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for entry "Algid" 
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hey there, Lilli!
It looks like we both chose the same contest for Week 1. Pretty cool, but I don't know if that's good or bad, because you're tough competition!
I really like your entry. You approached the prompt word at a different angle that works well. That's one of the reasons I like this contest so much- it's interesting to see the different takes on the chosen word. (Plus, it's normally a word that I don't hear too often.) Not only did you define it, but you also invoked a feeling of sadness in me. I've definitely felt like this before. Because I can relate, it makes the poem more personal, which I think is important too. As for the form- well, it's exactly 24 syllables, so you're spot on. I didn't see any spelling or grammar issues either. Overall, you've created a great poem! Good luck in the contest and keep up the good work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Ain't she my kin  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry and I enjoy ones about nature. I normally let the author know what my favorite line is, but in this case I can't because I thoroughly enjoyed the entire thing. Your powerful word choice really amps up the imagery. The free verse form works well here. I don't notice any spelling or grammar issues, so I have no suggestions. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the great work!
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Review of Cookie  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry. Although I'm not a really a cat person, I do enjoy reading about all types of pets. There's an unexplainable bond that can enrich your life. You've done a good job of showing us how much you treasure Cookie.
I noticed a few grammar and puncuation issues in this poem, but they are small and easy to fix:
In the first line, cats should be cat's.
In the last line, then should be than. Also, since Siamese is being used as proper noun, it should be capitalized.
I like the end rhymes you used in the first stanza, they work well.
Overall, you've created a charming little poem.

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Only words  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry. Although I don't often write romantic poems, I do enjoy reading them every now and then.
My favorite part is the sixth stanza. I feel like people have forgotten that words are timeless and just say whatever pops into their heads without thinking about it could affect others.
The tone here is informal, which suits the subject.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues.
You've done a good job of explaining true intimacy. It reminds of 18th century Romantic prose. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Wind and rain  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry. Your title and description let me know that the subject is one that I enjoy, so I dove into to read more.
I really liked reading this! Your powerful word choices and imagery helped me to feel like I was there. My only suggestion have nothing to do with the content.
In order to get more exposure for this item, I would go ahead and pick two more genres.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues.
Each line reads smoothly and flows well.
Overall, you've created a lovely little poem. Thank you for sharing this with us! Keep up the great work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Bad Kisser  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry and you have quite the collection! The title and description piqued my curiosity and pulled me in to read more.
Your imagery evoked feelings of hope at the beginning and disappointment at the end.
The rhythm and rhymes work well together, making for a smooth read from line to line. Also, each stanza flowed well.
Overall, you've created a charming poem that I'm sure most readers can relate to in some way. Thank you for sharing this with us and for all that you've done on here over the past 18 years!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of The Sleepwalker  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry. Especially in the comedy genre.
The title and description piqued my curiosity, so I dove in to read more.
This a cute poem! The tone is informal and whimsical, which suit the subject well. The rhythm and rhyme make for a smooth reading from line to line. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues. Overall, you've created a charming poem that is very relatable!
Thank you for sharing this with us!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Theft of Words  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I don't normally review short stories, because I feel like I don't have enough experience. But I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this item. It was an amusing (and possibly believable) plot and held my attention all the way through. Congratulations on your First Place Win, you definitely deserved it! Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the great work.
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Bluetooth Blues  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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I don't normally review short stories because I don't feel like I have enough experience to give any real insight, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this item. The catchy title is what caught my attention. Having two crazy teenagers, I thought of them while reading. It sounds just like something they would try. Also as a parent, it's reassuring to find reading material that's appropriate for them. It's not always easy to find something that will spark an interest, but my 14-year-old daughter thought this was a cute story as well. I think is a great story and definitely deserved a win. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the great work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of The Librarian  
In affiliation with The Royal Court  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I'm not an expert, but I hope you find my opinion useful.
I chose this piece to review pretty much because of the title and description. I can't resist anything that has to do with librarians. So good job of luring me in for more! I don't normally review short stories because I don't feel I have the experience. But I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your Third Place Win! This short story is definitely a winner. I also want to say that I appreciate the format. It makes it easier to read. Thank you for sharing this short story with us, you are a talented storyteller. Keep up the good work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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for entry "Lost In The Shuttle" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry. I'm not an expert, but I hope you find my opinion useful. First, let me congratulate you on being the Grand Overall Winner!
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Your wonderful use of imagery helps the reader to clearly see a lovely scene. I felt a sense of love and sadness while reading. I don't have any suggestions for you because I like it just the way it is! Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the great work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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In affiliation with The Royal Court  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry. I'm not an expert, but I hope you find my opinion useful. The title is interesting, so I wanted to see what you had to say about funerals. The free verse form works well here and you did a great job. My only suggestion is the title. The poem doesn't seem to be related to funerals, just describing the possibilities of what may happen after death. The somber mood fits this poem. I felt a sense of sadness and uncertainty as I read it. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Be Punctual!  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I chose this item to review because I'm partial poetry and the title intrigued me. Tardiness is a pet peeve of mine. I like poems centered on ordinary things and this fits the bill. It's nice to see something different and I enjoyed reading it. The playful mood suits it well. It doesn't sound like your scolding the tardy reader, but giving them a reminder. The rhythm and rhymes are nicely done.
Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Trail of Darkness  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I chose this item to review because I'm partial to poetry and the title intrigued me. I'm not an expert, but I hope you find my opinion useful.
I really enjoyed reading this blitz poem. You nailed the form! When reading this out loud, your powerful words packed quite a punch. You did an excellent job of following the path from light to dark. I especially like the last two lines. They're so simple, but say so much.
Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep up the good work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Butter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came across this cute little poem in "Poem Forms: Table of Contents" 
I've never heard of the Brevee form so I decided to learn more. (Plus, how can a person resist a subject such as butter?!) I like that you include a dropnote with an explanation of the form and a link to learn more information. (Which I did follow.) It seems that you followed the format perfectly. Overall, you've created a charming poem. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of 3 am  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I'm partial to poetry. The titled intrigued me because I'm often awake at that time, but not for work. I enjoyed this free verse poem. It gives the reader an inside look at the life of someone that is probably overlooked until an emergency arises. I think the repeating line in each stanza works very well. In the second stanza, the second and third lines end with rhymes, which read very smoothly. The problem was that I was expecting more end rhymes and felt a little disappointed when there were none. But that's a small thing and probably more of a personal preference. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling issues. Overall, you've painted a clear picture of someone that works behind the scenes in day to day life. Keep up the great job!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I chose this piece to review because I have a fondness for poetry. The title and description were interesting enough to draw me inside for more. I enjoyed this poem very much. The mood is formal which suits the subject well. You've done a good job of setting the scene and letting the reader get an inside look of the mind of the artist. It's interesting that the piano is oversized in his home. It shows how much the artist values his work. I think the last stanza is my favorite because it ties everything together. Overall, you've created a lovely image. Thank you for sharing this and keep up the good work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of A Pagan Prayer  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I came across this while searching for non-Christian items. I love poetry and prose, so I thought it would be a good fit. I enjoyed it very much, so I hope this review is helpful. These are only my personal opinions and I am in far from a professional.

