Good Evening,
An interesting title
Why Do I Write Miserable Stories ?
In life, we have a choice as wel as in writing. Also , life is a compilation of varied experiences and it is so nice and wise of you to write not only the good times but the bad times as well.
You explain clearly and with clarity as well as brilliantly the reason of your choice topic to write and I admire your candidness and truthfulness.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
Good Evening,
I admire the positiveness in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The lines at the fourth stanza are my favorite lines.
Highly impressive lines that makes life worthliving.
Thank You for sharing
A World Of My Own
And it is a wonderful world.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that expresses a political message in a philosophical way.
It is well written and nicely presented.
Each line fits for the given title.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
A Trickle Of Feathers: Well Desired.
Good Evening,
Nindota aning kantaha.
A composer. A writer.
Igsoon mo ni Gervic ?
I enjoy reading the lyrics of this song especially this line..
Bahalag pobre Basta kusgan
Hahahs
Kon ako ang mokanta ani ako ning ilisan ang kusgan
Bahalag pobre Basta dato
Hahaha
Lingawa as in Nalingaw man ko diri sa
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Taga Cebu ko
Ganahan pud ko mokanta
Bitaw...
Thank You for sharing your Music.
Write on.
God Bless.
The poem about the unkind old man
A cannibal on the loose
And now looking for victims
You better run for your life so
There is no goodbye.
The story is in sad and horrible
Better stay as far away at sll.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
The given title shares a story behind the poetry
Mirrors, Portraits, Pictures
These three can serve as best evidence about what is going on in a particular situation and location.
Reading between the lines makes me wonder if there was a crime committed.
Whatever it was. I believe it is worth Writing a poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A horrible and terrible story behind the poetry.
Better put a sign of No Entry in this place to avoid losing lives.
Sad to note that this happened.
Possibly this place needs an exorcist expert to stop this killing.
This is like a horror movie to me.
Very convincing writer.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
I love the given title. It expresses great expectations.
Believing the truth, believing in love, believing in values and believing oneself surely matters and make life most meaningful and fulfilling.
Thank You for sharing I BELIEVE.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A legal case.
Fiction or non fiction this is well written and nicely presented.
Very convincing.
Mr. Coyote lost this highly publicized case.
Can he appeal ?
That remains to be seen.
I admire this writing all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Good Morning,
A letter from Delilah to Delilah.
Written in the depthness of thoughts releasing what is in the heart soul as expressing all that has been going on with clearness and clarity to let go and let live.
Yes..Writing it all is a special form of healing to move on with life releasing all the baggages to live life with meaning and fulfillment.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
An unforgettable experience more than two decades ago and is now being documented through this writing..
Yes high technology is improving year after year snd honestly I am not very good at it.
My 12 year old grandson is more updated with this modern technology than myself.
Every day is a learning process by too.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Dreaming or hallucinating and wondering.
This is how I understand the story behind this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Something unusual is happening as in a product of an imagination.
I admire the creativeness.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A First Place Winner
Congratulations..
A poem about seeking forgiven
ess for a grave mistake being committed to a person who truly loves you.
The realization at the end
A deeply emotional piece that shares a great lesson too.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
What a great surprise.. ollie the dog can talk.
Interesting story behind the poetry.
Good question... for a conclusion.
The poem has a good flow and i
s well written and nicely presented.
Ollie can be very famous.
Thank You for sharing
A Boy and His Dog.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Captivating title
Unfinished
This is a nicely written free verse poetry with a good flow.
There is much action here as the given picture offers such.
Yes.. the picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Nice title
Beneath The Summer Stars
Wonderful experience with nature.
Wonderful poem too.I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
The poem has a very nice rhythm and rhyme.
The last stanza makes me smile and wish to say you need a nice pillow to ease the pain at your back..hahaha
Yet ..I believe the experience is all worth it.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
The title is captivating.
I have my own share of wonderful childhood memories with the mesmerizing sunset
This shares great memories and surely
Unforgettable.
Written for a prompt.
I admire this beautiful poem all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A very touching and meaningful free verse poetry.
The title is interesting
Heaven's Fate
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
It has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
The written lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening,
The great poet that you are is now sharing this wonderful work of art by with a nice title
My Poetry
Six lines that completed this work of art that is highly impressive.
The last line said it all in a very precious way .
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Wow.. I love this.
This sounds like a very special and beautiful song with a lovely and lively tune.
I admire the poetic words that completed this work of art.
Fascinating...
Adorably adorable.
Keep on dreaming dreams.
Thank You for sharing
Good Evening,
The charcoal is playing a great role in this Awesome poetry.
Awesome in a way that it is well written and nicely presented with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Brilliant in every way as you put into poetic wordw your creativity.
Remarkably Excellent..
Write On.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented
The Art Of Living
Wonderful and meaningful lines that fit for the given title.
Yes ..life is worthliving and I admire each line that completed this work of art.
To watch the sunset in the west without regretting.
My favorite line.
Great talent.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A crime investigation or a detective story.
Looking for someone but still the search was unsuccessful.
A difficult situation when you have a deadline and need to be submitted as soon as possible.
Intriguing Story.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
The given title is sad in a way in that
A Hidden Love
Cannot be expressed freely and cannot be knowned to the whole world as in a complete secrecy and that does not give assurance that you two belong to to each other.. It feel like You are both each other world apart.
A kind of love that never flourish to its fullness.
This is how I understand this nicely written free verse poetry.
Thank you for sharing and for the read.
Write On
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