Very powerful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Do any of us know who we really are? I just came out of the closet and I announced that I feel like I am a man that is trapped inside of a woman's body. I am 45 now. My family is understanding and completely supportive. My father says he suspected this and he was just waiting for me to come out. Thank you for posting your poem. Keep up the good work!
I am truly sorry that this has happened to you. Some people are really heartless. This person had no right to do this to you. Your poem was really great and heart felt. Thank you for posting it.
What a horrible thought. Abuse is a horrible thing and upsets me something terrible. The story captured me from the start. I am a retired paramedic and I have had my share of abuse cases. They are difficult to deal with. I hope with all of my heart that you were not abused.
Thank you for posting your story. Keep up the good work.
I liked your poem a lot. I use to be a paramedic. I can really relate to this piece. I have had to declare many people dead in my 20 + years as a paramedic. Pronouncing someone dead is hard to do. Thank you for posting this poem. Keep up the good work.
You humanized the "Devil". I am Pagan so I don't believe in the "Devil". I believe that someone can be mostly evil though. You did really good work. I really enjoyed reading this piece of work. Thank you for posting and sharing.
This brings back a lot of painful memories. I lost a lot of friends that horrid day. Your poem was excellent. Thank you for posting. I am happy that I read it.
I think your poem is great. It is very strong. Your poem is also very intense too. There are no spelling errors that I could see (I am huge on spelling, LOL). I think you have a great knack for poetry. Keep up the great work and thank you for posting your poem.
Nice poem. It was short and sweet. We all have to move forward whether we like it or not. I have learned this. I don't like it all the time either. But it must be done. Thank you for sharing the poem and keep up the good work.
I understand about caring too much for I am the same way. There are two things you do not do in this life. You don't harm an animal (Unless for food and you use the whole animal). Then there is harming a child you do not do. Anyone who hurts an animal or a child should be shot. I know that sounds strong but that is how I feel. I donate every year to the MSPCA, I don't have much money so I give what I can. I used to be a paramedic and dealt with a lot of child abuse cases. These cases were always heart wrenching. But I am good when it comes to things like that. After completing the call and making sure the child is getting the care he or she needs, I vent. I have two young nephews, 7 and 9. I would literally kill someone if they hurt them. I don't have children of my own so I invest a lot of my time into them.
Your poem has invoked a lot of strong feelings in me as you can see. But your poem was excellent. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the great work.
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