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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute story. I was half expecting for Robert to be the one that was on the waiting list. That could possibly be a funny twist, maybe that's why it said it was never checked out, but I definitely feel the frustration of the hero. I would hate it if I wasn't able to check out a book!

Good job, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
Once upon a time, there was a dog named Diva Do, who was fine and fancy as could be. Every day, Diva Do would sneak out of her yard underneath the fence and she would trot around doing what Diva Do did. One day, it started to rain and rain and didn't stop for three days. Because of that, all Diva Do did was run outside and do what she needed to and run inside so she wouldn't get all filthy like the other dog who lived there, who was practically a mud sponge that couldn't be rinsed out. Until finally, the rain stopped and Diva Do took the opportunity to go for a walk. But on the way out under the fence, she got soaking wet and absolutely covered in mud, and she needed to get back inside quick before any of the neighbors saw her. Unfortunately, when she realized this it was already too late and she was on the other side of the fence and had to walk all the way around the fence row that went on for three houses. When she got home it started raining and there was no one home to open the door for her. Diva Do decided to take advantage of the rain and ran around getting all cleaned off just in time for the pop-up shower to stop, then Diva Do was free to take her walk around the block doing whatever it was that Diva Do did.
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
These are great lyrics and very spot on with how Black Friday and the overall holiday season is. There are not enough savings to be worth camping and stampeeding through a store!

Good job, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, what a beautiful poem! I loved the way you wrote it and the tale-telling. It flowed nicely and was coherent and consistent with the point being made.

Nice job, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


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Review of My house  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked your poem, it was fun and had good imagery.
I would like to go to your house sometime lol!

Good job, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Awesome story article! Great imagination and "connecting the dots" with other myths.

I loved this. It would be neat to read if there was a follow-up report about what happened next, maybe a trial or something.

Nicely done, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of Evaporation  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello,

I really like this poem. The imagery was dark and vivid. It was well written and worded. The flow was smooth.
Nice job!

Good vibrations,

Leigh


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
What an awesome article! Thank you for sharing, it really is great information.
I have only been on here for just over a month and I can't tell you just how helpful the reviews and other articles, tips, and advice have been.
It has really boosted my confidence and lifted my motivation right out its grave!
I will definitely be checking out each link you provided and start posting and participating even more.
Again, many thanks.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought these stories were very cute and you are very imaginative with the nicknames and the back up plans A-Z.

I was wondering if all of these are based off true stories. Also, what is a widget? Whatever it is, I like that word.

Thank you for sharing and good luck with your book.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review of Rumor Has It...  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a funny story, good use of the prompt!

Thumbs up, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review of Madhouse Tragedy  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this! The way you tell the story, the rhyme and rhythm are smooth and very funny. Great job!

Good vibrations,

Leigh


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of Floods  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this little poem. It is catchy and I liked the rhyme and flow. Good job, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello- I thought this was a beautiful poem and you did a nice job with the imagery- very vivid. I also like how the rhythm and rhyme flowed. It was well worded and well written. Nice job.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review of Anticipation  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello- Very cool little poem giving soul to nature, I could feel the anxiety and heartbreak. Nicely done!

Thumbs up, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a cute and catchy poem. A definite tongue twister indeed!

Nice job, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this, it was cute and catchy and it flowed nicely just like the song.

Well done, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought this was awesome and hilarious. The only criticism I have is that it's going to be stuck in my head all night!

Good job, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful and true poem. Congratulations on your win!


Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice poem. Congratulations on your win!

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review of Slender and Pale  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was a neat very eerie poem. Good luck!

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this quick little poem. It is cute and catchy.

Thumbs up, keep writing.


Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this. I don't think I've seen anything before that was written from a muses point of view and I think you captured quite nicely, and comically how the inner workings of the mind think and act.

Thank you for sharing this, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


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Review of My Son  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful poem that captures the love of a parent for their child. It also evoked a feeling of sadness and a little anxiety as it made me think about my own son who is growing up so quickly.

Thank you for sharing, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of ribs  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful poem about anatomy, which I always find interesting. I liked the way it was written and formatted.

Thumbs up, keep writing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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Review of Nightfall.  
Review by Cama Leigh
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful poem that nicely captures the thoughts and feelings of a night owl, which I am most definitely!

Thank you for sharing.

Good vibrations,

Leigh
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