Okay, so I'm not the best at giving reviews because I'm a newbie, but I will try my best. I felt Jane was very relatable. I'm wondering about her relationship to Keith. It seems like there might be something there.
Your descriptions were really good. I actually felt like I was Jane in your story. I'm excited to see where it goes. Keep it up!
I think you captured the kind of love most only dream about.
What girl wouldn't want to be whisked away by a handsome prince and travel the world with him! Talk about wanderlusting!
This is simple, but oh so beautiful!
Plus, the words that you sai were really deep. That beauty is on the inside. It's what is in your heart.
Thank you for sharing your work!
Oh, this was breathtaking! I love reading Shakespeare, but I will not lie sometimes I can't understand what he is saying and have to look it up. Romeo and Juliet is my favorite!
Thank you for sharing this with us.
This poem rang really true to me. I have a slight case of claustrophobia, but it's cockroaches and flying bugs that give me panic attacks. Thank you for sharing this.
This was so funny to read and also relatable. It seems that my willpower dwindles at night and I end up eating 5am pizza..
What was the inspiration for this?
This was so incredibly brilliant! I absolutely enjoyed reading all of it because it just gripped my attention! I can't wait to see where it goes and I'm still rooting for Jessica and Michael to get together. I felt like I was reading something from a bookstore, you have a real talent. I feel like Jessica and I have so much in common (personality wise, not occupation.)
Thanks for sharing!
~Hanna
This was very beautiful and it made me really think about how much more you would remember something had you drawn it. However, I'm not an artist in that way and rely very much on my hd or even not hd camera to capture my memories. Thank you for sharing this work of art with us!
Keep writing!
This was really well written but I'm sorry that this really happened to you. I'm sure one day you will reach your dreams and become a well known writer with this talent. 😊
Wow, River this was such a heartwarming, beautiful story about you and your grandson. You really made me feel the love you have for him and how tremendously special he is to you. Kind of reminds me of my memories with my Grammy. Thank you so much for sharing. 😊
I think that you have captured what most people feel right now in only a few lines. I know for sure that this is how I feel too. Bravo! 😊
Finding ourselves and who we are meant to be and people who will love us unconditionally and will stick with us through the good and the bad can be a hard thing sometimes but it's not impossible. Thanks for sharing your work and keep writing because you have a real gift for it.
This was such a beautiful and moving poem. It almost brought me to tears. This is exactly how we should think about the end of something. Though it is a hard thing to do.
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