This is a return review. Thanks again for yours.
Since this is autumn, I chose this poem.
After the first reading, I thought it had a very good rhythm with simple common words.
Then, my critical mind came into action. I thought the first line sounds more like winter, then if it’s a frozen land why isn’t the water ice.
On third reading, I thought everything is a metaphor. Then, there’s some deep meaning here.
Anyway, I give it 5 stars for making me think about how simple words can change how we think.