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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-22-15
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You had me all the way and I never expected the punch line at the end. Bravo! You tell a tale well, and the reader is caught up in the emotion of fear and trepidation that comes with some horrible visage a girl sees everywhere.
Form and structure are foundational.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically no visible misspellings are evident.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Moonrise  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 4-22-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

This is a good start on something that can be grown into a good story.
Flow is good, enhanced by the absence of any visible grammatical snafu's other than one item.
The street name "Sea child lane", perhaps keeping the capital letter motif for child and lane would be better. Seeing it like it is made me pause to make sure it was a part of the street name.
Pace is slow and sensory filled, the overall impression this reader gets from this is the main character is about to reveal their true self to someone who means a lot to him/her.

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Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece on The Hub.
Waxing philosophical is what I got out of this piece.
Emotionally there is enough to keep the readers attention.
Form is adequate.
Structure is standard fare.
Flow is smooth,
Pace is slow and detail filled,
Grammatically snafu free, you earn an extra three.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of My Friend (At 8)  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your piece on the Hub.
Rating is right as the first lines are rough.
Emotionally the reader is caught up in the characters reminiscences.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically snafu free layout.
Pace is slow and sensory absorbing.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of CALEB  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Hub.
Caleb appears to be a complex character.
He reminds this reader of "the thinker."
The ,character is enigmatic, and intriguing.
One wonders if there is more to come for Caleb.
Form and structure make this feel a bit cramped.
Flow is hampered by this factor.
The lines are many, the thoughts are jumbled together.
A suggestion to improve the flow would be to break this into a few paragraphs, so the reader has a chance to digest the complete thoughts you have here.
Pace is slow as the reader attempts to follow the characters progression.
Grammatically speaking your piece is clean.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
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Nobody:

You are somebody,
why the chosen handle?
You write from the heart,
that;'s the best part.

Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and rhythmical.
Pace is slow and sensory filled,
chock full of sensory tags to keep the readers attention from stem to stern.
Now that's imagery that makes a piece; like a good book; hard to put down.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The Chosen Ones  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 4-8-15
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The heroes of war returning from the fray.
The war is won but the impact will forever remain.
That;s imagery that drew this response.
Form and structure are distinctive.
Rhyme scheme lends a cadence to the piece.
Flow is soft and smooth.
Pace is slow, as if the march will never end, until at last it is finished.
Grammatically speaking your piece is pristine.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The House  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in Spiritual Newseltter 04-08-15
I often peruse the NLs to garner reviewing opportunities.
Your piece closes out the pages of this NL.

First impression: Title seems generic, then the blurb brings into focus.
Dominant feeling = melancholy.
Form and structure are clear.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid, and yet full of details that endears the reader to the characters walk.
Grammatically speaking; your piece is pristine. That's a plus 3 any day of the wwek.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Beyond  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 4-8-15
I often peruse the NLs for reviewing fodder.

Imagery keeps the readers attention.
Emotional roller coaster is how this feels.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu clean.
Pace is slow and detail filled.


Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Who are you?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What an endearing poem you do present.
The soldiers eyes are opened in the end; and he knows his life will never be the same again.
That's imagery come to life.
Rhyming is exquisite.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is rapid, and the details are heart catching.
Grammatically speaking, your piece is pristine.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Who are you?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What an endearing poem you do present.
The soldiers eyes are opened in the end; and he knows his life will never be the same again.
That's imagery come to life.
Rhyming is exquisite.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is rapid, and the details are heart catching.
Grammatically speaking, your piece is pristine.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Who are you?  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What an endearing poem you do present.
The soldiers eyes are opened in the end; and he knows his life will never be the same again.
That's imagery come to life.
Rhyming is exquisite.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is rapid, and the details are heart catching.
Grammatically speaking, your piece is pristine.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 4-8-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Finding poetry contests in the Spiritual Newsletters is a blessing to me.
I love to write and poetry is one form I see my skill improving in.
The form and structure is a good forum construction.
Flowing with a natural glow, the reader is even introduced to what "free verse" means.
The rules are distinct and the reader/contestant is ready to go prepare the next free verse masterpiece.
Pace is steady as she goes, and enhanced by the grammatically snafu free care with which you present your item.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 3-25-15
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Fyn:
I chuckled at the "forbidden words" and the emphasis to not use the "forbidden words" anywhere.
I don't recall seeing "none" or any of it's derivatives, so you're safe. *Bigsmile*.
What I did see was an amazing poem generated from so few prompt words.
That's creativity at work to the Nth degree.
Your form and structure are strong.
Prosaic in nature; as it appears to me; still lends a bit of rhythm to the piece.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free. Thanks for that.
Pace is slow and sensory filled,
It's always a pleasure to read from your port.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of knitting lace  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What a tangled web you do weave.
Not a question do you leave.
Details within keep the reader on point,
Knitting is your forte, for it you are anointed.

