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Rated: E | (5.0)
I, too, am looking for a publisher. I was looking at author house - I don't know that I can do all the formatting required for Lulu. Was it difficult?

I enjoyed your article, it was helpful to me.

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LW
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527
Review of The Gift Of Life  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this.
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LW
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528
Review of DADDY'S SHOTGUN  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That must have been a horrible experience to live through. I am sure your writing an autobiography would help someone going thru the same things.

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LW
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529
Review of our witch  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like the story this poem tells. I think it flows well too.

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LW
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530
Review of Bed of Roses  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't understand how poetry is written so I do not review to form. I liked this poem and I think it flowed well.

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LW
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531
Review of A Snowy Night.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. It flows well and I can see the scene.

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LW
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532
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Star Trek and Star Wars were my favorite movies. I think you have a good start on another book/movie! I would say Keep at it.

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LW
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533
Review of To My Daughters  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a super poem to your daughters.

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LW
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534
Review of Free Agency  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked this story, you put a lot into 300 words.

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LW
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535
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story and I am glad that Andrew won!

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LW
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Review of Once  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I have to be honest, I am confused by your story. I don't understand what happened. Were you hurt or was this a paranormal experience?

The first two sentences talk about this being your 7th year, I think you could probably reword those two sentences so as not to repeat yourself.

I do think you wrote it well, it does flow well, I was just confused.

Remember these are only my opinions, it is your work.

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LW
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537
Review of Memoirs  
for entry "Jury Duty" 
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting situation, I had been sleeping and the radio was on, I thought I was dreaming when I heard the news.

Good Story
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LW
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Review of Nick  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story, I felt like I was right there with them in snow!

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LW
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539
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really a great story. I had no idea that this was taking place underwater!

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LW
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540
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a really great story and written extremely well, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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LW
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541
Review of The Story of "Is"  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this is great!

Thanks for reminding me.

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LW
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542
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story and I think you wrote it well. It flows thru out and I can see the little girls clearly.

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LW
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543
Review of White As Walls  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this story and I really think you are a talented writer.

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LW
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544
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is well written and I know that during this time period life was very hard for orphaned children. I don't like to see children suffer even in written works - I've seen real children suffer because of adults. I think you are a good writer and I hope you continue to write and learn the craft. I hope that you will be published soon.

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LW
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Review of THE END  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I like this, it made me smile. I like the way it is written.

In the end - Satan will cry, God will smile and man will be with God.

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LW
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546
Review of The Mood Glasses  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This makes you think about how you feel about yourself - are you happy or always fearful? Good writing, flows well, I like the ending.

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LW
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547
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this story. It was written well and it was believable. And something to think about.

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LW
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548
Review of The Dark Ages  
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is always a choice - what choice will we make? We choose how things will go - we choose what we believe. Good writing - thought provoking.

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LW
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549
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like your style of writing, you write very well. This piece made me laugh and I like to laugh.

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LW
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Review of Is God Dead?  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think you write very well, if the last was a real question, yes God is real and very alive, the reason for all the chaos is the world is because God gave us all will to choose the way we want to go in life. He does not force or coerce us into anything. It is our choice to live for Him or to choose another path. The Bible gives us a good view into the mind of God - we just have to read it - then we have to act on it.

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LW
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