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Review of In A Mirror  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah the mirror is a reflection of what goes on.
There is a multitude of emotions that the reader identifies with.
Imagery is alive and the reader sees and hears the emotions flowing through the days activities.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and then speeds up toward the end.
Grammatically you have a clean piece.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual newsletter 09-02-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A very good piece about the Lord's love and grace that is for one and all. If only they will listen and respond.
Proud of you for your bold witness, and the logical and loving way you put it together.
Flow is smooth and thought provoking.
Pace is slow and senses assailing, keeping the readers attention from stem to stern.
Grammatically you have a sweet piece.
No suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual newsletter 09-02-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I see this as a review of a life from life to death.
The form and structure are adequate.
There is emotion within that keeps the readers attention and lead him to the end with ease.
The flow is smooth and efficient.
The pace is slow.
Grammatically there is not a problem to be found.

Write on!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow what a power packed package of emotions.
Form is new to me, but it does have a natural flow and there is a strong sense of melancholy, pining over lost love.
Flow is smooth and there is not even a hint of grammatical infractions.
Overall impression: Literally wow! You are a pro.

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Copenator out!
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Review of Poem Primer  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Now that's a mixer.
It gets the reader excited.
It also gets the reader inspired.
Perfectly poetic and it's at a grand pace.
Flow is just right to get the juices "flowing".
That muse has no chance but to hop to it and boom baby!
Pace is like the beginning of a race.
Nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Happy account annivesary.
Your poem is one of reminiscence about the invisible band-aids from your young life. The emotional impact is multi-level as the closing lines open the reality of life. The reader sees, hears, and feels them all.
Form and structure are firmly in place.
There is a rhythm that feels like a song.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and steady.
Grammatically your piece is just fine.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in For Authors NL 8-26-15
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The theme was Time Capsules, and what a Capsule in time you do capture.
Free verse poem that works so well.
Form and structure are efficient.
There is a rhythmical timber to this piece.
As if one could sing it and hear the notes in the minds.
The flow is smooth and sensory soaked.
The pace is slow and rightly so, as the reader absorbs the moment in time you have captured in your Time Capsule Dream.
Grammatically speaking your piece is an example of wowsa!

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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dreamjunkie:
Found your item in For Authors NL 8-26-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Now that's romantic.
The tension could be cut with a knife.
The relief in the end was palpable.
The emotion throughout this piece was what kept the reader glued to the piece.
Your structure seemed a but tight but the flow was not hampered by that factor at all.
The pace is slow and then speeds up in the end. Leaving one to wonder what else was in the tube from 29 years ago.
Grammatically your piece is pristine.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC!

Write on!
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Review of THE TIME CAPSULE  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Countrymom:
Found your item in For Authors NL 8-26-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What an enchanting tale.
Your grandson wanting to cherish memories.
Enough to put the in a time capsule.
Your poem is superb.
The rhyming is sublime.
The flow is smooth as silk.
The pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically, nary a jot nor tittle have gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Colors  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nobody:
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in Noticing Newbies NL 8-26-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A colorful piece you do write.
Form and structure are just right.
Imagery keeps the readers attention; the colors pop off the page.
flow is smooth and free of visible grammatical snafu's.
Pace is medium and that's just shy of rocket power fast.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sarah:
Found your item in Noticing Newbies NL 8-26-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What an enchanting tale of a girl and her "friend."
The emotion in this piece is palpable.
That's a sign that the imagery you use is effective to engage the reader.
The form and structure are consistent, which helps the reader anticipate the progression in the story you tell.
Prosaic in nature, there is a natural rhythmical air to this piece.
The flow is remarkably smooth.
The pace is steady on as the reader follows the story from line 1 to the end and a nice resolution to boot.
Grammatically speaking, it would be appropriate to insert periods at certain complete sentence points. As this allows the reader to breathe a little and continue on.
Overall impression: This would make a nice children's story entry in the "We Write For Children" Contest here in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The Labyrinth  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.
Stellar imagery. That which draws the reader into the tale.
Prosaic but most definitely poetic in scope.
There is almost a song-like feel to it.
Flow is smooth, one might even say seamless.
Pace is a rapid fire, trail blazing, crawl as the reader soaks in the imagery you pepper this piece with.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Flightsong II  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.
It almost sounds like the SST, before it went out of use.
You describe the feeling you get as you are flying through the air with the greatest of ease.
The reader sees the scene you set, as if we are there with you. That's imagery that pops!
It has a poetic timber here.
The structure is efficient.
The flow is smooth save for a slight bump in the road.
"To far shres and distant climes you go"
This is where the piece slows down a little but it takes nothing away from the overall feel and meaning of this piece.
Pace is slow and rightly so as the reader absorbs the wonder of flight through your poetic heart.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Fyn:
Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.