The tone is both formal and thoughtful and suits the content perfectly. You've set a somber and loving mood as you describe a personal moment. The imagery is wonderful. The similes and metaphors are used to help the reader see a clear picture of what is happening. I can feel the emotion in the actions. I didn't see any spelling errors to distract the reader from the spiritual journey. I would suggest using the word against instead of from in the second sentence, but that's a small thing. Each verse smoothly transitions into the next while reading. I particularly like how you evoke the sense of smell to enhance this piece. It's often overlooked, but can be a powerful way to create the right mood and set the stage, so to speak. I'm assuming this prose is nonfiction because of the waves of love and that shine through the writing. You take the reader through several stages of emotion- fear, determination, hope, and finally peace, in a short amount of time. The resulting outcome is a well written, charming piece. You've done a great job! Keep up the good work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Runes  
In affiliation with The Royal Court  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw this piece featured in the Poetry Newsletter and just had to read it. How could I pass up a poem about poems?! I'm glad I did too because I adore it. I can't believe the number of different forms you managed to include. Everything goes together seamlessly. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and keep up the awesome work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to WdC!
I came across your portfolio in "Read a Newbie". I chose this piece to review because of the topic. I'm familiar with Borderline Personality Disorder. As a teenager, I was misdiagnosed with it. It took a couple of years to figure out that I actually have Bipolar Disorder 1. Once I found the proper medication, life finally began to seem "normal" to me. The time between the two diagnoses was very confusing, but my parents and I tried to educate ourselves to understand BPD as much as possible.
This essay is very informative and provides the reader with facts that are often overlooked or misunderstood. The examples given are relevant and help support those facts. I didn't notice any issues with grammar or punctuation. Overall, you've written a well-structured essay that hopefully helps someone understand this illness better. Keep up the great work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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In affiliation with The Royal Court  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this page through a newsfeed post by Runoffscribe.
I really like how you have everything laid out in organized sections. It's easy to get a glimpse into your world. The WDC Celebrity Author and Highlighted Newbie Author sections are a wonderful idea. It's great to see us supporting each other! As soon as I'm finished reading some of your suggested items, I will head over to their portfolios too. Thank you for everything you do here on WDC and keep up the good work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of How Could You?  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem struck a chord deep inside of me because I can identify. You've managed to put words to feelings that I didn't understand at the time. (Although I have plenty of words now!) You've done a great job of giving a voice to women in the same situation. I hope this wasn't from a personal experience, but if so, you have come a long way!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Sum Haiku  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I chose this particular piece to review because not only do I love poetry, but Oriental forms are my favorite. Some would say that composing a proper haiku is quite easy, but I know it can be challenging at times. I appreciate the end rhyme on each line, that's not an easy feat when you're working with syllable restrictions! Overall, you've done a great job creating a witty little poem. Keep up the great work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of SYMBOLISM  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I chose this piece to review not only because I love poetry, but I also wanted to see the Terza Rima form. I haven't tried it myself yet, so I was curious. It appears you followed the form exactly. Each line reads smoothly and flows nicely into the next. You did an excellent job showing the reader how the eagle is a symbol. My favorite line is the very last one. Keep up the wonderful work!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of A Gourd No More  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I chose this piece to review because I liked the title. It's both cute and descriptive, hinting at the story without giving it away. I don't think I've ever written dialog only, but you certainly seemed to nail it. The conversation flowed well and came across natural. I really like the way Sam described his transformation.

My favorite part: "There's no buts about it. Would you rather rot as a blank canvas? Be unceremoniously plopped into a curbside garbage can? Why not dream about becoming the greatest you'll ever be?"

You did a great job and certainly deserved the Honorable Mention, keep up the good work!

Created by Shaye Lorraine


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