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197 Public Reviews Given
197 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I try to go as in-depth as I possibly can in my reviews, and I am forever tweaking my style.
I'm good at...
I'm definitely good at spotting grammar, usage, and spelling issues. But I am also very good at giving constructive criticism and not just criticism. I like to point out all the things that are good about an item, while also giving advice on how to improve it.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Supernatural, Horror
Least Favorite Genres
Non-Fiction, Technology, War
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, Short Stories, Flash Fiction
Least Favorite Item Types
Essays, Articles
I will not review...
Erotica
Public Reviews
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Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (5.0)
My very first thought upon reading this poem was "Wow". I even had to read it to my daughter who thought the same thing. You are a very talented writer. The imagery was excellent. It was heartbreaking. I have nothing negative to say about this poem other than maybe using a smaller font type, but that is trivial. Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem.
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Review by Angela Death
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story is excellent! I loved this concept! It is very vivid. I felt like I was with her. I can't personally imagine going through such an ordeal, but your description made me feel as if I had. If I was to find fault with it at all (which I am loathe to do on such an excellent piece), I would say that I wished it was longer and went into even more detail. Keep up the excellent writing!
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Review by Angela Death
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Once again, I am very impressed by your talent. Your imagery is excellent and the form suits you very well. Keep up the excellent work. I didn't even find typos in this one.
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Review of Anger  
Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your use of descriptive adjectives is very good in this poem. I enjoyed the style of the poem and the way it flowed. Overall, I believe that you did an excellent job and I really can't think of anything that I would change with this poem. My favorite line is "Anger tastes, Like a lemon being shoved down your throat." Keep up the excellent work. I'd love to read more from you.
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Review of Powerless  
Review by Angela Death
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
It seems incomplete. I'm expecting more than what is there. What happens? As for the title, it's not bad, but it doesn't seem to fit. Powerless would have been a better title, especially since that was what you were going for. I hope this helps. It's definitely an excellent start. I hope to read the revised version!
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Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a very good piece of work. However, I think that this could be expanded upon to be better. Perhaps more visualization, more thoughts about the emotions that spread across the world that day. But it is definitely a good beginning. Personally, no matter how much I try, I find it very difficult to write about that day. It's like when I start, my heart just refuses to let me continue.
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Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is quite excellent! Your imagery is fantastic! My favorite line is "Malicious memories start to detach". It is very difficult to let go of the past sometimes, but when we do it is a very freeing experience! Great job! Keep the poems coming!
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Review by Angela Death
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really liked this. You are an excellent writer! Give us more!
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Review of Father  
Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very moving poem. It's heart-wrenching in its tone. You did a very good job.
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Review of Voices  
Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (5.0)
First, I must say that unless you had said something, I would NEVER have guessed that this was written by a 7th grader. You are truly talented. I think it's excellent! I hope you got an "A" for this!
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Review of Heart Of Darkness  
Review by Angela Death
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is absolutely fabulous. I can almost hear this being recited in a tv show or movie, it is that good. Very vivid and alluring. Keep up the excellent writing!
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Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (4.0)
I absolutely love this poem, however, it's the last verse specifically that loses me. It loses its gracefulness that flows throughout the rest of the poem. I would scrap this last verse entirely and start over again with it. But the rest of the poem shouldn't change a single bit. Excellent writing!
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Review of Hello, Butterfly!  
Review by Angela Death
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a beautiful poem! I was able to see the butterfly in my mind's eye. You are very adept at description.
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