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Review of Breakthrough!  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your Contest in the Contests and Activities Newsletter 3-11-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A breathtaking contest. The format is well defined, the reader knows what to do and when to do it. The prizes are good incentives.
The rules are distinctive and to the point.
The overall layout of your forum is easy going.
Flowing from one section to the next you have a good template to work with.
Praying for the continued success of this challenge and may the breakthroughs grow by leaps and bounds.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Freefall  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Authors Newletter 3-11-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A childhood ailment condemns a man to sterility and a wife turned cold only makes matters worse.
His final deed of taking care of her financial needs and the way he chose to end it all just hits so hard. The reader is caught up in the agony, the sadness, the stoic rage displayed by his wife.
Can you tell this has impacted the reader emotionally. That's good imagery and worthy of a 10 on any rating scale.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and then fast and then slow again.
Grammatically snafu free, you piece is a fine example of a complete story and thank you for sharing in the WdC!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Authors Newletter 3-11-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Congratulations on your win in the contest. I can see why you won.
There iis so much emotion in this story to keep the readers attention.
The interaction between the eldest child; Mark Jr; was superficial but poignant.
The reader is on Liz's side from the get go, even more so as details of her life come to surface.
Form and structure are a well laid foundation.
Flow is smooth and remarkably grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow as the reader follows the heroine through her final day before becoming a nurse.
You have such a complete story here, and yet the door is open for a new adventure when Liz starts her new career track. Is there more to the story? Inquiring minds want to know.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Authors Newletter 3-11-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Good work on your entry for the contest.
The main emotional tag is melancholy.
Form and structure are rock solid.
Rhyme scheme helps the natural flow of this piece.
Pace is slow, like a meandering stroll down memory land.
Nary a jot nor tittle is out of place.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Twinkle, Twinkle  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newletter 3-11-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What a glorious tale you do weave.
The reader surely cannot leave.
Emotionally you hold sway,
Leading the reader every which way.

In a form that is tired and true,
With a flow that is like the color blue.
Paced slowly and quite detail filled,
From your piece peace is spilled.

Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement are needed for thee.
Thank you so much for sharing in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newletter 3-11-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A wonderful display of emotional tags to keep the readers attention.
Emotionally the main feelings are despair, loss, acceptance, and glee.
Form and structure are solid as the Rock.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically your piece is pristine.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 3-11-15.
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Despair and utter sadness at the loss are present here.
Rhyming scheme is flawless and emotionally well equipped.
Flow is smooth and remarkably grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow; and painfully so; as the reader sees the end of a relationship setting in.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Lost Boys  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 3-11-15.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A dark feeling is present here.
That's imagery that boils out onto the screen.
It almost seems this is the writing of an addict, expressing his/her love/hate relationship with the drug of choice.
Or a really dark dream that haunts the sleep of the character nightly.
Form and structure is well constructed.
Prosaic in nature, there is a sense of a cadence present here.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow as the reader gets lost in the despair that is the major emotional tag here.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Before I Go  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 3-11-15.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Main feelings in this piece are regret and at last peace.
A look at the last bit of time upon this earth, the words spoken to beloved.
Form and structure are marvelous.
Rhyme scheme lends a melodic tone to this piece.
Flow is smooth, with nary a grammatical hiccup visible.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Overall impression: There is peace knowing what needed to be said was said in time.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of A Fall Day  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Incredible depiction of A Fall Day.
The imagery puts the reader in the scene.
Your piece is poetic in timber, with all the scenery you display for the reader.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is as smooth as a pond on a fresh spring day.
Pace is slow, as the reader savors the scene laid out before them.
Grammatically speaking, no matters of concern were detected.

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Review of Wonderland  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 2-25-15,
displays your Wonderland among their pieces.
I often use the NLs t garner reviewing fodder.

Dark writing is an art.
You have to become the part.
Your little venture into the dark,
Has a lot upon which the reader can park.

Form and structure are consistent to the form.
Rhyming lends a bit of rhythm to the piece.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free!
Pace is slow, as the reader gets caught in the fear of maybe not being able to ever get out of that strange little hole.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Hourglass  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 2-25-15,
includes your hourglass in their pages.

You reminded me that I too wrote a shape poem that was an hourglass as well.
Not sure if I have ti up here.
Emotionally the reader is on the same page.
Form and structure are shaped up nicely.
Flow is smooth and nary a misspell is seen along the way.
Pace is slow, because hey it's something to be savored, as it is such a timely message.

Write on!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Joy!
Your blog was in the Poetry NL, 2-25-15.
It's about being color blind and letting us "lower case writers" know it's okay to communicate with the upper echelon.
I personally have no problem reviewing any case color.
Because I know they still put their pants/skirts on one leg at a time.
I read your blog about a hair cut you wrote about.
Sounds like a cool doo.
Form and structure were adequate.
Flow was smooth and grammatically snafu free.
Pace was slow and bubbly with humor and concern felt in multiple places of the read.
Write on!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC.
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 2-25-15,
features your piece among others in their NL.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.
Glad I found your piece in the mix
You can find the newsletter at this link if you'd like to read the NL and thank the editor.
http://www.writing.com/main/newsletters/action/arc...