Sorry the occasion of this was the ride back from a funeral.
Your imagery is stunning. The reader sees the coffins upright.
The form is appropriate for this piece.
The flow is as smooth as silk. There are no grammatical bumps in the road, and the pace is a steady onward march.
Overall impression of this piece is simply "awe." You are a writer extraordinare and thank you for sharing in the WdC.

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Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
I often use the NLs to find reviewing fodder.

What I think makes a good novel is a lot of good poems stretched out and turned into paragraphs. *Bigsmile*
You take the reader on an adventure to create the perfect poem (at least that is how I interpret your piece). It appears you have much experience in composing them too.
Flow here is quite smooth and the reader is grateful that your piece is so grammatically snafu free.
Pace is steady on and the details you add throughout are enough to want to know more about why you don't finish novels.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Worduko  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 8-26-15,
houses your piece on poetry.
I like the way you look at it.
With the many aspects covered in almost a conversational manner.
Form and structure are consistent.
There is a rhythmical timber to this piece.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
The pace is slow and steady on. Your point is solidified in the end.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Coffee  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm going out on a limb here and declaring you love coffee. *Bigsmile*
There is honest emotion in here and the reader picks up on that, keeping his/her attention from stem to stern. The form and structure are well done.
The flow is a wowsa. Smooth, and sensually stimulating. The pace is gradual and rightly so. This is about a cup of coffee that you hold in a special light. You treat the reader to that importance in a grammatically clean piece of art that screams drink more coffee!
Thanks for sharing in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of A Painter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You are a painter,
Yes you are.
With words you do paint,
A picture plain and clear.

Your imagery is excellent,
The reader can see the pallet.
There is a rhythmical feel,
Each line is so real.
Flow is smooth,
The senses it does soothe.
Pace is medium and sensory filled.
From beginning to end nary a jot nor tittle is awry.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jyo:
You've been here for eight years. That's more than half of the time the WdC has been "on the web". Thank you for your commitment to a site that you must surely love by now.
Now on to the review:
Emotionally the reader is hooked. The tension, the anxiety, the relief are all palpable in this short piece. A complete tale to be precise.

Structurally there is a beginning, middle and an end.
Flow is naturally smooth.
Pace is slow and imagery filled.
Your piece is grammatically as clean as a whistle.
How can you improve upon this? I don't know, therefore I'd say leave 'er be.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Read A Newbie header.
Welcome to the WdC. You may be a newbie here but your writing skill is apparent in this piece.
Imagery is striking. The reader follows the action as if he/she is there.
The form and structure are firmly in place.
The flow is so smooth and enhanced by a grammatically snafu free writing exhibition.
The pace is steady on and the aliens are thankful for their provider.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in Poetry Newsletter 04-29-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
I like both versions.
Thank you for sharing this in the WdC.
You have a good form and structure.
Prosaic in nature it has a very poetic nature.
Flow is so smooth.
Pace is so slow and detail filled.
The reader is happy to have read line-by-line, a nice piece that pays homage to mother earth.
All this in a grammatically pristine piece. Wowsa!

Write on!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in Poetry Newsletter 04-22-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
You have a very polished writing style.
This piece is quite good and moves quite agile.
Form and structure are superb.
Rhyming is an A+, really super!
Pace is steady on and in the midst of it all, nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 08-05-15
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You have a good piece here.
Only one small spelling matter was seen, but does nothing to detract from the overall smooth flow.
"nought" should be naught.
Emotionally the main feelings are that of melancholy and hope of change to come.
Form and structure are clearly laid out.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and attention retaining.
Write on!
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Review of Filth  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 08-05-15
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Great story in a short poem.
The subject knows his habit and seeks help from above.
The emotion is real.
The rhyming is efficient and enhances the flow.
Pace is steady on and grammatically speaking, no visible snafu's are apparent.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 08-05-15
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I like your piece on journaling.
I definitely do/did date my entries.
In fact a lot of my journal entries turned into writings here in the WdC and elsewhere.
Form and structure is clear.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is evenly slow.
Grammatically your piece is the bomb! That's a good thing, by the way.


Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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