Nice little poem. For you only being twelve at the time that was really good. I use to catch bugs too when I was younger. I use to love to do that. I use to always let them go too. I use to love the summers and wish they were always longer. Thank you for posting and sharing this poem. Keep up the good work.
Your poem is really nice. I understand it for I do the same thing. I will lie and say that things are fine when they really aren't. I just don't want anyone to worry about me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the good work.
I liked your poem. It reminds me of being cozy watching the snow fall which I love to watch. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the good work.
At first I thought of that movie "The Perfect Storm" but I read on. Your poem was really good and I enjoyed reading it. I never sailed before nor have I been on a cruise. I have been on a couple of boats though. I cannot imagine the terror that these people would have felt. Thank you for posting and sharing. Keep up the great work.
I do not have children of my own but I have two beautiful nephews. Jack is nine and Jimmy is seven. I have been there ever since the second that they were born. I love them dearly and I give my all to them. Jimmy just turned seven on February 4th. I am in awe how they grow so fast. It was just like yesterday that they were born and I was holding them so close, feeding them, changing diapers, and helping my sister whenever possible. Watching the boys so my sister could get some much needed rest. Now Jack, the nine year old, is almost as tall as I am. He stands at my chin and I am 5'2". Jack is going to be a giant. LOL. Jimmy is shorter but he is only seven. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. It brings a lot of great memories to mind. Keep up the great work.
I had that special bond with my Mittens. When she passed five years ago I felt her everywhere as well. Even to this day I will catch a glimpse of her or feel her lay her head on my arm like she use to do. I have premonitions that come in the form of dreams. Mittens has come to me to let me know she is okay and waiting for me. I can feel Mittens the strongest when I am stressed out. This was a beautiful poem you wrote. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work.
Who is Bill? Am I missing something? Other wise I thought that the story was really good. Thank you for sharing and posting your story. Keep up the good work.
Abuse should never factor into any relationship. You should never stay regardless of what the abuser is promising. That is just my opinion. Your poem was well written. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the good work.
Your poem was very nice. I hope you don't mind but I sent this poem to my mother. I know she will love it. You did a great job. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Keep up the good work.
Ah, I know the cobwebs all too well. I am in constant pain, I am getting a knee replacement on March 12th, and that should take care of the pain. I also do not sleep a lot. I may get four hours of sleep a night on a good night. I am a retired paramedic and this was normal when I was a medic. But since retiring due to injury I thought my sleep pattern would return to normal but it has not yet and it has been four years. I have tried sleep medications that only send me manic, which I go nights without sleep. So I know these cobwebs. The only thing that keeps me sane now is my writing. Your short story was great. Thank you for posting and sharing this story. Keep up the good work.
Drug addicts are difficult to reason with. My aunt is addicted to heroine. I have tried to help her many times and she just slapped me in the face. I am at the point now that I don't even talk to her. Drug addicts have to want to get better and no one can do it for them. Good luck.
Your poem was really well written. Your poem flowed nicely. Thank you for posting and sharing your poem. Heart ache is never easy. I am sorry this happened to you. I do promise that it will get easier as time passes. Keep up the good work.
I am sorry you feel this way. Nothing sucks more than feeling unloved. Good luck finding your soulmate. Thank you for posting your poem and sharing it. Keep up the good work.
I am Pagan. I do have to say you sound haunted. You are not crazy. I am sorry that these strange things keep happening to you. Try asking them what they want. This might help. I hope things get better. Thank you for posting and sharing your story. Keep up the good work.
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