A suspenseful piece. Your opening line is an attention grabber and that's good imagery. Some of the emotional tags along the way are fear; concern; and even anger at what is happening to their city.
Form and structure are well suited for your piece.
Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is slow as the reader garners the sense of the scenes you lay out.
Overall impression: A good story is developing and the ending keeps the reader wanting to know more.

Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Welcome to the WdC.
Noticing Newbies Newsletter 2-25-15,
features your piece among others in their NL.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.
Glad I found your piece in the mix
You can find the newsletter at this link if you'd like to read the NL and thank the editor.
http://www.writing.com/main/newsletters/action/arc...

Your first chapter has many good qualities.
The reader sees, feels, and hears the scene set before them.
That's imagery that keeps ones attention.
Form and structure are foundational.
Flow is smooth, to a point, then resumes the smooth read.
Pace is slow and rightfully so, as you supply the reader with a budding friendship between 2 characters that are becoming well fleshed out.

2 suggestions for improvement will enhance the flow of your piece and make for an even more enjoyable read.
1. Running your piece through a spell-checking program.
This helps the writer and the reader have a more in-depth reading experience.
2. Your fourth paragraph, is extra long. This is where some of your flow is lost. There is room in the midst of this to create another paragraph at the end of a complete scene or thought process.
A fifth paragraph will give your piece a little more symmetry and make it easier on the readers eyes.
Overall you have a wonderful start and you are encouraged to;

Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful poem of compassion and love.
That's imagery that keeps the readers attention.
Form is a bit long, with the double spacing, the reader loses the stanza's.
Yet nothing is lost in the message of sharing and caring. It's a great poem!
Rhyming scheme lends a melody to the piece.
Flow is smooth once the reader gets a full view of the piece.
Pace is fast and senses captivating.
Grammatically no distinctive spelling errors were noticed.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of First Fight  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The strongest emotional tag is anger.
There is a situation boiling over and 1 of the parties is trying to defuse the situation.
Love is the secondary emotional tag, and with that you have the right amount of emotion to keep the readers attention.
That's imagery and that's the best part of your piece.
You have a complete story here with form and structure adequate.
Line spacing in double space is okay in this case.
Flow is somewhat choppy.
why? Your lines are long, short, long and so on. Nothing is lost in the story, it's just a little choppy.
Pace is fast as the reader takes the emotional climatic ride to the end.
Grammatically your piece is clean.
One suggestion for improvement might be to change Rich's interruption from;
"It. Wasn';t. Me."; to all caps with no period between words and exclamation point at the end:
IT WASN'T ME!
This way the reader catches the frustration and still the emotional attempt to smooth things over.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The plight of the homeless is on my mind a lot as well.
I will help as the Lord leads, and it's good to see and example of the Lord's provision for all people.
The imagery kept me in the story.
The major emotional is compassion and thank you for writing about Manna from Heaven.
Form is standard fare, with a smooth flow.
Pace is slow, just as it should be; for the reader witnesses an act of kindness that started from the heart.
Grammatically speaking no snafu's were detected, and no bumpy roads were found along the way.

Write on!
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Review of Earth Science  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for your rocking educational word search.
I did collect rocks for awhile when I was young and this brought back some good memories for me.
thank you for that. That's imagery that reached to my heart and mind.
Form is adequate.
Flow is smooth. The hardest word to find was "soils" :)
Your introduction was distinctive and the reader knew what to expect.
While I have heard most of these words, it was still a nice refresher.

Write on!
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Review of Superbowl 2012  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sorry for your loss.
I lost my mom in 2000, and still miss here often.
The reader is caught up in the emotion here.
There is the loss; the remembrance; and the final farewell.
Form and structure are well suited.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow, as the reader absorbs the emotional tags layered throughout your tribute to your dad.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of The Snowflake  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!

Incredible imagery of the birth, formation, and falling of a snow flake.
The reader is caught up in it's flight downward to land; as if destined; upon the lips of your beloved.
Now that's imagery!
Form and structure are adequately constructed.
Flow is a little choppy, but nothing is lost in the journey.
Pace is slow and rightly so, for a snow flake is a unique and amazing work of art.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!

Six word stories that line up to create a poem.
Free verse in form and structure.
The reader is captivated by the imagery you use.
Such detail and that's what makes a good story.
Flow is smooth and has a good pace to it.
Grammatically clean and worthy to be read.
I would suggest that you think of a title and change it to that.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of In Cupid's Garden  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Power Reviewers Newsletter for February
features your piece along with others.
I often use the NLs for reviewing fodder.

Dave:
Your piece is a masterful example of imagery.
The reader is hooked from the get go.
Form and structure are consistent.
Rhyming scheme is exquisite.
flow is smooth as a whistle.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically pristine, you have created the perfect piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Spring Romance  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Power Reviewers Newsletter for February
features your piece along with others.
I often use the NLs for reviewing fodder.

A very short poem.
But within these lines are wonders to behold.
The reader is soaking in the sensory layers you do so well with.
Form is consistent.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is fast.
Grammatically snafu free, you deserve a 53!

Write on!
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Review of In Dreams  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Power Reviewers Newsletter for February
features your piece along with others.
I often use the NLs for reviewing fodder.

Dreams do come true, or so it would appear.
Your heroine's repeated dreams of Jose are romantic in nature and the overall feeling of this piece is just that.
Imagery that captures the heart and mind of the reader.
Form and structure are distinct.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu flawless.
Pace is slow and then picks up at the end when at last Jose becomes flesh and blood.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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