Forgive and Forget. The last paragraph says it all. You've been around the horn, you can write, and you have a lot to share. I found the piece to be well written with a beginning, middle and end. All tied together vary smoothly. You can write. Please keep sharing.charlie55
I'm a history buff and as I was reading, I was thinking of Catherine The Great. The story transported me to another place and time, becoming totally believable. Well written with a beginning, middle, and end. You need to be a novelist. Gather historical facts and write me a book. Please.-charlie55
This is a story, that although short, has a beginning, a middle, and an end. And there all good. A story that could be cleaned up a little from extra words, but still good. A feel good story where fighting for the right no matter the risk is always a plus.
Keep writing-charlie55
A beginning to tweak the interest of a new and unusual day. This story could unfold into a adventure, humorous, or horror story. Paint the canvas and deluge my senses. A good beginning, now let your imagination run. Second draft write what's believable. You can do it.-charlie55
It was a conversation, but I would have liked to have learned more. Age, strengths, weaknesses, or maybe why one is suited for the job, and another not. Is one committed to the job because one feels needed, or indispensable. Information that is hard to put into three hundred words, but I was drawn in and I couldn't turn the page. I would say what that means is, you can write. Give me a novel.-charlie55
What can I say. Awesome! Write what you know. Know what you love. Your a writer that has something to share, and I'm a enjoyed recipient. You've shown me how to use short simple sentence structure to make a story flow. Thank you for having written a vary good piece of work.charlie55
Well written, with good subject matter. It was special for me to read, because I could relate to this piece, having been born in that time. Every short story should have a point, and I totally got it. Keep writing what you know and I'll keep reading.-charlie55
Wow, a person of like Writing blocks. Except I think; I can't write that. People will think it's to crass, to vulgar.
No one will buy into that's the way it could have been. Blow you whistle and ramble, like it's for you and nobody else.
Then pick and chose for someone else, and rewrite.-Charlie-55
Pose is vary hard for me to judge, good or bad. But I felt it was very good. It inspired me to write this
To understand what is possible
But always wondering if your worthy
Is your self esteem reliable?
Does the spirit in you recognize you are worthy?
Or does your mind say your un-reconcilable?
From Buddha all the way to Hinduism.
We have searched for self improvement
To face the end on our own terms
When all we need is faith to depart
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