|Wow, nice job! First, I want to congratulate you on your new baby.:)! I hope in the following years this child will be your sunshine in life.
I'm sorry your hving difficulties, it is sad how life can pollute a marriage in bad ways. I was married 7 years, now divorced and disabled, my son living with his dad because I have so many health issues now. I hope things get better for you guys, I really do. Divorce is such nasty business and really takes a toll on the kids.
Moving on, the story is written very well, and kept my interst peaqued. I didn't notice any grammatical errors, and only noticed this one spelling error:
"Wait, I'm sorry, can I come over to your house tomrrow? Is that good for you?"
Good luck My prayers are with you and yours.
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