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Review of Yesterday  
Review by ErinLynn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nicely said. I agree that we cannot live in yesterday, nor can we live in the future. We can only live in the present and appreciate what we have and anticipate the beauty that is possible tomorrow.


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Review of We Make It So  
Review by ErinLynn
Rated: E | (5.0)
You say:
"To be of our self
We watch the sun conquer the night each dawn"

For me, this is the struggle of life. To consistently drive out the darkness in my heart that would envelop me.

You say:
"To be of our own will.
Gifted, as though we ever owned anything before we are caged in the earth,
As a celebration for our life.
In a sealed box,
So we can be protected.
As though returning to the earth is a violation.
As though we own this body.
We, and only we, see this as respect.
We make it so."

Are we to be separated forever from that which we are? You are observant to note that only we see this as respect.

You say:
"The delusion used to lay in such a visceral state
So deep within what I believed to be me.
I made that so.
I no longer wish to make anything
So much so that I am willing to give up everything
To enjoy what the author writes
And the musician sings
And the gusts blow
God makes this so."

This is very beautiful and insightful writing. It has given me much to consider about the life that we strive to live instead of just being the life that we are.

Thank you and keep writing.


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Review of No One Loves Me  
Review by ErinLynn
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the slight twinge of humor in your poem, and the irony of being loveless in a world full of "night clubs and dating sites" speaks to my heart and life today. The rhythm of your poem is awesome and allows it to flow effortlessly. Also, your choice of words makes your point most effectively.


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Review of Day of the Dove  
Review by ErinLynn
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem and you have introduced me to a new form of poetry. The rhyme and flow is very good and the subject is both thought provoking and inspiring. I like "the solution in nature" that promotes peace rather than conflict. You say, "Lost is the clenching when gentleness flows, and that gentle flow can prevent stains of red." This is a beautiful sentiment. One that we all should give our full consideration.


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Review by ErinLynn
Rated: E | (4.0)
A beautiful sentiment offering hope as well as sound advice.


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Review by ErinLynn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for your beautiful sentiment. It has touched me and I feel inspired to continue my faith journey despite the obstacles that distract me often. Thank you for reminding me that God's love is so much bigger than any difficulty I may be facing. I am who I am because he specifically and deliberately created me to be in this world in this exact place and time and I believe, it is not an accident that I came across your writing. Again, thank you and may God bless you tremendously.


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Review by ErinLynn
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thank you for reminding me that God is truly good all of the time. I too can think of many times that God has intervened in my life for my benefit. Often, I complain about my situation or feel depressed about some issue or another, forgetting that He is always good to me regardless of what I am going through. Your essay has inspired me to remember to praise God for everything that happens in my life, good or bad, because everything that happens has a purpose. Praise God!


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Review by ErinLynn
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very touching story. It reminds me that what may be junk to some is actually a great treasure to others. It also reminds me that we should treat everyone with worth and dignity because we do not know what has happened in a person's life that makes them who they are. God loves and values all of us and so we should value each other because blessings can come from the most unlikely of places.


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Review of A Heart's Dream  
Review by ErinLynn
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a beautiful sentiment of the hope that a heart always has in the future. I have never heard of a quatrain before but I especially like its use here. It builds the emotional commitment necessary for hope to thrive. No matter how a heart is broken, it can always heal with the hope of love in better days to come. Nicely done.


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Review by ErinLynn
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a sweet story. It gets to the core of what we really need from love as opposed to the solitary moments of fascination we sometimes experience when meeting someone new. I like how you used the prompts. They blended nicely into the story and didn't seem too ridiculous. You made it clear what you wanted to say about love and your point is well taken. Perhaps there is a follow up to this story that explores the peace and comfort of a marriage saved from divorce and the thrill of a marriage that is new. Happy writing!


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Review by ErinLynn
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This story seems like it will be interesting. The world of acting and auditions is foreign to me so I'm looking forward to learning something new. There is also a good amount of conflict to keep the story moving. Good luck developing the story.


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Review by ErinLynn
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the conflict that is building in this story. Already, I can tell there will be tension between Tony and Mary's families. This makes it interesting to see how their budding love for each other will or will not overcome the obvious obstacles. I like love stories that have some tension and conflict in them. It makes the triumph in the end that much sweeter. At least I'm hoping this story will have a happy ending. I'll look forward to following Tony and Mary as their attraction grows.


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Review of Over A Cup of Tea  
Review by ErinLynn
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The description and imagery in this story is excellent. I especially enjoyed the simple pleasure of loving someone in the everyday moments of life. This simple pleasure is inspiring and what make love worthwhile. Nicely done.
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