|I found your poem on by searching through account anniversaries. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful. First, let me say that I am not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, please ignore.
I really like this simple poem for several reasons. First, it's reassuring to know others have experienced the same thing. It evoked feelings of sadness, hope, and a type of regret that I myself have surely had before. I like the shortness. It's straight to the point, with no pretty flowers for decoration. The only errors I noticed are both in the first line of the second stanza, when you should be your and don't should be doesn't. You seem to have your writing style, which works well. Thank you for sharing this piece with us, I do hope you write more wonderful poems soon. Write on!