
Thank You for the read.
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Review of Heavens Fate  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very touching and meaningful free verse poetry.
The title is interesting
Heaven's Fate
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
It has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The written lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.

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Review of My Poetry  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The great poet that you are is now sharing this wonderful work of art by with a nice title
My Poetry
Six lines that completed this work of art that is highly impressive.
The last line said it all in a very precious way .
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of I Dream  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Wow.. I love this.
This sounds like a very special and beautiful song with a lovely and lively tune.
I admire the poetic words that completed this work of art.
Fascinating...
Adorably adorable.
Keep on dreaming dreams.
Thank You for sharing

Write om.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The charcoal is playing a great role in this Awesome poetry.
Awesome in a way that it is well written and nicely presented with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Brilliant in every way as you put into poetic wordw your creativity.
Remarkably Excellent..
Write On.
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Review of The Art of Living  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented
The Art Of Living
Wonderful and meaningful lines that fit for the given title.
Yes ..life is worthliving and I admire each line that completed this work of art.
To watch the sunset in the west without regretting.
My favorite line.
Great talent.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Good Evening,
Lovely..
Beautiful reflection.
The nice picture adds more meaning and beauty to this
Moonlight On Water
Written for a prompt

I love this poem all the way.
Wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
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