Structure is well formed.
Prosaic in nature, is well suited here.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!

Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
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Your manner, your way, writing the truth.
The reader feels that emotional bond.
Form and structure are consistent.
Rhyme scheme is persistent.
Flow is smooth and melodious,
Pace is slow and senses laborious.
Grammatically speaking, no snafu's are peeking.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Create in Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Your piece caught my attention with the title.
The introduction drew me even further.
Form and structure are suitable.
Emotionally there is reverence in this piece.
Prosaic in nature, there is a rhythmical timber to your piece.
Flow is smooth, save for a slight bump in line 8,
where it appears you have an extra "my."
Pace is slow and rightly so.

Write on!
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founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Abandonment  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
So sorry for the anguish caused by this act.
Your piece speaks volumes of the pain and loss associated with a loved ones loss. Emotionally draining this piece is hard to get through without a tear escaping.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth, with but a few bumps along the way.
Pace is slow and sensory filled, the reader is caught up in the emotion, and has to pace him/herself.
Grammatically there are instances where it feels like some words are left out, and others where some words are misspelled. Reviewing your piece may help you see the items that result in the bumps along the way.
Overall impression: Your piece addresses a personal event in the lives of your family members, and you do a good job relating the emotional and mental stress resulting from this loss.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Though I Tried  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newletter 3-17-15
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Creepy it is then.
Cold, scary, and in the end oops!
No comfort will be found in that little cottage.

The imagery is top drawer.
Leaving the reader with an emotional roller coaster to ride, from beginning to end.
Form and structure are strong and anchoring.
Flow is smooth and the pace is consistently moving.
No visible grammatical snafu's means,
Nary a suggestion for improvement comes forth.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Irish Limericks  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newletter 3-18-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Your limericks are cool.
They unwind from a rich spool.
Form and structure are significant.
Rhyming is magnificent.
Flow is just right,
Pace is quite the ride.
Grammatically snafu free,
Nary another thing to say except thank thee.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Our Lady's Tears  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy Account Anniversary Yellow!
You are the featured Anniversary Reviewer in the forum.
I'm reviewing this as I found the title intriguing.

16 lines of sensory wonderment.
The reader catches the amazing scent.
Lily of the Valley, blossoming, blooming and displaying it's glory.
Reminding this reader of the Savior who cleanses our sins.

Form and structure are immaculate.
Rhyme scheme is an instrument that helps this poem flow with such smooth grace.
Pace is slow, as the reader savors the wonderment displayed in your piece.
Grammatically pristine, nary a jot nor tittle is out of place.

Write on!
Copenator out!
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newletter 3-18-15
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Wow! What an amazing tale you do weave.
The reader is present as you sit on the back porch remembering your Abuela's wisdom. The emotional tags are many, but in the end the dominant one is the sense of awe and wonder.
Form and structure are grand.
Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is slow, as the reader does not want to miss a thing as you bring your piece to a conclusion.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Stephen:

Happy account anniversary!
Your title intrigued me.
The description added more light to the title.
Your stanzas are complete and each one continues the tale so smoothly.
Rhyming in such a consistent way, as to afford the feel of a melody.
A macabre song about the bones of the deceased, tickled and then left to wonder why.
Imagery is superb, the reader feels the cold icy mist.
Pace is slow and rightly so.
Your piece is suitable for publishing in a horror magazine or anthology of the same genre.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of A Needed Friend  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Hub.
A real heart string jerk is received.
Many tears are shed at such loss.
Your piece is replete with so much wondrous imagery.

Rhyming is exquisite and consistent.
Flow is melodious.
Pace is slow and senses engaging.
Nary a jot nor tittle is out of place. Yay!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of The Dove  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritul Newletter 3-4-15
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So much found in this piece.
The message I received is peace is coming.
The description of it healing broken hearts is fantastic!
This is an award winning haiku, and if I had the GPs, I would lay one on ya.
Flow is smooth as silk.
Imagery is top drawer.
Pace is slow as the reader savors the haiku of the century!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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