I liked your
Your structure is done well,
although at times the topics tend
to suddenly overlap ... but that is
the nature of the battle of good
and evil ... obfuscation.
Missing, it seems, is the explicit
statement of the concept of the on
going battle of good and evil.
This battle is continuously raging
within each of us, and all around
us everywhere, and all the time.
Also, that subtle voice you're
hearing that warns you when you're
about to be bad... that's The Holy
Spirit. Study more about Him. He
is the way through which you'll be
able to know the truth of each
You've listed many questions.
Study each question carefully, and
pray to Jesus for guidance to the
truth of each. Search the Bible
everyday. Acts 17:11
Those beliefs of yours. List each
one out, and ask the question "Is
your belief right with God?" Or is
your belief, instead, derived from
a secular source. For example, you
can't have many gods. So, there is
no such thing as God(s). 1st
commandment - Ex 11. If you want
to be "right with God," then based
on this usage throughout your
paper, you have some issues to
settle in your own heart.
You challenge the Bible...
"where, for example, are the
dinosaurs..." That's easy... Job
40:15, and 41:1
"or the fact that present man has
been recently proven to have
coexisted with "ape man" actually,
Neanderthal research shows that they
are our predecessors, among some
other very surprising results. So,
there is no such thing as
"coexisting" with yourself. I
refer you to "Buried Alive" by Jack
Cuozzo. I'm sure you'll like that
book. If not, get it as a present
for your aunt.
"hence the perpetual existence of
"missing link?" The concept of a
missing link is an evolutionist
idea, and you stated that you
didn't believe in evolution. Your
thinking seems contradictory here.
Also, many of your questions are
best discussed in a fellowship
bible study, where you can begin to
realise the truths with the
assistance of those who may have,
themselves, had a difficult time
acquiring God's truth, while
ridding themselves of the
confusing, rationalizing, and
destructive 'crap' that the secular
world sticks in your head.
Righteousness is to get on the path
of God's truth, stay on it, and
learn to recognize the secular
confusion for what it is... the
evil nature of man. God does love
you, but you are standing on the
very "slippery slope" of the ideas
of secular man, and you are in
great danger. This is why your
aunt is fearful for you. Her love
for you is unconditional, but she
knows that God's love is not.
Your writing is very good, and held
my interest to the end. I would
have preferred that you spaced
between your paragraphs. And, the
overall piece would make a fine
study for a fellowship meeting, and
I highly recommend it as such.
With that in mind I'll rate it 4
stars...considerably above average.
I'll say a prayer for you, and your
aunt, that God sends his spirit to
you to guide you along.
Happy spring, and God Bless,