A very touching story. I liked it - check your grammar in the third paragraph - do you think it should be 'saw' instead of 'seen'. Again I really liked the story.
I liked this poem. Your format seems good to me. I don't know enough about poetry to review it's structure. I did not find any fault with it. I hope we can do as the poem suggest and break down the walls - however I don't see that happening until Christ comes back - and I think that is soon.
This was great - I don't know how to review poetry as to type - I just tell you what I liked and I like this poem. If you are in the military, I say, Thank You. If not, you wrote a very good piece about it.
This was different, I don't think I've read anything like it before, I like it and I think you wrote it well. I don't try to review poetry as to form etc. because I don't write too much poetry. I like this, but I have to admit - I've always been on the side of the Indian - what ever tribe they were.
This gave me chills and made me cry and made me think of my brother. He was a Viet Nam Vet also, he was 17 when he left and never the same when he came home. This was a beautiful tribute all military - thank you.
This is extremely sad and I do hope that this is a purely fictional piece of writing - if it is not please talk to someone don't let this happen to you. If it is fiction - you are a very good writer - keep at it!
I enjoyed this story! I am originally from a very small town in Mississippi and I can picture this story quite well! I think it was written very well and don't see any changes that need to be made - I was lost in the story.
I want to read more of your story. Welcome to WDC. Lots of stuff to see and do here. Be sure to fill out your Bio to let people know who you are and just a little about you.
I wish I could still write to my mom, she passed in 2001 and I miss her greatly, we did not get along all that well either. She did the best she could with what she knew at the time and that is how I raise mine, I do the best I can with what I know right now and that is all anyone can do.
I don't review a lot of poetry because quiet honestly I don't understand a lot of it. This poem I understand and really liked - I cannot review how it was written etc. but to tell you that I thought it was good, I understood it, and it made me smile.
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