I took to heart the last few lines of this wonderful piece of writing. The part where visits do matter. I've been in the situation where nobody came to visit and although at the time I tried to act like it did not bother me it did.
My hat goes off to the writer of this piece.
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Here we go. Writer is obvously talking about something in their past. Poetic license allows writer to be vague while at the same time writing good poetry.
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When I first started reviewing, I read some of your suggestions and they really helped. And I made some bad reviews and the feed back was unreal. But since then I've learned to tone down a little. In some cases it is hard. This article will help me tremendously.
That sounds reasonable. But what if I want to look at the river? This piece of writing is an abstract. I liked it.
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Very nice poem. Good verses. Good meter. And good advise, I guess. Poem tells a story and the chorus, I liked that the best. This writer exhibits qualities of being creative.
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Hey, I don't think this stinks. Sometimes writers are their own worst critics. Verses are good and meter is too. Plus it is a light-hearted happy little piece of writing.
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Now I really did like and enjoy this poem which was well written and reminded me of those summertimes when no one had air conditioning and the windows were open.
Nice job.
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This reminds me of my mother's kitchen. This is a completely inspiring poem, entertaing, interesting and tells of simpler times, I'm sure. For one thing my mother did not have a wood stove although she did learn to cook on one.
This is really a good poem.
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Top-notch piece of writing that tells a story and then tells another story with in that story. Writer made it work and it did. Good grammar and good job. Welcome to writing.com
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This is an interesting start of a short story? Novel? It could be these or whatever the writer wants it to be. What is written is well done and intertaining, and shows creativity. Welcome to writing.com
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If this truly was your first attempt at writing a sex scene then Bravo. You did an excellent job. Not even Stephen King could write one that good on his first attempt. This was well written, entertaining, interesting and very erotic. Good job.
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One brother dies while one brother lives...This poem is about the exchange of life. Well written and verses are good, meter is okay and this writer knows how to tell a story. Welcome to writing.com
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Excellent story about grief and how one woman starts to deal with it. Unique approach to dealing with grief. Well written, good grammar, and not mis spelled words that I noticed. This story was easy to read and entertaining. I enjoyed it. Welcome to writing.com
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This poem is well written, verses are tight and meter is good. It makes a religous statement and at the same time is a tribute. As I've said before, when reviewing poetry, only the author knows for sure what the whole meaning is. So in this case all I can say is: Job well done.
I really enjoyed reading this piece of writing. It was enlightening, entertaining, creative, and offers sage advise to anyone who reads it. The writer of this piece shows a depth of understanding about the world at large. Keep up the good work and Welcome to writing.com
Very well written narrative. No grammatical errors and spelling looked okay. In this story the vampires are written in to be the good guys, just out for an evening meal. I could find no malice in the acts of taking blood. BRILLIANT! Welcome to writing.com
To me, this is a darn good piece of work. The verses compliment each other and the meter is right on target. And this reviewer can relate to it because he has a dog that is all the things mentioned in the poem and of course a whole lot more. Very well done.
This is a well written poem with good verse and excellent meter. It is about someone reaching out for love. The writer shows talent and could be a natural born storyteller. The poem does tell a sort of story. And the ending is pretty much how it would be in real life in most situations. Welcome to writing.com
Basically this is a good sample with a couple of typos in it. I prefer to see paragraphs have line breaks and conversations to have line breaks, it just makes it easier for the Reader to read when line breaks are incorporated. Nice. Welcome to writing.com
Now this piece of writing has teeth. The subject is abuse and the writer tells about it with emotion and passion. Verdes are good and meter seems to work. And the piece tells a story, sad, but with a happy ending. My hat off to the writer for a job well-done.
This writer writes with so much compassion that I'm venturing we'll soon see her in print. And notice how she has a craft for weaving words of wisdom into old songs that have special meaning, not only to the writer but to all of those considered to be baby boomers.
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